Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a clear and concise answer directly addressing the question first, then add specific details. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'yeah' to sound more natural and confident. Also, clarify your roles and projects with more precise language.

Example: I am currently a student, but I also work as a programmer. For example, I take on various projects, including developing security software and other applications.

Suggestion: Focus on answering the question directly by stating your work location. Avoid unnecessary details about your daily routine unless relevant. Use clear and grammatically correct sentences without filler words.

Example: I usually work from home after I finish my school classes. I complete my programming projects there.

Suggestion: Provide a clear opinion about your workplace and support it with reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and filler words. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, working from home is good for me because it is comfortable and flexible. However, it might not suit everyone depending on their preferences.

Suggestion: Answer the question directly and organize your ideas clearly. Use linking words to connect your preferences and explain why you like these places. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: I prefer working in coffee shops or libraries because they provide a quiet and inspiring environment. However, I also work from home sometimes for convenience.

Suggestion: Give a clear and structured answer by outlining your plans step by step. Avoid filler words and use linking words to make your response coherent and logical.

Example: First, I plan to obtain my IELTS certificate. Then, I intend to move to the USA and work for a large company there or in Canada.

× Uh, in real life, at first I'm a student, but also I'm a programmer and yeah, I take many different uh projects in programming.

✓ Uh, in real life, at first I'm a student, but also I'm a programmer and yeah, I take on many different uh projects in programming.

The verb 'take' in this context requires the preposition 'on' to correctly express involvement in projects. Adding 'on' clarifies the meaning and corrects the verb usage.

× For example with security we have developing or other fields.

✓ For example, with security, we have development or other fields.

The phrase 'have developing' is incorrect; 'development' is the correct noun form here. Also, commas are added for clarity around the phrase 'with security'.

× after that I came back, come back home and do my tasks and, uh, project.

✓ after that I come back home and do my tasks and, uh, projects.

The sentence mixes past tense 'came back' with present tense 'do'. Since the context is habitual actions, present tense 'come back' is appropriate. Also, 'project' should be plural 'projects' to match 'tasks' and the context.

× Yeah, I am in programming basically, uh, we work in home usually, I said.

✓ Yeah, I am in programming basically, uh, we usually work at home, I said.

The correct preposition for being inside one's home is 'at home', not 'in home'. Also, adverb 'usually' is better placed before the verb for natural English word order.

× But uh, I work in home.

✓ But uh, I work at home.

The preposition 'at' is used with 'home' to indicate location, not 'in'. 'Work at home' is the correct phrase.

× Usually I, I uh, prefer a coffee shop or uh, other working places like to a library and I usually work in library or coffee shop and usually in home.

✓ Usually I, I uh, prefer a coffee shop or uh, other working places like a library and I usually work in a library or coffee shop and usually at home.

The phrase 'like to a library' is incorrect; it should be 'like a library'. Also, 'in library' should be 'in a library' and 'in home' should be 'at home' to use correct articles and prepositions.

× At the first I have to say I have to get a IELTS certificate and after that I have a plan for moving to USA and after that, uh, I like to, uh, actually, umm, work in a big company in USA or Canada or other countries.

✓ First, I have to say I have to get an IELTS certificate and after that I have a plan to move to the USA and after that, uh, I would like to, uh, actually, umm, work in a big company in the USA or Canada or other countries.

'A IELTS' is incorrect because 'IELTS' starts with a vowel sound, so 'an' is needed. 'Moving to USA' should be 'move to the USA' with the definite article. Also, 'I like to' should be 'I would like to' to express future intention politely and correctly.