Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi về thì động từ và câu hơi dài. Bạn nên sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn cho công việc hiện tại và tránh lặp lại thông tin. Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Example: I'm currently working as a chemical engineer, where I design manufacturing processes. At the same time, I'm studying English to improve my communication skills for work here.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời tốt nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và sửa lỗi số nhiều (colleague -> colleagues). Hãy thêm các liên từ như 'and' hoặc 'which' để kết nối ý.

Example: I work in a manufacturing company, where I design processes. The office environment is very professional, and I enjoy social interactions with my colleagues.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có thể tự nhiên hơn bằng cách tránh dùng cấu trúc 'This I think' và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Example: I think it's a great place to work because the company provides a safe environment, and my team is very supportive. Moreover, I have learned a lot from them.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác ('Test that' không đúng). Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp.

Example: I really like the place where I work because the people are friendly and supportive, and the environment is safe and professional. Also, I have many opportunities to learn from experienced colleagues.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ví dụ, 'possibly move to a bigger company' thay vì 'possibly more to bigger company'.

Example: My future plan is to gain more experience as a chemical engineer and possibly move to a bigger company. Additionally, I want to take part in training courses to develop my professional skills.

× My job mainly involved designing processes for manufacturing, but at the moment I'm studying English to improve my skills for working in this country.

✓ My job mainly involves designing processes for manufacturing, but at the moment I'm studying English to improve my skills for working in this country.

The sentence describes a current job, so the verb should be in the present tense 'involves' instead of past tense 'involved'. Using present tense correctly reflects ongoing actions or states.

× I like the social interactions with my colleague.

✓ I like the social interactions with my colleagues.

The word 'colleague' is singular, but 'interactions' implies multiple people. Therefore, 'colleagues' (plural) is appropriate to match the plural context.

× This I think is a great place to work because the company provides a safe working environment and my team is very supportive.

✓ I think this is a great place to work because the company provides a safe working environment and my team is very supportive.

The phrase 'This I think' is awkward and incorrect in word order. The correct order is 'I think this' to properly express the opinion.

× Test that I truly like the place where I work because the people they are friendly and supportive and the environment is safe and professional.

✓ I truly like the place where I work because the people are friendly and supportive and the environment is safe and professional.

The word 'Test' is incorrect and unnecessary. Also, 'the people they are' is redundant; 'the people are' is correct. Removing 'Test' and 'they' corrects the sentence.

× My future plan is to gain more experience as a chemical engineer and possibly more to bigger company.

✓ My future plan is to gain more experience as a chemical engineer and possibly move to a bigger company.

The phrase 'more to bigger company' is incorrect. The verb 'move' is needed to indicate changing jobs, and the article 'a' is required before 'bigger company'.