WorkPart 1 Report

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Conversation

Part 1

Examiner

Do you work or are you a student?

Candidate

Yes, at the moment I'm I'm working manager in a hotel who responsible for guest breakfast.

Examiner

Where do you work?>

Candidate

I working in a hotel, it's near my home.

Examiner

Is it a good place to work?

Candidate

Of course I like I like working as manager who responds for guests breakfast and communicate with guests.

Examiner

Would you like the place where you work?

Candidate

Exactly. I like my workplace because our colleagues are kindly and helpful each others.

Examiner

What are your future work plans?

Candidate

At the moment I have no plans for future because I enjoying work as manager in auto.

Evaluation

Overall

Overall: 5.5Fluency & Coherence: 5.5Pronunciation: 5.5Grammar: 5.0Lexical Resource: 5.5

Part 1

Do you work or are you a student?

Score: 48.0

Suggestion: Give a clear direct response first, then add a concise, grammatically correct supporting sentence. Correct verb forms and word order (e.g., 'I'm a manager at a hotel, responsible for guests' breakfast'). Keep it to 1–2 sentences and avoid repetition.

Example: I'm a manager at a hotel. I am responsible for organizing and supervising the guests' breakfast service each morning.

Where do you work?

Score: 56.0

Suggestion: Begin with a complete sentence using correct tense (e.g., 'I work at a hotel'). Add one specific detail linked with a linking word (e.g., 'and') to make it coherent. Avoid missing auxiliary verbs.

Example: I work at a small hotel near my home, and it takes me only about ten minutes to commute.

Is it a good place to work?

Score: 50.0

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer (Yes/No) and follow with one or two clear reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'since.' Use correct verb forms and remove repetition.

Example: Yes, it's a good place to work because I enjoy managing the breakfast service and interacting with guests every morning.

Would you like the place where you work?

Score: 62.0

Suggestion: Respond directly (Yes) then give a specific reason. Use correct adjectives/adverbs and grammar: 'kind' (not kindly) and 'helpful to each other' or 'helpful colleagues.'

Example: Yes, I like my workplace because my colleagues are kind and very helpful to each other, which creates a pleasant atmosphere.

What are your future work plans?

Score: 44.0

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct tense and vocabulary: 'I have no plans at the moment because I am enjoying my work as a manager.' If you mean 'in the hotel industry' say so. Optionally add a short reason or brief future possibility with a linking word like 'but' or 'however.'

Example: At the moment I have no specific plans because I am enjoying my job as a hotel manager; however, in the future I might pursue hospitality management training to advance my career.

Grammar

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, at the moment I'm I'm working manager in a hotel who responsible for guest breakfast.

Yes, at the moment I'm working as a manager in a hotel who is responsible for guests' breakfast.

Run-on and missing words: 'I'm I'm' has a duplication and should be one 'I'm'. Need the preposition 'as' after 'working' when indicating a role. Use the verb 'is' for the relative clause 'who is responsible' and plural possessive 'guests' to show breakfast belongs to multiple guests. Use the possessive apostrophe: 'guests'' becomes 'guests'' but conventionally written as 'guests\' breakfast'. Suggestion: Say 'I'm working as a manager in a hotel who is responsible for guests\' breakfast.'

Present tense issue

× I working in a hotel, it's near my home.

I work in a hotel; it's near my home.

Missing auxiliary/finite verb: In present simple you must use 'I work' not 'I working'. The present participle 'working' needs an auxiliary (am) to form present continuous. Because this is a habitual fact, use simple present 'I work'. Use a semicolon or a conjunction to join sentences properly. Suggestion: Use 'I work in a hotel; it's near my home.'

Present tense issue

× Of course I like I like working as manager who responds for guests breakfast and communicate with guests.

Of course I like working as a manager who is responsible for guests' breakfast and communicating with guests.

Redundancy: 'I like I like' duplicates the subject and verb. Use 'working' with 'like' or use 'I like working'. Role phrase needs article 'a manager'. 'Who responds for' is unnatural; use 'who is responsible for' or 'who handles'. Use parallel gerund form 'communicating' to match 'working'. Use possessive 'guests\'' for breakfast. Suggestion: 'I like working as a manager who is responsible for guests\' breakfast and communicating with guests.'

Modal verb usage

× Would you like the place where you work?

Do you like the place where you work?

Examiner question: 'Would you like' asks about preference or hypothetical wish, but in context the appropriate question is 'Do you like the place where you work?' The student should answer that present preference with 'Yes, I like...' or 'No, I don't.' Suggestion: Use 'Do you like...' for asking about current feelings.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Exactly. I like my workplace because our colleagues are kindly and helpful each others.

Exactly. I like my workplace because our colleagues are kind and helpful to each other.

Word choice: 'kindly' is an adverb, but a descriptive adjective 'kind' is needed to describe 'colleagues'. 'Each others' is incorrect form; use 'each other' for mutual relationship or 'one another'. Also add 'to' to 'helpful to each other'. Suggestion: 'our colleagues are kind and helpful to each other.'

Present tense issue

× At the moment I have no plans for future because I enjoying work as manager in auto.

At the moment I have no plans for the future because I enjoy working as a manager in the automotive department.

Missing verb form: 'I enjoying' is incorrect; use 'I enjoy' or 'I am enjoying'. Use 'for the future' with article 'the'. 'Work as manager' needs 'working as a manager' or 'work as a manager'. 'In auto' is informal and unclear; better 'in the automotive department' or 'in the car division'. Suggestion: 'I have no plans for the future because I enjoy working as a manager in the automotive department.'

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