Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は基本的な情報を伝えていますが、文法ミス（冠詞・職業名の形、動詞の時制や語形）や冗長な表現が多く、流暢さが低いです。より自然に、主題文→補足（職務内容、クライアントや頻度など）という構成で話してください。また最大5文以内に収め、前置詞や動詞の形（work as a lawyer / draft documents）を正しく使う練習をしてください。具体的には短く明確な主語＋述語を意識し、同じ語の反復を避けること。

Example: I work as a lawyer at Row, a Japanese law firm. I handle cases for a variety of clients and mostly draft legal documents such as contracts and agreements. I usually work on several cases at once, so I need to manage my time carefully.

Suggestion: 現在の勤務地を尋ねられているのに、時制の間違いや不自然な語順があります（I worked → I work / I work in Tokyo）。また情報が断片的で否定的表現のみで終わっているため印象が悪くなりがちです。場所の説明は現在形で始め、位置・周辺の特徴・雰囲気を1〜2件の具体例で補足してください。リンク表現（for example, such as）を使うと自然です。

Example: I work in Tokyo, in the central business district. For example, there are many tall office buildings and banks nearby, so the area is very busy during weekdays.

Suggestion: 肯定の応答はありますが、語彙ミス（hold → old? whole?）、冠詞や複数形の誤り、語順の不自然さがあります。理由を述べる際は接続語（because / and / also）を使い、具体性を高めてください。例えば公園で何をするのか（walk, lunch, relax）を付け加えると良いです。文を簡潔に2〜3文にまとめましょう。

Example: Yes, it is a good place to work because there is a large park in front of my office. I often go there during my lunch break to walk and relax, which helps me stay focused in the afternoon.

Suggestion: 肯定と理由はあるものの、語順や不要な語（not only... but also の誤用、'a large'の重複、'feel bags'など意味不明な表現）が多く意味が伝わりにくいです。主題文→理由→具体例（how you use the park / commute）で構成し、冗長や不要語を削る練習をして下さい。また文法面では冠詞・前置詞（nearby, for me to → convenient for me）を確認してください。

Example: Yes, I like my workplace because it is near a large park as well as many office buildings. I often visit the park during breaks to relax, and the location is also convenient for commuting.

Suggestion: 目的と行動は示されていますが、語順と文法が大きく乱れています（because of this I. Study English hardly → incorrect; 'study hard' not 'hardly'）。詳しい計画（どの国で、どの分野で働きたいか、具体的な準備）があればより高評価です。まずは現在の目標を明確に述べ（I want to work abroad）、次にそのためにしている具体的な準備（studying English, planning to apply for programs）を付け加えてください。

Example: I want to work abroad, especially in English-speaking countries, to gain international experience. Therefore I am studying English hard and preparing to apply for a study abroad program or international positions in the next two years.

× I work as a attorney at Row, the Japanese law firm.

✓ I work as an attorney at Row, a Japanese law firm.

'Attorney' begins with a vowel sound so it requires the article 'an' instead of 'a'. 'The Japanese law firm' implies a specific firm already known; use 'a Japanese law firm' to introduce it. Improve by choosing 'a' or 'an' based on the following sound and use 'a' when mentioning something for the first time.

× I usually drafting the document.

✓ I usually draft documents.

After adverb 'usually' use the base form of the verb 'draft' not the -ing form. Also use plural 'documents' for general activity. Improve by using simple present for habitual actions: 'usually' + base verb.

× Where do you work?> Student: I worked at Tokyo specifically.

✓ Where do you work? Student: I work in Tokyo specifically.

The question asks about current workplace so use present tense 'work'. 'In Tokyo' is the correct preposition for city location. Use present simple for current facts.

× Ultimately, there are many tall business buildings and banks.

✓ There are many tall office buildings and banks.

'Business buildings' is unnatural; 'office buildings' is more idiomatic. 'Ultimately' is unnecessary here and changes meaning; omit it. Use concise adjective+noun phrases.

× No fun there.

✓ It's not very exciting there.

Original is a fragment ('No fun there') and informal; supply subject and verb to form a complete sentence. Use 'It's not very exciting there' for natural spoken English.

× Yes there are many hold office buildings and banks and also there are large park in front of my office so I can feel relaxed by visiting.

✓ Yes, there are many old office buildings and banks, and there is also a large park in front of my office, so I can feel relaxed when I visit.

'Hold' is a typo for 'old'. 'There are' followed by singular 'a large park' is incorrect; use 'there is a large park'. Use 'when I visit' (not 'by visiting') for purpose/time. Add commas and 'also' placement for clarity.

× Yes, I like my office space because there are not only office buildings but also large a large park nearby office.

✓ Yes, I like my office space because there are not only office buildings but also a large park near my office.

Remove duplicated 'large' and correct word order to 'a large park near my office'. Use 'near my office' rather than 'nearby office'. Keep parallel structure with 'not only... but also...'.

× I can feel bags visiting there and there's it.

✓ I can feel relaxed visiting there and it's peaceful.

'Feel bags' is incorrect; likely meant 'feel relaxed'. 'There's it' is ungrammatical; replace with 'it's peaceful' or similar. Use appropriate adjective after 'feel'.

× It is convenient for me to.

✓ It is convenient for me.

Sentence-ending 'to' is unnecessary and leaves the verb phrase incomplete. Remove 'to' to complete the sentence.

× What are your future work plans? Student: I want to work in foreign countries because of this I. Study English hardly and I for study abroad.

✓ I want to work in foreign countries. Because of this, I study English hard and I plan to study abroad.

'Because of this I.' is fragmented; split into sentences. Use 'study English hard' (or better 'study English intensively') instead of 'study English hardly' ('hardly' means 'barely'). 'I for study abroad' is ungrammatical; use 'I plan to study abroad'. Ensure correct word order and verb forms for future intention.