Puzzles— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and provide supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors and ensure your sentences are complete and meaningful.

Example: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles during my childhood because they were one of my favorite hobbies. I often spent my free time solving different types of puzzles, which helped me develop problem-solving skills.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat confusing and contradictory. Make sure to clearly state when you do puzzles and explain your preferences logically. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid redundancy.

Example: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored, such as Sudoku or word puzzles. However, during my travels, I prefer to explore new places rather than doing puzzles.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and use precise vocabulary to express your abilities and preferences.

Example: I prefer doing number puzzles because I am good at mathematics and calculations. Whenever I start a number puzzle, I can understand it quickly. On the other hand, I find word puzzles more difficult because my vocabulary is limited.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use clear sentences with proper structure and linking words to express your opinion effectively.

Example: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they help keep the mind calm and relaxed. Moreover, puzzles foster logical and critical thinking skills, and they provide enjoyable entertainment regardless of age.

× I said because some of my favorite hobby whenever I was getting three time.

✓ I said because some of my favorite hobbies whenever I was getting three times.

The word 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it refers to more than one favorite activity. Also, 'time' should be plural 'times' to indicate multiple occasions.

× I said because some of my favorite hobby whenever I was getting three time.

✓ I said that some of my favorite hobbies were puzzles whenever I was three years old.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks proper structure. Adding 'that' and clarifying the time frame improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like to do puzzles, Sudoku or word puzzles or like they were traveling.

✓ I like to do puzzles, Sudoku, or word puzzles when I am traveling.

The phrase 'like they were traveling' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'when' to indicate the time of doing puzzles during traveling.

× I didn't prefer these kind of things.

✓ I didn't prefer these kinds of things.

The phrase 'these kind of things' should be 'these kinds of things' because 'these' refers to plural and 'kinds' should agree in number.

× I'm not much good at I'm not vocabulary things and I'm not good at doing word puzzles.

✓ I'm not very good at vocabulary and I'm not good at doing word puzzles.

The phrase 'I'm not much good at I'm not vocabulary things' is incorrect and redundant. It should be simplified to 'I'm not very good at vocabulary' for clarity.

× I like to do number parcel because I think I'm very good at numbers and mathematics and calculations everything.

✓ I like to do number puzzles because I think I'm very good at numbers, mathematics, and calculations.

The word 'parcel' is incorrect; it should be 'puzzles'. Also, 'calculations everything' is awkward; 'calculations' alone suffices.

× Buses are so good to make our mind calm and relaxed and energetically irrespective of the age and in order to get in order to foster our logic, critical thinking skills.

✓ Puzzles are very good to make our minds calm, relaxed, and energetic irrespective of age and to foster our logical and critical thinking skills.

'Buses' is a typo for 'puzzles'. 'Mind' should be plural 'minds'. 'Energetically' is an adverb; 'energetic' is the correct adjective here. The phrase 'in order to get in order to' is redundant and should be simplified.

× Do puzzles are so good and it's also not only to improve our skill but also to do something entertainable.

✓ Doing puzzles is very good; it not only improves our skills but also provides entertainment.

'Do puzzles are so good' is incorrect; the gerund 'Doing puzzles' is appropriate. 'Entertainable' is not a correct word; 'provides entertainment' is better.