Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar and sentence structure: use correct verb forms and clearer phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). Use linking words like "and" or "also" to connect ideas.

Example: I work as a civil engineer and have been in the field for about eight years. I specialize in infrastructure projects and underground works, and I am also taking part-time courses to update my skills.

Suggestion: Give a clear, grammatically correct location and one specific detail about the workplace. Avoid filler words and unfinished sentences. Use a topic sentence followed by one supporting detail with a linking word (e.g., "and" or "which").

Example: I work as a civil engineer for an infrastructure company in northern Brisbane. The company handles a wide range of construction projects, which allows me to gain experience in many areas of the field.

Suggestion: Focus on clear reasons with correct grammar and specific examples. Avoid hesitations like "umm". Use linking words such as "because" and "and" to connect ideas, and give one concrete example of a challenge or professional interaction.

Example: Yes, it's a good place to work because the company offers complex projects that present daily challenges. For example, I often collaborate with geotechnical engineers and project managers to solve difficult design issues.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "I like the place I work"). Provide one or two specific reasons why you like it, using linking words such as "because" or "as". Avoid ambiguous pronouns and keep sentences short.

Example: Yes, I like the place where I work because the office is spacious and the projects are challenging. Working on infrastructure and underground projects keeps my job interesting and rewarding.

Suggestion: Organize your response with a clear topic sentence about your main plan, then give a specific timeline and reason. Remove fillers and use correct tense and word order. Use linking words such as "so" or "because" to explain motives.

Example: I plan to start my own company next year so I can run projects according to my ideas. I want to be my own boss so I can explore innovative approaches in infrastructure and underground construction.

× I am currently work as a professional.

✓ I am currently working as a professional.

The verb 'work' needs to be in the present participle form after 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Use 'working' to say an ongoing action. Suggestion: use 'I am working' or 'I currently work' (simple present).

× I have been in civil engineering field for about 8 years now, specifically focus infrastructure projects and underground works.

✓ I have been in the civil engineering field for about eight years now, specifically focusing on infrastructure projects and underground works.

Missing article 'the' before 'civil engineering field' and wrong verb form 'focus' should be the -ing form after 'specifically'. Also spell out numbers in formal speech. Use 'have been' + noun phrase, and 'focusing on' to show ongoing activity. Suggestion: add 'the' and use 'focusing on'.

× I am not full time student but I am learning.

✓ I am not a full-time student, but I am studying.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'full-time student' and 'full-time' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. 'Learning' is vague; 'studying' is more natural here. Suggestion: use 'a full-time student' and 'studying'.

× I work as civil engineer at the infrastructure company in Australia.

✓ I work as a civil engineer at an infrastructure company in Australia.

Missing indefinite articles before 'civil engineer' and 'infrastructure company'. English requires articles with singular countable nouns. Suggestion: use 'a civil engineer' and 'an infrastructure company'.

× It's located in the north of Brisbane, UMM where I can A to do everything about the construction field.

✓ It's located in the north of Brisbane, where I can do many things related to the construction field.

Unnecessary 'the' before 'north of Brisbane' and awkward/missing words in second clause. Use 'in the north of Brisbane' or 'north of Brisbane'; here 'in the north of Brisbane' or 'north of Brisbane' both acceptable. Removed filler 'UMM' and corrected verb phrase to 'can do many things related to'. Suggestion: simplify and use 'related to'.

× The the place is where I.

✓ That is the place where I work.

Fragment lacking a verb and unclear reference. Duplicate 'The' and incomplete clause. Add verb 'work' to complete the sentence. Suggestion: form a full clause: 'That is the place where I work.'

× Absolutely, I think it's a good place to work because the company offer umm many complex projects where you can find many challenges every single day.

✓ Absolutely. I think it's a good place to work because the company offers many complex projects where you can find challenges every single day.

Subject-verb agreement and article issues: 'company' is singular so verb should be 'offers' (third person singular). Also remove filler 'umm' and 'many' before 'challenges' is redundant with 'many' earlier. Suggestion: use 'offers' and concise wording.

× In each project you meeting for many professionals around.

✓ In each project you meet many professionals.

Incorrect verb form 'meeting' should be 'meet' for simple present and unnecessary words 'for' and 'around'. Use direct object 'many professionals'. Suggestion: 'In each project you meet many professionals.'

× Generally speaking, like a place where I work, I feel very exciting because he's quite spacious and have a huge challenges.

✓ Generally speaking, I like the place where I work; I feel very excited because it's quite spacious and has huge challenges.

Several pronoun and verb errors: 'like a place where I work' should be 'I like the place where I work'. 'Feel very exciting' is incorrect; use 'feel very excited'. 'He's' is wrong pronoun for a place; use 'it's'. 'Have a huge challenges' has subject-verb disagreement and article misuse; use 'has huge challenges' or 'has a big challenge' depending on meaning. Suggestion: use correct pronouns and match verbs to subjects.

× Project for to do is focus on infrastructure and underground.

✓ The projects focus on infrastructure and underground work.

Awkward word order and incorrect infinitive phrase. Use 'The projects focus on' for correct subject-verb order and 'underground work' as natural collocation. Suggestion: 'The projects focus on infrastructure and underground work.'

× I'm not stuck on my current job, however half of them umm a big idea for many future plans is a start the next year I'm my own boss run.

✓ I'm not stuck in my current job; however, a big idea I have for the future is to start my own business next year and be my own boss.

Multiple tense and structure errors: use 'stuck in a job', remove filler 'umm', and express intention with 'is to start' plus infinitive. 'I'm my own boss run' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'be my own boss' and 'start my own business'. Suggestion: use 'is to start' + 'next year' placement after the verb phrase.

× Then I run my own company where I can explore my ideas since I may.

✓ Then I will run my own company where I can explore my ideas.

Mixed tenses and unnecessary trailing clause 'since I may' making it ungrammatical. Use future tense 'will run' to state a plan and remove incomplete clause. Suggestion: 'I will run my own company where I can explore my ideas.'