Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer grammatically correct, clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (I work / I'm a student), then give one or two specific supporting details (job title, company, main responsibilities). Use correct verb forms and simpler structures to avoid errors.

Example: I work in business administration for Extreme, an internet service company. I’m responsible for social media sales and for managing a small team.

Suggestion: Answer directly where you work, then give clear, specific details. Avoid unclear phrases and false cognates. Use linking words for clarity (but, however, because). If you work from home now, say so and explain briefly why or how your company operates.

Example: At the moment I’m working from home because of a remote work policy, but our company has two offices in Quito. I manage social media sales and run occasional on-site campaigns for our clients.

Suggestion: Give a direct opinion sentence, then support it with two clear, specific reasons linked logically. Use correct grammar for comparisons and personal reasons (allow(s) me to..., it is important to me...). Avoid long broken sentences.

Example: Yes, it’s a good place to work because it offers flexible hours and pays well. For example, the schedule allows me to spend time helping my children with homework and to travel with my mother when needed.

Suggestion: Respond directly to whether you like your workplace, then give specific features you like. Use correct sentence structure (It is/It has) and precise vocabulary (decorated nicely, technology, three screens). Keep it short and natural.

Example: Yes, I like it. My office is nicely decorated and well equipped with technology; for example, I use three monitors so I can see everything at once.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence about your future plans, then add a specific reason and a simple timeline. Use correct verb forms (I would like to open / I want to open, in a month) and explain why the location is suitable (commercial area).

Example: I would like to open another office in Santo Domingo in about a month because that location is very commercial and should attract more customers.

× And yes, I'm work.

✓ Yes, I work.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the contraction 'I'm' (I am) with the verb 'work', which creates a pronoun/verb form mismatch. Use the simple present 'I work' to answer the question about current employment. Suggestion: say 'I work' or 'Yes, I am a student' depending on intended meaning.

× I'm business administration and hold for Extreme, one company of Internet service in my country.

✓ I work in business administration and I work for Extreme, an Internet service company in my country.

The original mixes noun phrases and incorrect verbs ('hold for') and lacks necessary articles. Use 'work in' to indicate the field and 'work for' to indicate the employer. Include the article 'an' before 'Internet service company'. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb structure: 'I work in business administration and I work for Extreme, an Internet service company in my country.'

× I'm in charge of the sales for social media and management of staff.

✓ I'm in charge of social media sales and staff management.

The phrase 'the sales for social media' is awkward; 'social media sales' is more natural. Also use parallel noun phrases 'social media sales and staff management'. This corrects preposition and word order issues. Suggestion: keep parallel structure and avoid unnecessary prepositions.

× In this moment I'm working in my house but I have two office in Quito.

✓ At the moment I'm working from my house, but I have two offices in Quito.

Use 'At the moment' or 'Right now' instead of 'In this moment'. 'Working from my house' is the correct preposition. 'Office' needs plural 'offices'. Suggestion: use 'At the moment I'm working from home' or similar.

× I Salesforce social media and sales topic company for for example class and police glue.

✓ I handle social media and sales topics for the company, for example classes and government clients.

The original contains unclear vocabulary and repeated 'for'. 'Handle' or 'manage' fits better than 'Salesforce' unless referring to the CRM product. 'Police glue' is likely a mistranslation; I replaced it with 'government clients' as a plausible correction. Use 'for the company' to indicate whom you serve. Suggestion: clarify specific responsibilities and use appropriate nouns.

× Now we are working camping.

✓ Now we are running a campaign.

'Working camping' is ungrammatical and likely a mix-up of words. 'Running a campaign' fits business context. Suggestion: use correct collocations: 'running a campaign' or 'working on a campaign'.

× Jets Jazz it's a good place to work because it's very flexible and pay well.

✓ Jets Jazz is a good place to work because it's very flexible and pays well.

Avoid using 'it's' after the company name; the verb 'to be' should directly follow the subject: 'Jets Jazz is'. Also ensure subject-verb agreement: 'pays' (third person singular) not 'pay'. Suggestion: 'Jets Jazz is a good place to work because it is flexible and pays well.'

× For example, it's I allows me time with my children and my mom for travel or help in the homework for me is import be present.

✓ For example, it allows me time with my children and my mother to travel or help them with their homework; for me it is important to be present.

The original misplaces pronouns and has awkward clauses. Use 'it allows me' not 'it's I allows'. Use 'my mother' not 'my mom' for slightly more formal register and 'help them with their homework'. Use 'important' instead of 'import' and rephrase for clarity. Suggestion: break into two clauses and use correct infinitives and prepositions.

× Yes, decorated my office nice and with much technology.

✓ Yes, my office is nicely decorated and has a lot of technology.

The original lacks a verb and subject agreement. Use passive/adjective structure 'is nicely decorated' and correct quantifier phrase 'a lot of technology' or 'much technology' is unnatural in this context. Suggestion: use 'my office is nicely decorated and well equipped with technology.'

× For example I have 3 screen for to see all.

✓ For example, I have three screens to see everything.

Use the word 'three' in full in formal writing and plural 'screens'. Use the infinitive 'to see' and 'everything' instead of 'all'. Suggestion: 'I have three screens so I can monitor everything.'

× Uh, I like open other office in Santo Domingo and month because our place very commercial.

✓ I would like to open another office in Santo Domingo next month because that area is very commercial.

Use 'would like to' to express desire. 'Open another office' requires 'another' not 'other'. Add time expression 'next month' and verb 'is' for 'that area is very commercial' (or 'the area is very commercial'). Suggestion: 'I would like to open another office in Santo Domingo next month because it is a very commercial area.'