Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 文法と時制を正しく使う必要があります。質問は現在の状況を尋ねているので、現在形を使って答えるべきです。また、応答は直接的に始め、簡潔に職業と職場を述べ、その後必要なら1文で補足するのが自然です。具体的な職場名や役割を短く付け加えると良いでしょう。

Example: I work as an architect at an architectural design office in Tokyo. I mainly design residential buildings and coordinate with engineers and clients.

Suggestion: 場所の説明は良いですが、固有名詞の発音や綴りを明確にし、より具体的な情報（エリアの特徴や会社の業務）を加えると自然です。接続語は不要ですが、補足する際は 'and' や 'which' を使い過ぎないように注意してください。

Example: I work in the Jeodaku district of Tokyo. It’s a business area with many office buildings, so my office is surrounded by other companies.

Suggestion: 発言に含まれる誤用（'licking' は不適切）を直し、理由を簡潔に2文以内で述べてください。自然な表現で景色や雰囲気が仕事に与える影響（落ち着く、やる気が出る）を具体的に挙げると良いです。

Example: Yes, it’s a great place to work because there are beautiful cherry blossoms outside the large windows. Seeing them makes the office feel calm and bright, which helps me concentrate.

Suggestion: 応答は明確で短く適切です。さらに自然にするために 'This is because' よりも 'because' を用いて一文にまとめ、具体例（窓からの景色や自然光がもたらす効果）を一つ付け加えると良いでしょう。

Example: Yes, I like my workplace because it has a bright atmosphere and large windows. The natural light makes the space feel cheerful and helps me stay focused.

Suggestion: 'architectural farm' は意味が不明瞭で誤解を招きます。'abroad' と 'in particular' の使い方は良いですが、狙いの業界や理由を具体的に述べ、語彙を正確に使ってください（例：architecture firms）。また接続を滑らかにするために 'because' の前に短い導入を入れると効果的です。

Example: I would like to work for an architecture firm abroad, particularly in London. I’m interested in London because it’s home to many renowned architecture practices and offers diverse design opportunities.

× I worked as an architect at an architecture design office in Tokyo.

✓ I work as an architect at an architectural design office in Tokyo.

The Examiner asked about current work, so present tense should be used rather than past tense. Use 'work' for present continuous state. Also use 'architectural design office' (adjective form) rather than 'architecture design office.' Suggestion: use present simple for current jobs and use correct adjective form 'architectural.'

× I work at the office in Jeodaku, which has a lot of office buildings.

✓ I work at an office in Jeodaku, which has a lot of office buildings.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before a non-specific singular countable noun 'office.' The original 'the office' implies a specific office already known; here 'an office' is more natural. Also no tense change needed; present simple correctly describes current work.

× Yes, I believe that it is a good place to work because these are beautiful cherry blossoms and I can enjoy licking them, looking at them through the large window.

✓ Yes, I believe that it is a good place to work because there are beautiful cherry blossoms and I can enjoy looking at them through the large window.

'These are' is awkward when introducing scenery; use 'there are' (existential) to state existence. More importantly, 'licking them' is incorrect and likely a word choice error; use 'looking at them' or 'enjoying them.' Also avoid repeating 'looking at them' twice; here use 'enjoy looking at them.' This fixes pronoun and existential construction and corrects verb choice.

× Yes, I like the place where I work. This is because it has a bright atmosphere with a large window.

✓ Yes, I like the place where I work. This is because it has a bright atmosphere and a large window.

Grammatically the original is mostly fine but 'with a large window' is acceptable; changing 'with' to 'and' improves parallelism between 'bright atmosphere' and 'large window.' Maintain present tense for current preference.

× I would like to work at an architectural farm abroad. In particular, I want to work in London. This is because there are a lot of famous architecture offices in that place.

✓ I would like to work at an architectural firm abroad. In particular, I want to work in London because there are a lot of famous architectural firms there.

'Architectural farm' is a typo; correct word is 'firm.' Use 'abroad' with 'firm' and keep conditional 'would like.' Replace 'architecture offices' with 'architectural firms' for natural collocation. Use 'there' instead of 'in that place' for conciseness. Maintain future intention phrasing.