Work— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 用更自然和简洁的句子直接回答并避免重复。注意冠词和短语搭配（例如：study law, fascinated by, impact on society）。可以给出一到两句补充说明，不要超过五句。

Example: I'm a law student. I chose this field because I'm fascinated by how legal systems shape society, and although studying law can be challenging, I find it very rewarding.

Suggestion: 回答应先直接回应地点或职位，避免语法错误和不自然短语（例如：part-time work, in the field of law, in Wuxi）。提供具体细节时要用连词使句子连贯。

Example: I'm a part-time legal assistant at a small firm in Wuxi. I work there to gain practical experience in legal research and to develop my analytical skills.

Suggestion: 回答自然且有具体理由，但可更简洁并用连接词提高流畅性。也可加入一两句具体例子说明支持性文化如何帮助你。

Example: Yes, it is. The firm has a positive atmosphere and supportive colleagues. For example, regular training workshops and team-building events help us communicate better and learn new skills.

Suggestion: 回答清晰並有具体例子，但注意冠词和代词错误（去掉多余的“the”）。可以再补一条关于未来如何利用这些经验的简短说明。

Example: Yes, definitely. My supervisor is very supportive and has guided me through real case analysis and step-by-step legal research, which has boosted my skills and confidence.

Suggestion: 回答需更自然、语法准确并避免重复（例如：fascinated by, impact on society）。明确表述职业目标并补充一到两条具体行动计划或时间框架，句子数不超过五句。

Example: I plan to qualify as a lawyer and specialise in public interest law. To achieve this, I'll continue internships to improve my research and analytical skills and aim to sit the bar exam within two years.

× I'm now a student studying in the law.

✓ I'm currently a student studying law.

问题类型：22（冠词错误）和26（句子结构错误）。原句中使用了定冠词“the”搭配不可数名词“law”不合适，应直接说“studying law”。此外，“now”位置可更自然地用“currently”。建议：去掉“the”，用“studying law”并可用“currently”使表达更地道。

× I choose this field because I have always been fascinated by how the legal systems work and their impact on society is quite challenging but really rewarding.

✓ I chose this field because I have always been fascinated by how legal systems work and their impact on society; it is quite challenging but really rewarding.

问题类型：6（现在时问题）和27（主谓一致/时态不一致）。考生在描述过去选择时应使用过去时“chose”。另外“legal systems”不需要定冠词，且原句把两个独立想法连在一起造成结构问题，改为分号并用“it is”。建议：用过去时描述选择原因，调整句子结构以清晰表达。

× I'm now a student studying law but I usually do some touch time work in a form of law in the jungle province of Wuxi because I really want to get more experience about the legal skills such as research techniques and analytical skills.

✓ I'm currently a law student, but I usually do some part-time legal work in Wuxi province because I want to gain more experience with legal skills such as research techniques and analytical skills.

问题类型：6（现在时问题）、11（介词使用错误）和22（冠词错误）。原句“touch time”应为“part-time”；“in a form of law”表达不自然，改为“part-time legal work”；“in the jungle province of Wuxi”显然是不合逻辑或翻译错误，若指地名应为“Wuxi province”; “experience about”应为“gain experience with”或“in”。建议：用“part-time legal work”，“gain experience with/in”，并把表示地点改为正确的地名形式。

× Is it a good place to work?

✓ Is it a good place to work?

问题类型：无（句子正确）。该句语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, definitely, because the company has a positive environment and all my colleagues are extremely supportive.

✓ Yes, definitely, because the company has a positive environment and all my colleagues are extremely supportive.

问题类型：无（句子正确）。语法正确，时态与语境一致。

× They always organize different kinds of team building activities and the training workshops, making it easier for us to cooperate with others.

✓ They always organize different kinds of team-building activities and training workshops, which makes it easier for us to cooperate with others.

问题类型：26（句子结构错误）和18（形容词顺序/构词问题）。原句“team building”应连字符“team-building”；并列名词不需要冠词“the”重复，且分词短语“making it easier”改为定语从句“which makes it easier”更清晰。建议：用连字符并用“which makes”连接。

× Yes, definitely, because the my supervisor is always supportive and she taught me how to analyze the real cases and do the legal research step by step.

✓ Yes, definitely, because my supervisor is always supportive and she taught me how to analyze real cases and do legal research step by step.

问题类型：22（冠词错误）和5（过去时问题）。“the my supervisor”是多余的定冠词，应删除“the”。“real cases”与“legal research”不需要定冠词。时态：句中“taught”用过去时是可以的，如果指过去的具体指导则正确，否则若习惯性指导应用现在完成或现在时，需根据语境选择。建议：去掉多余冠词并通常使用现在完成时或过去时视具体语境。

× The support has helped me improve my practical skills and confidence.

✓ The support has helped me improve my practical skills and boost my confidence.

问题类型：27（主谓搭配/表达精确性）。原句“improve my practical skills and confidence”语义上可理解，但并列结构不够平行。改为“improve my practical skills and boost my confidence”使两个并列部分在词性和结构上更平衡。建议：保持并列结构平行，使用合适动词搭配。

× My future plan is to become an excellent lawyer because I have always fascinated by how the legal systems work and their impact on the society.

✓ My future plan is to become an excellent lawyer because I have always been fascinated by how legal systems work and their impact on society.

问题类型：1（单复数）和6（时态/分词形式）。原句应为“have always been fascinated”被动完成时，缺少“been”。“legal systems”无需定冠词“the”，并且“society”通常不加“the”。建议：补上“been”，去掉多余定冠词，注意被动完成时的结构。

× I really want to learn more about the practical skills such as research techniques and the analytical skills and want to help.

✓ I really want to learn more practical skills, such as research techniques and analytical skills, and I want to help people.

问题类型：6（时态/句子结构）和26（句子结构错误）。原句“learn more about the practical skills”中“about”多余，改为“learn more practical skills”。“the analytical skills”去掉定冠词，“and want to help”缺少宾语，需补全如“help people”。建议：去掉多余介词与定冠词，保持并列结构完整，并补上明确宾语以使句子完整。