Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce filler words (uh, but) and correct small grammar errors (a real estate company; interiors and exteriors).

Example: I am an architect working for a real estate company. I design both interiors and exteriors for residential and commercial buildings, and I often collaborate with engineers and clients to finalize plans. Although the job can be stressful at times, I enjoy its creative aspects.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer then add a specific detail about your role or the location. Use correct grammar and linking words, avoid unfinished sentences. Replace informal phrases like "under the pump" with clearer expressions.

Example: I work for a real estate company in Gulshan. I mainly specialise in interior design, preparing detailed layouts and meeting clients to discuss their requirements, which can sometimes be quite stressful.

Suggestion: Answer directly and avoid repeating. Use linking words to structure supporting details and give a concrete example of collaboration. Complete your final thought; avoid trailing off.

Example: Yes, it's a good place to work. My colleagues are supportive, and we collaborate regularly — for example, during weekly design meetings we share ideas and combine feedback to produce the best solution for each project.

Suggestion: Be concise and specific. Start with a clear statement of your opinion, then give two precise reasons using linking words. Correct small errors (well-ventilated; annual instead of yearly if preferred) and remove redundant phrases.

Example: Yes, I like working there. The office is well ventilated and comfortable, and the HR team is organised — they provide annual leave and bonuses, which makes it a pleasant workplace.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, coherent plan with linking words and fewer filler words. State your long-term goal, then outline specific steps you are taking now and a brief timeline or condition. Fix grammar (open an office; gather experience).

Example: In the long term I plan to start my own architecture firm. Right now I am gaining experience and learning business skills at my current job, and once I have enough clients and resources I will open my own office.

× I am currently working in an real estate company.

✓ I am currently working in a real estate company.

Use 'a' before words that begin with a consonant sound; 'real' begins with an R sound, so 'a' is correct. Original sentence already uses 'an' incorrectly; change 'an' to 'a'.

× My work involves designing exterior and interiors of many structures and buildings.

✓ My work involves designing exteriors and interiors of many structures and buildings.

When referring to both types, use plural forms 'exteriors' and 'interiors' to match 'many structures and buildings.' Make the adjectives into plural nouns because they refer to multiple elements.

× Uh, it is a very creative job as well as although it is a very creative job, but it has a bit of pressure also.

✓ It is a very creative job, but it also has a bit of pressure.

The original uses redundant conjunctions ('as well as although' and 'but') causing a structure error. Use a single contrasting conjunction 'but' and place 'also' before the verb phrase for natural word order.

× I work in a real estate company located in Gulshan.

✓ I work in a real estate company located in Gulshan.

Sentence is correct after earlier article correction. 'A real estate company' is the proper article use; no further change needed.

× My work involves designing interior exterior but my expertise are designing the interiors.

✓ My work involves designing interiors and exteriors, but my expertise is designing interiors.

Use parallel order 'interiors and exteriors' and plural nouns for both. Also subject-verb agreement: 'expertise' is a singular noun, so use 'is' rather than 'are'.

× We have to arrange meetings and we have to do the designs and it is a very stressful work.

✓ We have to arrange meetings and create the designs, and it is very stressful work.

Use a verb consistent with collocation: 'create the designs' is more natural than 'do the designs.' Also 'work' used as an uncountable noun does not need 'a' before it; remove 'a'.

× Sometimes I feel under the pump but.

✓ Sometimes I feel under the pump.

The trailing 'but' is incomplete and creates a fragment. Remove 'but' to make a complete sentence.

× Yes, the work environment is very enjoyable.

✓ Yes, the work environment is very enjoyable.

This sentence is correct: 'the work environment' is specific and correctly uses the definite article.

× My my colleagues are very helpful and we all together work in a collaborative environment.

✓ My colleagues are very helpful, and we all work together in a collaborative environment.

Remove duplicate 'My.' Place 'together' after 'work' for correct adverb placement: 'work together.' Add comma before coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× We put our ideas on the table, we bring our ideas to the table together and we discuss our ideas.

✓ We put our ideas on the table, bring them together, and discuss them.

Reduce repetition and use parallel verb forms. Use pronoun 'them' to avoid repeating 'our ideas.' Ensure parallel structure with base verbs: 'put, bring, and discuss.'

× Then eventually we come up with the best idea possible for any kind of.

✓ Then eventually we come up with the best possible idea for any kind of project.

Original ends abruptly ('any kind of'). Complete the noun phrase with 'project' for clarity and place 'possible' after 'best' or use 'best possible' as a combined modifier.

× I like the place where I work. It has a very well ventilated floor with a very organized HR management.

✓ I like the place where I work. It has a very well-ventilated floor and a very organized HR department.

Use hyphenated compound adjective 'well-ventilated.' 'HR management' is awkward; 'HR department' is more natural. Add article 'a' before 'very organized HR department.'

× They look after our needs and we also get yearly vacation and bonuses.

✓ They look after our needs, and we also get yearly vacations and bonuses.

Use plural 'vacations' or 'a yearly vacation' depending on meaning; plural fits better with 'bonuses.' Add comma before 'and' for readability.

× So it is a pretty good place to work with work in.

✓ So it is a pretty good place to work in.

Original repeats 'work' and ends with extra preposition phrase. Use 'a pretty good place to work in' or simply 'a pretty good place to work.' Remove redundancy.

× Currently, I am working as an architect, but my future plans include be, uh, opening my own business areas.

✓ Currently, I am working as an architect, but my future plans include opening my own business.

'Include' should be followed by a gerund ('opening'), not 'be.' Remove filler 'areas' which is vague; use 'business' or 'businesses.'

× I would like to be an entrepreneur.

✓ I would like to be an entrepreneur.

Sentence is correct: use 'an' before 'entrepreneur' because the word begins with a vowel sound.

× Currently, I am gathering all the knowledge and experiences that I can, uh, from my current job.

✓ Currently, I am gathering all the knowledge and experience that I can from my current job.

Use uncountable 'experience' for general sense rather than plural 'experiences.' Remove filler 'uh' and place 'from my current job' directly after phrase.

× When I'm ready, I will definitely open a office of my own.

✓ When I'm ready, I will definitely open an office of my own.

Use 'an' before 'office' because 'office' begins with a vowel sound. Also 'of my own' is correct possessive phrasing.