Hometown— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'it have' và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và tránh lặp từ như 'beside'.

Example: My hometown is Hatting City, which is a large and bustling place. It has many grocery stores, and the people living there are quiet and friendly.

Suggestion: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'useful' để miêu tả con người. Hãy sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

Example: I like the people in my hometown because they are friendly and helpful. They often share interesting stories about daily life, which makes the community lively.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp thì hiện tại hoàn thành và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác như 'dessert' nên là 'dessert' hoặc 'traditional food'. Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn.

Example: I have lived there for 18 years. During this time, I have enjoyed traditional foods and met many friendly people who often share stories about daily life.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên tập trung vào ý chính, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ. Hãy trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc và có liên kết.

Example: I believe my hometown is a good place for young people because they can explore traditional culture and meet many new friends.

× There are many people who live in here and they are very quiet and friendly beside.

✓ There are many people who live here and they are very quiet and friendly.

The phrase 'live in here' is incorrect; 'live here' is the correct form. Also, 'beside' is incorrectly used; it should be omitted or replaced with 'besides' if adding information. In this context, it is unnecessary.

× My hometown has many grocery store and it have big and crowded beside.

✓ My hometown has many grocery stores and it is big and crowded.

The noun 'grocery store' should be plural 'grocery stores' to agree with 'many'. The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with singular subject 'My hometown'. 'Beside' is incorrectly used and should be removed.

× They also have the any people to do anything to it and beside take uh some time, they also uh, tell story about the daily life or fun story.

✓ They also have many people to do anything for it and besides taking some time, they also tell stories about daily life or fun stories.

The phrase 'the any people' is incorrect; 'many people' is appropriate. 'Do anything to it' should be 'do anything for it'. 'Beside' should be 'besides' and followed by a gerund 'taking'. 'Tell story' should be plural 'tell stories'.

× I discovered the dessert food in the traditional food in here and I also meet, uh, many friendly and quiet people who help me to do anything or tell to me a story about the daily life.

✓ I discovered the dessert food in the traditional food here and I also met many friendly and quiet people who helped me do anything or tell me stories about daily life.

The verb 'meet' should be in past tense 'met' to match 'discovered'. 'Help me to do' is better as 'helped me do'. 'Tell to me a story' should be 'tell me stories'. 'In here' should be 'here'.

× And beside they meet any other people.

✓ And besides, they meet other people.

The word 'any' is incorrectly used here; 'other people' is sufficient. 'Beside' should be 'besides' and a comma is needed after it.