Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "I really might like my job." Try to use more natural expressions and correct verb forms. Also, keep your answer concise and directly address the question with a clear topic sentence.

Example: I finished my studies eleven years ago, and since 2014, I have been working for a private company. I really enjoy my job because it challenges me and helps me grow professionally.

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. For example, say "I am the leader of a small team with two members," and use parallel verb forms in your responsibilities. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Example: I work in an IT-based company where I am the leader of a small team with two members. My responsibilities include supporting customers, taking care of their needs, and doing my best to increase their satisfaction.

Suggestion: Your answer is positive but contains filler words like "uh" and some grammatical errors, such as missing articles. Try to avoid fillers, use articles correctly, and connect your ideas smoothly with linking words.

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because we have a supportive manager and kind colleagues. Moreover, all team members are friendly, and we work together to fulfill our responsibilities. Additionally, the company offers nice facilities such as free parking and small stores.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats previous points and has some awkward phrasing like "a myriad of facilities." Try to avoid repetition by adding new details or examples. Also, use more natural expressions and correct article usage.

Example: Yes, I really like my workplace because of the friendly colleagues and supportive manager. Besides, the facilities, such as free parking, self-service lunch, and small shops, make the work environment comfortable and convenient.

Suggestion: Your answer shows your intentions but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use parallel structures and correct verb forms, and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Example: I want to stay in my current job because I enjoy it. To improve my skills and abilities, I plan to take some online classes and watch related courses.

× I really might like my job.

✓ I really like my job.

The modal verb 'might' is incorrectly used here to express liking the job. 'Might' indicates possibility or uncertainty, but the speaker intends to express a definite liking. Therefore, 'might' should be removed to correctly convey the meaning.

× I work in an IT based company.

✓ I work in an IT-based company.

The phrase 'IT based' should be hyphenated as 'IT-based' because it is a compound adjective describing the company. Hyphenation clarifies that the company is based on IT.

× I'm leader of a little team which has two members and my responsibilities are supporting customers, take care of them and doing our best to increase their satisfaction.

✓ I'm the leader of a small team which has two members, and my responsibilities are supporting customers, taking care of them, and doing our best to increase their satisfaction.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'leader' to specify the position. 'Little' is better replaced with 'small' when referring to team size. Also, parallel structure requires gerunds ('taking care', 'doing') to match 'supporting' in the list of responsibilities.

× We have supportive manager, kind colleagues and all team members are friendly and we all, uh, work together to do our job and responsibilities.

✓ We have a supportive manager, kind colleagues, and all team members are friendly, and we all work together to do our jobs and fulfill our responsibilities.

The singular countable noun 'manager' requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, 'job' and 'responsibilities' should be plural to match the plural subject 'we'. Added commas improve sentence clarity.

× And uh, there are a lot of uh, nice facilities such as free parking and little stores.

✓ And, uh, there are a lot of nice facilities such as free parking and small stores.

'Little' is generally used with uncountable nouns to indicate small amount, but 'stores' is countable, so 'small' is the correct adjective to describe size.

× Yes, I really like it. As I mentioned before, there are a lot of nice colleagues, supportive manager and a myriad of facilities such as free parking, self-service for lunch, little stores for buying something.

✓ Yes, I really like it. As I mentioned before, there are a lot of nice colleagues, a supportive manager, and a myriad of facilities such as free parking, self-service for lunch, and small stores for buying things.

The singular countable noun 'manager' requires the indefinite article 'a'. 'Little' should be replaced with 'small' to describe 'stores'. Also, 'something' is vague; 'things' is more appropriate here. Added 'and' before the last item in the list for correct conjunction.

× I want to stay in my job because I like it and I try to improve my skills, improve my abilities and I plan to go to some classes, some online classes and watching that courses.

✓ I want to stay in my job because I like it, and I try to improve my skills and abilities. I plan to go to some classes, some online classes, and watch those courses.

After 'plan to', the base form of the verb should be used ('watch'), not the '-ing' form ('watching'). Also, 'that courses' is incorrect; it should be 'those courses' to agree in number and demonstrative pronoun usage. Added commas and conjunctions for clarity and correct sentence structure.