Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 你的回答有點不自然，句子結構可以更完整，並且避免使用簡短的句子。建議你直接回答問題，然後用一兩句話說明你的現況，讓回答更流暢且有邏輯。

Example: I am currently neither working nor studying. I recently graduated and am now preparing to apply for a PhD program.

Suggestion: 回答中有語法錯誤，且句子不夠流暢。建議你直接回答問題，並用過去式描述你之前的工作經驗，避免使用連接詞 'And' 開頭。

Example: I am not working at the moment, but I used to work as a teaching assistant when I was a graduate student.

Suggestion: 回答中有語法錯誤和用詞不當，且細節不夠具體。建議你使用正確的冠詞和數字詞，並且提供更具體的理由說明為什麼那裡是個好地方。

Example: Yes, it was a good place to work because I had two excellent supervisors: one was my German teacher and the other was an English bilingual language teacher. They were both very supportive and kind to me.

Suggestion: 回答有點冗長且語法不夠自然。建議你簡潔明確地表達喜歡的原因，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

Example: Yes, I liked working there because I could work from home and didn't have to go to school. I only needed to submit documents requested by the professor.

Suggestion: 回答中有語法錯誤和重複詞語，且句子開頭不宜用 'And'。建議你用更正式的語句表達未來計劃，並避免重複。

Example: I am not planning to work yet because I want to pursue a PhD program first. After that, I would like to apply for a position as an assistant professor at a university in Taiwan.

× I was a student a few months ago, but I've graduated and now preparing for PhD admission.

✓ I was a student a few months ago, but I've graduated and am now preparing for PhD admission.

The sentence is missing the auxiliary verb 'am' before 'now preparing' to form the present continuous tense correctly. In English, the present continuous requires the verb 'to be' plus the '-ing' form of the verb. So, 'now preparing' should be 'am now preparing'. This makes the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× And currently not working, but I was a student in the Graduate School and I work as a TA teaching assistant at that time.

✓ I am currently not working, but I was a student in the Graduate School and worked as a TA teaching assistant at that time.

The original sentence lacks a subject in the first clause ('And currently not working'). Also, the verb tense in 'I work as a TA teaching assistant at that time' is incorrect because 'at that time' refers to the past, so past tense 'worked' should be used. The corrected sentence adds the subject 'I am' and changes 'work' to 'worked' to match the past time reference.

× 1 is my German teacher and 1 is a English bilingual language teachers.

✓ One is my German teacher and one is an English bilingual language teacher.

The original sentence uses the numeral '1' instead of the word 'one' and mismatches singular and plural forms. '1 is a English bilingual language teachers' is incorrect because 'a' requires singular noun 'teacher', not plural 'teachers'. Also, 'English' requires the article 'an' before it because it starts with a vowel sound. The corrected sentence uses 'one' spelled out, singular 'teacher', and the correct article 'an'.

× Both of them are really nice to me.

✓ Both of them are really nice to me.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× Yes I do because I worked in my home.

✓ Yes, I do because I work from home.

The phrase 'worked in my home' is awkward and uses past tense 'worked' which conflicts with the present tense 'I do'. The correct expression is 'work from home' to indicate current work location. Also, a comma is added after 'Yes' for correct punctuation.

× I don't need to go to school, but I only have to submit the documents that the professor asked me to handle.

✓ I don't need to go to school, but I only have to submit the documents that the professor asked me to handle.

This sentence is grammatically correct and does not require correction.

× And still not planning to work yet because I want to study for the PhD program.

✓ I am still not planning to work yet because I want to study for the PhD program.

The original sentence lacks a subject and auxiliary verb in the first clause. Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal and unnecessary here. Adding 'I am' clarifies the subject and verb, making the sentence grammatically correct.

× After that I would like to apply for a job, a position as a assistant professor in the Taiwanese Taiwanese university.

✓ After that, I would like to apply for a job, a position as an assistant professor at a Taiwanese university.

The article 'a' before 'assistant professor' is incorrect because 'assistant' starts with a vowel sound, so 'an' is needed. Also, 'Taiwanese Taiwanese university' is repetitive; one 'Taiwanese' is enough. The preposition 'in' is better replaced with 'at' when referring to a position at a university. Adding a comma after 'After that' improves readability.