Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误，如“preparing lesson”应为“preparing lessons”，且句子结构略显简单。建议注意复数形式和句子多样性，避免重复表达。

Example: I am currently working as a primary school teacher. My responsibilities include preparing lessons, teaching Chinese subjects, and assisting students with their studies. I really enjoy my job because it allows me to make a positive impact on young learners.

Suggestion: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“Shenzhen is a very famous big cities”应为“Shenzhen is a very famous big city”。建议注意主谓一致和句子流畅性，同时避免无关信息，保持回答简洁。

Example: I work at a primary school located in Shenzhen, which is a large and well-known city. The city has a convenient transport network and many supermarkets, making it comfortable to live and move around.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子，如“When I am struggling.”是片段句，且“which made my job very very”不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Example: Yes, I think it is a wonderful place to work because the environment is positive and supportive. When I face difficulties, my colleagues are friendly and always offer helpful advice. Moreover, my lovely students make my job very rewarding.

Suggestion: 回答表达清晰，但“relationship... is very simple”用词不当，建议用“close”或“good”替代“simple”。此外，“help”应为“helps”，注意主谓一致。

Example: Absolutely. I really like the place where I work because the relationships between my colleagues and students are very friendly and close. This creates a comfortable environment that helps me feel relaxed and motivated while working at school.

Suggestion: 回答内容丰富且结构合理，但“1st”口语中较少使用，建议用“firstly”或“first”。“more different”表达重复，建议用“different”或“more diverse”。

Example: Well, I do have some plans for the future. Firstly, I hope to improve my teaching skills. Teaching methods are always evolving, and I feel I have much to learn. Therefore, I want to try different teaching approaches to enhance my effectiveness.

× I'm working now as a primary school teacher and my job involves preparing lesson, teaching Chinese subjects and helping students with their studies.

✓ I'm working now as a primary school teacher and my job involves preparing lessons, teaching Chinese subjects and helping students with their studies.

lesson是可数名词，表示“课程”，这里应使用复数形式lessons，因为工作内容通常包括多个课程的准备。

× In Shenzhen is a very famous big cities with the convenient transport network and there are also many supermarkets, so it's very comfortable to walk in that city.

✓ Shenzhen is a very famous big city with a convenient transport network and there are also many supermarkets, so it's very comfortable to walk in that city.

句子主语应为单数形式city，而不是复数cities；此外，there be结构使用不当，应直接说Shenzhen is。

× When I am struggling. My colleagues all friendly and give me a lot of advice.

✓ When I am struggling, my colleagues are all friendly and give me a lot of advice.

原句中两个句子断开且缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整，应合并为一个复合句并补充谓语动词are。

× Besides, my students are lovely and which made my job very very.

✓ Besides, my students are lovely and they make my job very enjoyable.

which用法错误，指代不明确，应使用they指代students；此外，句子不完整，缺少形容词描述job，补充enjoyable使句意完整。

× This creates a comfortable environment that help me feel relaxed and motivated while working at school.

✓ This creates a comfortable environment that helps me feel relaxed and motivated while working at school.

主语environment为单数，谓语动词help应加-s，保持主谓一致。