Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接但有语法和表达不自然的问题。注意冠词和复数（a big fan of doing experiments -> a big fan of doing experiments 或 I enjoy doing experiments）。回答可更简洁并包含一两句支持细节，用连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Example: I'm a university student majoring in biomedicine. I chose this field because I enjoy doing experiments, especially lab work that helps me understand how molecules affect cells.

Suggestion: 答案有冗余和语法错误（不要同时用 since 和 so；用现在时态描述现状）。可用一两句简洁说明并加上原因或现状的具体细节。

Example: I don't have a job at the moment because I study full time at university. Currently I spend most of my time in labs and attending lectures.

Suggestion: 回答表达基本清楚但有语法错误（provide -> provides；focus myself -> focus）。可以用一两条具体理由支持观点，并使用连接词如 because 或as。

Example: Definitely. My university provides a relaxed yet professional environment because the labs are well-equipped and supervisors are supportive, which helps me concentrate on my research.

Suggestion: 存在词汇和语法错误（professional year to relax? other owners?）。避免重复（the the）。回答应更精确说明想喜欢的具体方面，如同事、设施或学习机会，并用连接词连接两点。

Example: Yes, I do. The place not only offers professional facilities and quiet spaces to focus, but it also allows me to interact with other students and researchers, which improves my teamwork skills.

Suggestion: 回答信息较多但语法混乱（Of since? I particularly interested -> I'm particularly interested）。职业目标应更明确（therapist 可能不太匹配生物医药，建议明确例如 biomedical researcher or clinical researcher）。提供具体步骤如实习或研究计划会更好。

Example: As I major in biomedicine, I hope to work in drug development or as a biomedical researcher. I'm particularly interested in molecular biology, so I plan to do internships in pharmaceutical labs and join research projects to gain practical experience.

× I'm a university student and I major in biomedicine because I'm quite a big fan of doing experiment.

✓ I'm a university student and I major in biomedicine because I'm quite a big fan of doing experiments.

句中“doing experiment”搭配不当，名词“experiment”应为复数以表示进行实验的活动，且在此语境下通常用动名词短语“doing experiments”。建议使用复数形式或改为“conducting experiments / doing experiments”。

× Since I am a university student, so I study full time in university and I don't have a job at that time.

✓ Since I am a university student, I study full-time at university and I don't have a job at the moment.

句中同时使用“Since...”，“so”会导致连接词重复，应去掉“so”。“full time”作形容词时应连字符“full-time”。介词用“at university”更自然；“at that time”用于过去情境，不符合现在时，应改为“at the moment”或“now”。建议去掉多余连词并调整词组时态和介词。

× I think my working place provide me with a relaxed and formal environment for me to focus myself on my work.

✓ I think my workplace provides me with a relaxed and formal environment for me to focus on my work.

主语“workplace”为单数，谓语动词应为“provides”。“working place”不如“workplace”自然；“focus myself on my work”中“focus on”后直接接宾语，不需要“myself”。建议把动词改为第三人称单数形式并简化短语。

× Definitely yes, because the the workplace not only provides me with a professional year to relax environment for me to focus on my work, but it also gives me more opportunity to contact with other owners.

✓ Definitely yes, because the workplace not only provides me with a professional yet relaxing environment to focus on my work, but it also gives me more opportunities to contact other people.

句中有重复冠词“the the”。“professional year to relax environment”词序及用词不当，推测为“professional yet relaxing environment”（既专业又放松的环境）。“opportunity”需用复数“opportunities”以匹配一般情况；“contact with other owners”不自然，改为“contact other people”或“get in contact with others”。建议修正冠词重复、词序并注意可数名词复数形式。

× Of since I'm a university student I am now majoring in biomedicine, so I hope to work as a therapist, and I particularly interested in molecular biology and drug development, so I may do some internships to prepare for that career.

✓ Of course, since I'm a university student and I'm now majoring in biomedicine, I hope to work as a therapist, and I'm particularly interested in molecular biology and drug development, so I may do some internships to prepare for that career.

句中缺少“Of course”完整写法（原文为“Of since”明显错误）。并且“I particularly interested”缺少系动词“am”，这是现在时态问题而非过去时，应属现在时态错误，但在给定列表中最接近的为“Past tense issue”不合适。根据列表限制仍需纠正为“I'm particularly interested”。建议补全短语并加上系动词，保持时态一致。