Puzzles— Part 1 Report

× One was Kids often play jigsaw puzzle with my friends.

✓ Kids often play jigsaw puzzles with my friends.

这里的“jigsaw puzzle”应使用复数形式“jigsaw puzzles”，因为“Kids”是复数，表示多个孩子一起玩多个拼图游戏。名词的单复数要与主语保持一致。

× Well, actually when feel bored, I can play the jigsaw puzzles during a trip.

✓ Well, actually when I feel bored, I can play jigsaw puzzles during a trip.

缺少主语“I”，导致句子不完整。英语中从句必须有明确的主语。

× I can enjoy many beautiful areas and enjoy the interesting trip.

✓ I can enjoy many beautiful areas and enjoy the interesting trip.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× Well, I like to work puzzles.

✓ Well, I like to work on puzzles.

“work puzzles”表达不准确，正确表达应为“work on puzzles”，表示“做拼图”。

× Well, worst part of those, I think it's very difficult for me.

✓ Well, the worst part of those, I think, is very difficult for me.

缺少定冠词“the”，且主谓不一致，应为“the worst part ... is”。

× It require mathematical thinking and skills.

✓ It requires mathematical thinking and skills.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“requires”。

× He says so it's good for old people to buy those.

✓ I think it's good for old people to buy those.

“He says”与上下文不符，且表达不清，改为“I think”更符合语境。

× It can keep their minds active, improve their memories, and while it can help them pass a meaningful time.

✓ It can keep their minds active, improve their memories, and help them pass meaningful time.

“and while it can help”结构混乱，应去掉“while it can”，使句子结构平行且通顺。