Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors and confusing phrases. Try to give a clear and direct response about your current status as a student, mentioning the school and course you are attending. Avoid unnecessary or incorrect words and keep your sentences simple and coherent.

Example: I am currently a student preparing for my O levels at Vice Institute. Previously, I studied at Saint Paul School.

Suggestion: Your answer is difficult to understand due to incorrect word choices and grammar. Please clearly state your job or internship position and the company name. Use simple and correct sentences to describe your work experience.

Example: I worked as an accountant intern for one month at Life Battery Private Limited.

Suggestion: Your answer repeats the same idea and has grammatical mistakes. Try to express your opinion clearly and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I think it is a good place to work because the environment is friendly and the staff are supportive. If I get a chance, I would like to work there full time.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Please clearly state whether you like your workplace and mention specific benefits you enjoy. Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary.

Example: Yes, I like the place where I work because the company provides many benefits, such as free lunch and tea breaks.

Suggestion: Your answer has tense errors and repetition. Please use the correct tense to talk about your future plans and explain your dream clearly. Avoid repeating words unnecessarily.

Example: In the future, I want to become a corporate lawyer and work in a multinational company. I have dreamed of being a lawyer since I was a child.

× I am a student of all levels.

✓ I am a student at all levels.

The phrase 'student of all levels' is awkward; 'student at all levels' is more appropriate to indicate studying at various levels.

× I am currently doing my O levels from Vice restitute.

✓ I am currently doing my O levels at Vice Institute.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect here; 'at' is used to indicate the place where one studies. Also, 'Vice restitute' seems a typo; corrected to 'Vice Institute'.

× I started my olivals from Saint Paul school but recently I lived at a student doing my old preftly from vice institute.

✓ I started my O levels at Saint Paul School but recently I have been a student doing my O levels at Vice Institute.

The sentence has multiple errors: 'olivals' and 'old preftly' are incorrect words, corrected to 'O levels'. 'Lived at a student' is incorrect; corrected to 'have been a student'. Also, 'from' changed to 'at' for the institution.

× I worth IT company accountant.

✓ I work as an accountant in an IT company.

'Worth' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'work'. The sentence structure is corrected to properly express the occupation.

× In that company I used to do buddhi in an accountant and I do internship for one month there at life battery private limited.

✓ In that company, I used to do bookkeeping as an accountant and I did an internship for one month at Life Battery Private Limited.

'Buddhi' is likely a misspelling of 'bookkeeping'. 'Do internship' should be 'did an internship' to indicate past action. Preposition 'at' is correct for the company name.

× Yes definitely as I spend my one month there.

✓ Yes, definitely, as I spent one month there.

'Spend my one month' is awkward; 'spent one month' is correct past tense and natural phrasing.

× In my opinion it is very good place to work for a full time job person and if I there a chance to work it, I will definitely going to work at that place because it is a good place to work.

✓ In my opinion, it is a very good place to work for a full-time employee and if I get a chance to work there, I will definitely work at that place because it is a good place to work.

Missing articles 'a' before 'very good place'. 'Full time job person' corrected to 'full-time employee'. 'If I there a chance to work it' is incorrect; corrected to 'if I get a chance to work there'. 'Will definitely going to work' corrected to 'will definitely work'.

× Yes I like the place where I work is is the company offers too many benefits like the company offer lunch and and tea breath that on date them from the company's account.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work. The company offers many benefits like lunch and tea breaks that are paid for from the company's account.

Sentence was run-on and confusing. Corrected for clarity and grammar. 'Is is' removed. 'Too many' changed to 'many' for positive statement. 'Tea breath' corrected to 'tea breaks'. 'On date them' corrected to 'are paid for'.

× In future, I used to be a lawyer and I wanted to work as a corporate lawyer in multinational company as as I dream to be a lawyer when I was a kid.

✓ In the future, I want to be a lawyer and I want to work as a corporate lawyer in a multinational company as I have dreamed of being a lawyer since I was a kid.

'Used to be' and 'wanted' are past tense and incorrect here; 'want to be' expresses future intention. 'As as' is a typo. 'Dream' corrected to 'have dreamed' to indicate ongoing desire.