Puzzles— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, instead of 'I did the lot of puzzles', say 'I did a lot of puzzles'. Also, clarify 'meth' as 'math' and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I did a lot of puzzles during my childhood, especially in my math classes. These puzzles ranged from easy to difficult, which made learning more interesting and enjoyable.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding repetition and making sentences clearer. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating 'even' multiple times unnecessarily.

Example: I usually do puzzles whenever I feel bored because solving both easy and difficult puzzles helps me relax and reduces my stress. Additionally, it keeps me engaged with the activities around me.

Suggestion: Try to improve sentence structure and grammar. For example, say 'I like both word and number puzzles, but I find number puzzles more difficult because they involve calculations and numerical representations, which require more effort to solve.' Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' to connect ideas.

Example: I enjoy both word and number puzzles, but I find number puzzles more challenging because they involve calculations and numerical representations that require more effort to solve.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, say 'Yes, of course, puzzles are good for everyone, including older people, because they help keep their minds active and prevent boredom. Puzzles also refresh their minds and keep them engaged.' Avoid confusing phrases like 'feel their legs'.

Example: Yes, of course, puzzles are beneficial for everyone, including older people, as they help keep their minds active and prevent boredom. Additionally, puzzles refresh their minds and keep them engaged in enjoyable activities.

× I did the lot of puzzles in my childhood.

✓ I did a lot of puzzles in my childhood.

The phrase 'the lot of puzzles' is incorrect; the correct quantifier is 'a lot of puzzles' to indicate many puzzles.

× There was a subject called meth which involves a lot of puzzles.

✓ There was a subject called math which involved a lot of puzzles.

The subject name 'meth' is likely a typo for 'math'. Also, since the subject is in the past, 'involves' should be 'involved' to match past tense.

× The puzzles were difficult as well as. Easy.

✓ The puzzles were both difficult and easy.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly punctuated. It should be a single sentence with 'both...and' to connect the adjectives.

× These puzzles makes the subject more interesting even.

✓ These puzzles make the subject more interesting even.

The subject 'puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'make' not 'makes'.

× As solving difficult as well as easy puzzles helps me to feel relaxed and even, it reduces my stress and even solving these puzzles or illustrations helps me to stay interested in the activities around me.

✓ Solving difficult as well as easy puzzles helps me to feel relaxed; it reduces my stress and helps me to stay interested in the activities around me.

The sentence is awkward and has unnecessary 'even's. Also, 'As' at the start is unnecessary. The sentence is better split and clarified.

× I like both doing word puzzles as well as number puzzles, but according to me number puzzles are more difficult as these involves use calculations and numerical representations which requires a lot of hard work to solve these puzzles.

✓ I like both word puzzles as well as number puzzles, but according to me number puzzles are more difficult as they involve calculations and numerical representations which require a lot of hard work to solve.

'These involves' is incorrect; 'these' is plural so the verb should be 'involve'. Also, 'which requires' should be 'which require' to agree with plural 'calculations and numerical representations'.

× Yes of course doing puzzles is good for everyone as well as old persons as doing puzzles help them to keep stay interested in the activities and they does not get aboard while doing activities even it helps to refresh their mind also and they also feel their legs.

✓ Yes, of course doing puzzles is good for everyone as well as old persons as doing puzzles helps them to stay interested in activities and they do not get bored while doing activities; it also helps to refresh their mind and they also feel their legs.

'Doing puzzles help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular 'doing puzzles'. 'They does not' should be 'they do not'. 'Get aboard' is incorrect; the correct word is 'get bored'. 'Keep stay interested' is incorrect; it should be 'stay interested'. The sentence is long and needs punctuation for clarity.