Work— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you work or are you a student?
Candidate
I currently work as an engineer in mining industry. I choose this career because it is currently late to my bachelor degree in engineering. My main responsibility is to ensure safety during mining operation.
Examiner
Where do you work?>
Candidate
Although my company has an office in Bangkok, my team and I often travel to different parts of Thailand because our main job involves working on mining sites. This allow us to experience various new environments and challenges.
Examiner
Is it a good place to work?
Candidate
Yes, it is the organization provide a professional atmosphere with supportive employers and friendly colleagues. However, the workload can sometimes be quite heavy which made it hard to maintain a good world like balance.
Examiner
Would you like the place where you work?
Candidate
I enjoy working at my current workplace, but I don't plan to stay here much longer because I want to change my career. I am now planning to study abroad in a new field related to the environment, which I find very interesting.
Examiner
What are your future work plans?
Candidate
My current goal is to own a researching business because I am passionate about protecting the environment. To achieve this, I plan to study abroad to gain more knowledge and skills, which will help me find better opportunities in the future.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you work or are you a student?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ภาษาอังกฤษที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น และควรแก้ไขข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ เช่น การใช้คำว่า "late to my bachelor degree" ที่ไม่ถูกต้อง นอกจากนี้ควรตอบให้กระชับและชัดเจน โดยเริ่มจากประโยคหลักที่ตอบคำถามโดยตรง และเสริมรายละเอียดที่เกี่ยวข้องอย่างเหมาะสม
Example: I currently work as a mining engineer because I have a bachelor's degree in engineering. My main responsibility is to ensure safety during mining operations.
Where do you work?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณดีในแง่ของการให้รายละเอียดเพิ่มเติม แต่ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์ เช่น "This allow" ควรเป็น "This allows" และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลากหลายมากขึ้น
Example: My company has an office in Bangkok, but my team and I often travel to various mining sites across Thailand. This allows us to face new environments and challenges regularly.
Is it a good place to work?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และการใช้คำ เช่น "it is the organization provide" ควรเป็น "the organization provides" และ "world like balance" ควรเป็น "work-life balance" นอกจากนี้ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อเชื่อมประโยคให้ลื่นไหลและชัดเจน
Example: Yes, the organization provides a professional atmosphere with supportive employers and friendly colleagues. However, the workload can sometimes be quite heavy, which makes it difficult to maintain a good work-life balance.
Would you like the place where you work?
Score: 80.0Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณดีและชัดเจน แต่สามารถเพิ่มคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคลื่นไหลมากขึ้น และใช้คำศัพท์ที่หลากหลายเพื่อแสดงความสามารถทางภาษา
Example: I enjoy working at my current workplace; however, I don't plan to stay here much longer because I want to change my career. Currently, I am planning to study abroad in a new field related to the environment, which I find very interesting.
What are your future work plans?
Score: 85.0Suggestion: คำตอบของคุณดีมากแล้ว แต่สามารถเพิ่มคำเชื่อมและคำศัพท์ที่หลากหลายเพื่อทำให้คำตอบดูเป็นธรรมชาติและน่าสนใจยิ่งขึ้น
Example: My current goal is to own a research business because I am passionate about protecting the environment. Therefore, I plan to study abroad to gain more knowledge and skills, which will help me find better opportunities in the future.
Grammar
× I currently work as an engineer in mining industry.
✓ I currently work as an engineer in the mining industry.
The phrase 'mining industry' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific industry known to both speaker and listener.
× I choose this career because it is currently late to my bachelor degree in engineering.
✓ I chose this career because it was already late to complete my bachelor degree in engineering.
The verb 'choose' should be in the past tense 'chose' to match the past action. Also, the sentence structure was unclear; 'it is currently late to my bachelor degree' is incorrect and was corrected to express the intended meaning.
× This allow us to experience various new environments and challenges.
✓ This allows us to experience various new environments and challenges.
The subject 'This' is singular, so the verb should be 'allows' to agree in number.
× Yes, it is the organization provide a professional atmosphere with supportive employers and friendly colleagues.
✓ Yes, the organization provides a professional atmosphere with supportive employers and friendly colleagues.
The original sentence has incorrect structure; 'it is the organization provide' is ungrammatical. The corrected sentence removes 'it is' and uses the singular verb 'provides' to agree with 'organization'.
× However, the workload can sometimes be quite heavy which made it hard to maintain a good world like balance.
✓ However, the workload can sometimes be quite heavy, which makes it hard to maintain a good work-life balance.
The verb 'made' is past tense but the modal 'can' indicates present/future possibility, so 'makes' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'world like balance' is a typo and corrected to 'work-life balance'.
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