Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence stating current status, then briefly mention immediate plans (master's in economics) and reason (career goal). Use correct articles and verb forms, avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Example: I am currently an undergraduate student studying economics. Next year I plan to pursue a master’s degree in economics in Canada because I want to specialize in economic policy and improve my career prospects.

Suggestion: Answer directly and briefly: state that you are not working now, then add one specific future intention with a clear reason. Avoid awkward phrases like 'good package' — use 'a good salary' and correct word order.

Example: I am not working at the moment. In the future I hope to work as an economist in a reputable organization so I can earn a good salary and support my family’s needs.

Suggestion: Clarify which place you mean and give one or two specific reasons. Use correct tense and adjective forms (e.g. 'highly reputable', 'build'). Keep to two or three sentences and use a linking word for coherence.

Example: Yes. If I work at a highly reputable bank or a public institution, it would be a good place because the environment is diverse and colleagues are supportive. This would help me build my confidence and develop professional skills.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence answering the question, then list one or two specific aspects you would enjoy (e.g. teamwork, learning opportunities). Avoid unfinished sentences and redundant words like 'togetherness' without context.

Example: Yes, I would enjoy working there because I would learn a lot and collaborate with colleagues. For example, participating in team projects would improve my communication and teamwork skills.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, concise plan: state the job you want, the type of organization, and a specific career goal or reason. Use natural phrasing like 'reputable bank' and 'a good salary', avoid repetition.

Example: My future plan is to become an economist working at a reputable bank or research institute. I aim to specialize in macroeconomic analysis and achieve a stable income that improves my living standard.

× I am a student currently I am pursuing my bachelor's degree in economics.

✓ I am a student; currently I am pursuing my bachelor's degree in economics.

Two independent clauses are joined without proper punctuation or conjunction, causing a run-on sentence. Use a semicolon, period, or a conjunction with a comma to separate them. Suggestion: use a semicolon or split into two sentences.

× Now I plan to go abroad for my further study and I pers.

✓ Now I plan to go abroad for my further studies and I persevere.

Original ends with incomplete word 'pers.' and 'study' should be plural when talking about continuing education in general. Also 'persevere' fits only if intended; if they meant 'persist' or 'personally', clarify. Suggestion: complete abbreviations and use 'further studies' for academic context.

× I want to pursue my master degree in economics and become a economist in future so I plan to go Canada and fulfill my.

✓ I want to pursue my master's degree in economics and become an economist in the future, so I plan to go to Canada and fulfill my goals.

Missing possessive apostrophe in 'master's', incorrect article 'a economist' should be 'an economist' before a vowel sound, missing 'the' in 'in the future', missing preposition 'to' before a place, and sentence ends incomplete. Suggestion: use possessive form for degrees, use 'an' before vowel sounds, include 'the' for time expressions, and add the missing object.

× As I earlier mentioned, I'm not working at the moment.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, I'm not working at the moment.

Word order 'As I earlier mentioned' is non-idiomatic in English. Place adverb 'earlier' after the verb or at end. Suggestion: use 'As I mentioned earlier' or 'As I said earlier'.

× In future, I would like to become an economist and earn good package to improve my standard of living lifestyle because it is a crucial for my daily needs.

✓ In the future, I would like to become an economist and earn a good salary package to improve my standard of living because it is crucial for my daily needs.

Missing article 'the' in 'In the future', 'package' needs a modifier 'salary' to be clear, 'a good package' requires article 'a', redundant 'standard of living lifestyle' — use one phrase, and 'a crucial' should be 'crucial' without 'a'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles, remove redundancy, and use clear collocations like 'salary package' and 'standard of living'.

× Of course, in future when I got the opportunity to become an economist in high reputated bank and other public department, definitely it is a diverse environment and supportive staff which enhance my personality and built my confidence.

✓ Of course, in the future when I get the opportunity to become an economist in a highly reputed bank or another public department, it will definitely be a diverse environment with supportive staff that will enhance my personality and build my confidence.

Use 'in the future' (article), 'when I get' (future tense) instead of 'got' (past), 'high reputated' is incorrect adjective form — use 'highly reputed' or 'well-reputed', need article 'a' before 'bank', 'or' fits better than 'and' for alternatives, 'it will be' matches future, 'supportive staff that will enhance' fixes relative clause and verb forms 'enhance' and 'built' should be 'enhance' and 'build' with future 'will'. Suggestion: match tense consistently, use correct adjective/adverb forms, and correct relative clause verbs.

× Of course, I love to the place when I work in future because I learn many things which is crucial for my development and learning various things like cooperation and teamwork, togetherness.

✓ Of course, I will love the place where I work in the future because I will learn many things that are crucial for my development, such as cooperation, teamwork, and togetherness.

Incorrect use of 'to the place' and 'when I work' — use 'love the place where I work'. Tense should be future 'will love' and 'will learn'. 'Which is' should agree with plural 'things' so use 'that are'. List items need commas and parallel structure. Suggestion: use 'where' for location clauses, match verb tenses, and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× So definitely I like the place when I.

✓ So definitely I will like the place when I work there.

Sentence is incomplete and missing verb and object. Add 'work there' to complete the idea and use future tense 'will like'. Suggestion: always complete clauses with subjects and verbs and ensure tense consistency.

× Well, I earlier mentioned I like to work as an economist in future in reputed bank as well as I own good package of salary which improves my lifestyle and living standard.

✓ Well, I mentioned earlier that I would like to work as an economist in the future in a reputed bank and earn a good salary package that would improve my lifestyle and standard of living.

Place 'earlier' after 'mentioned' for idiomatic order. Use conditional/future 'would like' for plans, include articles 'the' and 'a' for 'in the future' and 'a reputed bank', 'own good package of salary' is incorrect — use 'earn a good salary package', and 'living standard' should be 'standard of living'. Suggestion: correct word order, use appropriate modal verbs for plans, and use standard collocations.