Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cümlə daha təbii və qrammatik olaraq dəqiq olmalıdır. Mövzu cümləsində işiniz haqqında daha konkret məlumat verin (məsələn, müəllim, inzibatçı və ya başqa). Həmçinin sadə struktur istifadə edin və lazımsız söz təkrarı və ya səhvlərdən çəkinin.

Example: I work at a secondary school as an English teacher.

Suggestion: Yer və mövqe haqqında məlumat verərkən cümlə strukturu və söz sırası dəqiq olmalıdır. Artıq söz təkrarı və artikllarla (a/an/the) bağlı səhvləri düzəldin. Şəhər adı düzgün yerləşdirilməli və mövqe aydın qeyd edilməlidir.

Example: I work at a secondary school in my city, Akash, where I teach English to teenagers.

Suggestion: Cavabınız qısa və uyğun olsa da, daha spesifik detallarla dəstək verərək inandırıcılığı artırın. 'Because' ilə başlayan səbəbləri daha müxtəlif və konkret göstərin (məsələn, iş şəraiti, həmkarlar, vəsaitlər).

Example: Yes, it’s a great place to work because the classrooms are spacious, the facilities are modern, and the staff are very supportive.

Suggestion: Cavabınızda ziddiyyət var ("No" ilə başlayıb pozitiv səbəblər göstərmisiniz). İlk olaraq qısa və aydın mövqe bildirin, sonra səbəbləri məntiqli ardıcıllıqla verin. Qısa cümlələrdən istifadə edərək təkrarlardan və danışıq səhvlərindən qaçın.

Example: Yes, I like my workplace a lot because it is spacious, has a large garden for children to play in, and the classrooms are well-equipped for lessons.

Suggestion: Cavab qeyri-dəqiq və aydın deyil; qrammatik səhvlər və söz seçimi problemlidir. Gələcək planlarınızı konkret və ardıcıl şəkildə ifadə edin: nə etmək istədiyinizi, necə hazırlaşdığınızı və nə vaxt bunu həyata keçirəcəyinizi bildirin. 'Prepare to aisles' kimi ifadələr səhvdir — düzgün ifadə 'prepare for it' və ya 'apply for new jobs' olmalıdır.

Example: I plan to improve my English and get a high IELTS score so I can apply for teaching positions abroad or at better schools. I am currently preparing by taking IELTS practice tests and attending a language course.

× I am working at school.

✓ I work at a school.

The present simple 'I work' is used for habitual or permanent situations such as one's job. 'I am working' (present continuous) suggests a temporary action. Also use the article 'a' before 'school'. Suggestion: Use present simple for jobs: 'I work at a school.'

× I work in my city in Akash as a in a secondary school.

✓ I work in my city, Akash, at a secondary school.

Use 'in' for a city and place the city name without extra preposition: 'in my city, Akash'. Use 'at' for workplaces like 'at a school'. Remove the extra 'as a' which is unnecessary. Also include the article 'a' before 'secondary school'. Suggestion: 'I work in my city, Akash, at a secondary school.'

× Yes, it is a very good place to work because there are a lot of rooms and it has two floors.

✓ Yes, it is a very good place to work because there are a lot of rooms and it has two floors.

Sentence is acceptable but ensure consistency: 'a lot of' is correct. No change required. Suggestion: Keep the sentence as is.

× No, I wouldn't like any place to work because I like my workplace.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to work anywhere else because I like my workplace.

Use 'wouldn't like to do something' to express preference; 'any place to work' is awkward. 'Anywhere else' better conveys 'not wanting to change'. Suggestion: 'I wouldn't like to work anywhere else.'

× So it is a very it is very large and it has a big garden to to play for children.

✓ It is very large and has a big garden for children to play in.

Remove repeated phrase 'it is very'. Use correct preposition 'for children to play in' or 'where children can play'. Avoid duplicate 'to'. Suggestion: 'It is very large and has a big garden where children can play.'

× Also our rooms are very big and appropriate for lessons.

✓ Also, our classrooms are very big and appropriate for lessons.

'Rooms' is okay but 'classrooms' is more specific in school context. Add a comma after 'Also'. No article change needed. Suggestion: 'Also, our classrooms are very big and appropriate for lessons.'

× What are your future work plans?

✓ What are your future work plans?

Question is correct as asked; no change needed. Suggestion: Keep as is.

× I have many future work plans.

✓ I have many plans for my future work.

'Future work plans' is understandable but slightly awkward. Reordering to 'plans for my future work' is more natural. Suggestion: 'I have many plans for my future work.'

× To be honest I I prepare to aisles for it because I get the high degrees of IELTS then then I change my workplace.

✓ To be honest, I am preparing for it because I want to get a high IELTS score, and then I will change my workplace.

Use present continuous 'am preparing' for ongoing action. 'Prepare for' is the correct preposition. 'Aisles' is incorrect word choice; should be 'prepare for it' or 'prepare for the exam'. Use 'want to get a high IELTS score' instead of 'get the high degrees of IELTS'. For sequence use 'then I will change my workplace' to show future intention. Suggestion: 'To be honest, I am preparing for it because I want to get a high IELTS score, and then I will change my workplace.'