Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy and sentence structure. Use the present continuous tense correctly and include articles where necessary. Also, avoid redundancy by combining ideas smoothly.

Example: I am currently studying for a Bachelor's degree in Architecture at Ozzard University, and I am in my third semester. I am not working at the moment.

Suggestion: Use correct verb forms and prepositions. Include articles and improve sentence clarity by adding linking words if needed.

Example: I am working at a construction site located in Tehran.

Suggestion: Use appropriate expressions and complete sentences. Replace incorrect phrases with natural ones and provide reasons or examples to support your answer.

Example: Yes, it is a great place to work because I gain a lot of practical experience.

Suggestion: Expand your answer with reasons or examples to make it more informative and natural. Avoid short, vague responses.

Example: Yes, I like the place where I work because the environment is friendly and I learn new skills every day.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use correct prepositions and articles, and connect ideas logically with linking words.

Example: In the future, I plan to pursue a Master's degree in Architecture at a university in the United Arab Emirates and work in architectural companies.

× I was studying and the bachelor of the Architecture at Ozzard University.

✓ I am studying for the Bachelor of Architecture at Ozzard University.

The sentence refers to the current situation, so present tense 'am studying' is appropriate instead of past tense 'was studying'. Also, 'the bachelor of the Architecture' is incorrect; it should be 'the Bachelor of Architecture' as a degree name.

× I was studying and the bachelor of the Architecture at Ozzard University.

✓ I am studying for the Bachelor of Architecture at Ozzard University.

The original sentence lacks proper structure; 'and the bachelor of the Architecture' is not a complete phrase. The corrected sentence properly connects the action and the degree being pursued.

× It's my third semester and not working yet.

✓ It is my third semester, and I am not working yet.

The sentence is about the current state, so present tense 'am not working' is needed. Also, the subject 'I' is missing before 'not working'.

× I'm working at the construction site that located in Tehran.

✓ I'm working at the construction site that is located in Tehran.

The relative clause requires the verb 'is' to be present for correct present tense usage: 'that is located'.

× Yes, it's a fully of experience.

✓ Yes, it's full of experience.

The phrase 'a fully of experience' is incorrect; 'full of experience' is the correct expression to indicate something contains a lot of experience.

× I want to study the master of the architecture in United Arab Emirates and universities and working in a architectural companies.

✓ I want to study for a Master's degree in Architecture in the United Arab Emirates and work in architectural companies.

The phrase 'study the master of the architecture' is incorrect; it should be 'study for a Master's degree in Architecture'. Also, 'in United Arab Emirates and universities' is unclear; specifying 'in the United Arab Emirates' is correct. 'Working in a architectural companies' is incorrect; it should be 'work in architectural companies' without 'a' before plural 'companies'.