Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. 'I work as...'), use correct tense and grammar (e.g. 'I have been working here for two years'), and avoid repetition. Add one brief supporting detail about your role or why you like it, using a linking word.

Example: I work as a food service supervisor at a well-known restaurant in Saskatoon. I have been working there for two years, and this role gives me more responsibility and good opportunities for career growth.

Suggestion: Give a clear, accurate description and use specific vocabulary. Correct grammar (e.g. 'I work at Swadesh, an Indian restaurant that offers many vegetarian options'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect job duties, being precise about responsibilities.

Example: I work at Swadesh, an Indian restaurant that offers many vegetarian options. As a food service supervisor, I prepare and oversee meals and also train new staff, which helps me improve my leadership skills.

Suggestion: Answer directly then add one clear reason with correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and incomplete endings. Use a linking word (e.g. 'because' or 'which') and finish the thought (e.g. 'different customers').

Example: Yes, it's a great place to work because it helped me settle into the food industry when I first arrived in Saskatoon. It improved my English and taught me how to communicate and handle different customers.

Suggestion: Respond with a clear topic sentence about your feelings and then give one or two specific benefits. Correct grammar (e.g. 'I enjoy working there, which gives me...') and use linking words ('and','so') to make it coherent. Keep sentences concise and avoid incorrect words like 'walk' instead of 'work'.

Example: Yes, I enjoy working there because it boosts my communication skills and gives me confidence to interact with different clients. As a result, I have learned how to solve common customer service problems quickly.

Suggestion: Give a clear plan with correct verb forms and specific timeframes. Start with a topic sentence (e.g. 'I plan to open my own restaurant') and then explain concrete steps and a realistic timeline, using linking words ('so','therefore'). Avoid vague phrases like 'two or couple of years'.

Example: I plan to open my own restaurant in a few years, so I am gaining experience as a supervisor. I intend to work in the industry for two more years to build practical skills and save money before starting my business.

× I'm recently working at the food service supervisor in an eminent restaurant in Saskatoon and this role offers me more responsibility and various chances of growth in my career.

✓ I am recently working as the food service supervisor at a well-known restaurant in Saskatoon, and this role offers me more responsibility and various opportunities for growth in my career.

Use 'working as' for a job title (preposition and role), 'at' for location, 'well-known' is a more natural adjective, and 'opportunities' is the correct plural noun. 'Recently' fits better before 'working' but the continuous present 'am working' is acceptable for current employment. Also replace 'chances of growth' with 'opportunities for growth' for natural collocation.

× I started work here.

✓ I started working here.

Use 'started working' (verb + -ing) to describe when you began an ongoing activity. 'Started work' is possible but less natural in this context; the instruction set focuses on verb form errors, so change to 'started working' to match continuous employment.

× I'm working here since 2 years.

✓ I have been working here for two years.

Use present perfect continuous ('have been working') to describe an action that began in the past and continues to the present. Use 'for' with a period of time and write out numbers under ten as words in formal English: 'two years.'

× I'm working as a food service supervisor in Swadesh restaurant.

✓ I work as the food service supervisor at Swadesh Restaurant.

Simple present 'I work' or present continuous can both be acceptable; 'I work' is more natural for a job description. Use the article 'the' before a specific role, and 'at' with a restaurant name. Capitalize the restaurant name. This addresses preposition/article and tense clarity.

× It's an Indian restaurant giving a lot of options for the vegetarian and the known vegetarian.

✓ It's an Indian restaurant that offers many options for vegetarians and for those who prefer well-known vegetarian dishes.

Use 'that offers' to connect clause, 'many options' is natural, 'vegetarians' (plural) as category, and clarify 'known vegetarian' to 'those who prefer well-known vegetarian dishes.' This fixes adjective/noun usage and pluralization.

× My work involves my basic responsibility of preparing the nutrition, food for the people and training new Staffs give me a better opportunity.

✓ My basic responsibilities include preparing nutritious food for people and training new staff, which gives me valuable opportunities.

Reorder for clarity: 'responsibilities include' + gerund phrases. Use 'nutritious food' instead of 'preparing the nutrition, food', use 'staff' as an uncountable noun (not 'Staffs'), and combine clauses with a relative pronoun 'which' to show that training provides opportunities.

× It's a lovely place to be a part of.

✓ It's a lovely place to be part of.

Use 'be part of' (idiomatic) rather than 'be a part of'; both forms exist but 'be part of' is more concise. This is a minor structure refinement.

× It gives me the basic experience because I was an alien, uh, when I came in Saskatoon in the food industry.

✓ It gave me basic experience because I was unfamiliar with the food industry when I came to Saskatoon.

Use 'gave' if referring to past experience from starting the job; 'was unfamiliar' is a clearer expression than 'was an alien' (which is inappropriate here), use 'came to Saskatoon' for correct preposition, and 'in the food industry' should follow as the area of unfamiliarity. This fixes pronoun/reference and preposition usage and refines vocabulary.

× It was a great, uh, opportunity to learn the speaking and the language skills and how to handle and communicate with different.

✓ It was a great opportunity to improve my speaking and language skills and to learn how to handle and communicate with different customers.

Remove filler 'uh', use 'improve' for skills, 'speaking and language skills' is more natural, and complete the phrase 'communicate with different customers.' This fixes adjective/adverb usage and completes the sentence.

× I adore the place where I walk which give me opportunity to boost my communication skill and it gives me the confidence to interact with different clients and make me understand how to solve the basic problems while doing a customer service job.

✓ I adore the place where I work because it gives me the opportunity to improve my communication skills, builds my confidence to interact with different clients, and helps me understand how to solve basic problems while doing customer service.

Replace 'walk' with 'work' (word choice), use 'because' to connect reasons, 'gives me the opportunity' is the correct phrase, plural 'skills', 'builds my confidence' for smoother structure, and 'customer service' without 'a' fits the general concept. Fixes prepositions, verb forms, and word choice.

× Honestly, I always wanted to be a businesswoman and I want to open my own restaurant.

✓ Honestly, I have always wanted to be a businesswoman, and I want to open my own restaurant.

Use present perfect 'have always wanted' to express a desire that started in the past and continues. This addresses tense/modal nuance for expressing long-standing desire.

× That's why I'm taking two or couple of years of training or experience in this food industry that I can start my business with confidence and basic knowledge.

✓ That's why I'm gaining two or a couple of years of training and experience in the food industry so that I can start my business with confidence and basic knowledge.

Use 'gaining' or 'getting' training/experience; include the article 'a' before 'couple,' use 'and' to link training and experience, remove 'this' before 'food industry' or use 'the', and use 'so that' to express purpose. This corrects verb form, article use, and sentence structure.