Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar (use present perfect for duration), avoid overlong phrases and minor word-choice errors. Use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two supporting details and correct verb forms (e.g., "I have worked there for two years").

Example: I work as a food service supervisor at an Indian restaurant in Saskatoon. I have worked there for two years, and the role has helped me develop customer service and team-management skills.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence naming the place, remove filler words (uh), and use precise descriptions. Fix grammar and awkward phrases (e.g., "built on the 22nd St." -> "on 22nd Street"). Keep to two supporting details max.

Example: I work at Swadesh Restaurant, which is well known in Saskatoon's South Asian community. It is located on 22nd Street and has a pleasant ambience, making customers feel relaxed when they dine there.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (Yes/No) then support briefly. Use natural adjectives (friendly, supportive) rather than uncommon ones (planted, magnanimous). Correct verb forms and avoid repetition. Provide a short specific example if possible.

Example: Yes, it's a great place to work. The staff and owner are very supportive of new employees, and I haven't had any serious problems with customers during my two years there.

Suggestion: Answer directly then provide a specific supporting detail with a linking phrase (e.g., "for example", "because"). Remove awkward or negative phrasing like "There is nothing about the jealousy." Keep sentences concise and correct small grammar errors.

Example: Yes, I enjoy working there because the environment is motivating and colleagues are supportive. For example, we help each other with difficult tasks and share ideas in weekly team meetings, which reduces my stress.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement of your goal and follow with concrete steps or timeline. Use correct tense and clear phrasing ("start a food chain" -> "start my own restaurant chain"). Limit to two supporting points about what you are doing now to reach the goal.

Example: My long-term goal is to become an entrepreneur and open my own restaurant chain. To prepare, I'm learning management and food-service skills in my current job and planning to take a short business course next year.

× I'm working at the moment as a food service supervisor in an eminent restaurant in Saskatoon.

✓ I am working at the moment as a food service supervisor at an eminent restaurant in Saskatoon.

Use of preposition: 'in' is incorrect with 'restaurant' when referring to employment location; 'at' is the correct preposition for being employed at a specific establishment. Also expand contraction to 'I am' is acceptable but not required. Suggestion: use 'work at' or 'am working at'.

× It's an Indian restaurant which serve the flavourful dishes both vegetarian and non vegetarian.

✓ It's an Indian restaurant which serves flavourful dishes, both vegetarian and non-vegetarian.

Subject-verb agreement and hyphenation: 'restaurant' (singular) requires 'serves' (third person singular). Also 'non vegetarian' should be hyphenated as 'non-vegetarian'. Suggestion: ensure the verb agrees with singular subject and use correct hyphenation for compound adjectives.

× I have been working there since 2 years and it's a splendid experience to gain more skills.

✓ I have been working there for two years, and it has been a splendid experience for gaining more skills.

Use of 'since' vs 'for' and number format: 'since' requires a point in time (e.g., 2019); use 'for' with a period of time. Also use 'two' in words for formality and adjust clause to 'has been' for continuous relevance. Suggestion: use 'for two years' with present perfect continuous and rephrase the second clause for clarity.

× I work in Swadesh restaurant, uh, eminent place among the South Asian community in Saskatoon, built on the 22nd St. of the city.

✓ I work at Swadesh Restaurant, an eminent place among the South Asian community in Saskatoon, located on 22nd St. of the city.

Preposition and article: use 'at' for a place of employment and capitalize proper name. 'An eminent place' requires the article 'an'. 'Built on' is awkward for location; 'located on' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'at' for workplaces and include appropriate articles for nouns.

× The ambience of the restaurant is impeccable and you feel a sense of satisfaction and relaxation when you step in the restaurant and taste the amazing.

✓ The ambience of the restaurant is impeccable, and you feel a sense of satisfaction and relaxation when you step into the restaurant and taste the amazing food.

Preposition and missing noun: use 'step into' rather than 'step in the restaurant'. Also 'taste the amazing' lacks a noun; add 'food'. Suggestion: include the object of 'taste' and use correct prepositions.

× In my opinion, it is the planted place to work because the people, the staff and the owner are really magnanimous and helpful towards the new employee.

✓ In my opinion, it is the perfect place to work because the people, the staff, and the owner are really magnanimous and helpful toward new employees.

Word choice and noun form: 'planted' is incorrect; likely intended 'pleasant' or 'perfect'. 'New employee' should be pluralized to 'new employees' for general statement. 'Towards' and 'toward' are both acceptable; choose 'toward'. Suggestion: use correct adjective ('pleasant' or 'perfect') and pluralize when speaking generally.

× I'm have been working here since 2 years and I haven't have any issue regarding any customer or any of my.

✓ I have been working here for two years, and I haven't had any issues with any customers or any of my colleagues.

Auxiliary verb and tense errors: 'I'm have been' mixes present continuous and present perfect; correct is 'I have been'. Use 'for two years' for duration. 'haven't have' is incorrect; use 'haven't had'. 'any issue regarding any customer or any of my' is incomplete; clarify 'issues with any customers or any of my colleagues'. Suggestion: use consistent present perfect continuous/have structure and complete the noun phrases.

× Yes, I really like the place where work.

✓ Yes, I really like the place where I work.

Missing subject pronoun: 'where work' lacks the subject 'I'. In relative clauses referring to place, include the subject if needed. Suggestion: include 'I' after 'where'.

× I find the environment quite motivating and my colleagues are really supportive, which also helps me to reduce my stress.

✓ I find the environment quite motivating, and my colleagues are really supportive, which also helps me reduce my stress.

Infinitive usage: 'helps me to reduce' is acceptable but more natural without 'to' in this context: 'helps me reduce'. Suggestion: omit 'to' after 'helps' for more natural phrasing.

× For example, we often help each other with difficult task and share ideas during team meetings.

✓ For example, we often help each other with difficult tasks and share ideas during team meetings.

Article and number: 'difficult task' should be plural 'difficult tasks' or preceded by 'a' if singular. Here plural is natural. Suggestion: match noun number to context.

× There is nothing about the jealousy, it's all about the teamwork.

✓ There is no jealousy; it's all about teamwork.

Awkward phrase: 'nothing about the jealousy' is unidiomatic. Use 'no jealousy' and drop 'the' before 'teamwork'. Suggestion: use concise negative constructions and omit unnecessary articles.

× My goal is to become an entrepreneur.

✓ My goal is to become an entrepreneur.

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the intended future plan. No change needed. Suggestion: none.

× I always wanted to start up my own business.

✓ I have always wanted to start my own business.

Tense and collocation: 'I always wanted' suggests a past-only desire; 'have always wanted' expresses an ongoing desire. 'Start up' can be 'start' — 'start up' is acceptable but 'start' is more common here. Suggestion: use present perfect for ongoing desires and prefer 'start' in this phrase.

× I want to start one of my own food chain.

✓ I want to start my own food chain.

Article and word order: 'one of my own food chain' is incorrect. Use 'my own food chain' or 'one of my own food chains' if planning multiple. Suggestion: use 'my own' directly before the noun.

× I'm working through it and learning the basic skills of food service line.

✓ I am working toward it and learning the basic skills of the food service line.

Preposition and article: 'working through it' is unclear; use 'working toward it' for pursuing a goal. 'food service line' needs the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: use 'work toward' for pursuing a plan and include appropriate articles.

× This job helps me a lot to gain the experience and the skill.

✓ This job helps me a lot to gain experience and skills.

Articles and plurality: 'the experience and the skill' is unnatural when speaking generally. Omit 'the' and pluralize 'skills' for general abilities. Suggestion: use uncountable 'experience' without article and plural 'skills'.