Puzzles— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be clearer and more coherent. Try to form complete sentences and avoid repetition. Start with a direct response, then add specific details about your experience with puzzles in childhood. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Example: Yes, I did enjoy doing puzzles in my childhood. I remember when I was in the 5th grade, my teacher gave us many puzzles to solve. We often competed to see who could finish first, which made it very exciting and fun.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and natural. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid awkward phrasing. Also, try to use more precise vocabulary to explain the benefits of doing puzzles.

Example: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help distract my mind and improve my concentration. Additionally, solving puzzles sharpens my memory and boosts my confidence in problem-solving.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then explain why. Use linking words to make your explanation logical. Also, try to use more natural expressions when comparing difficulty.

Example: I find number puzzles more difficult than word puzzles because some, like Sudoku, can be quite complicated. Many people, including myself, find it challenging to solve them quickly.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Provide a clear opinion first, then support it with specific examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid vague phrases.

Example: I think it depends on the person, but many older people enjoy doing puzzles. For example, my father likes to solve word and number puzzles from the newspaper, which helps keep his mind active.

× I will remember when I was in the 5th grade that time my teacher was provided.

✓ I will remember when I was in the 5th grade that time my teacher provided.

The phrase 'was provided' is incorrect because 'provided' is an active verb here, not passive. The teacher is the subject who provides, so the past simple active form 'provided' should be used instead of the passive 'was provided'.

× My teacher provided many puzzles for her to all classmates and we compete each other to solve the puzzle in first whenever any kids or the puzzle in first.

✓ My teacher provided many puzzles to all classmates and we competed with each other to solve the puzzle first whenever any kids tried.

The pronoun 'her' is incorrectly used; it should be omitted or replaced with 'us' if referring to classmates. Also, 'compete each other' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'competed with each other'. The sentence also needs past tense consistency and clearer phrasing for 'solve the puzzle in first'.

× I mostly do solving the puzzle when I feel bored because it distract my mind and I can focus to solution of the puzzles and help me to sharp my memories and I can boost my confidence to use my mind so in this way.

✓ I mostly solve puzzles when I feel bored because it distracts my mind and helps me focus on the solutions of the puzzles, sharpens my memory, and boosts my confidence to use my mind in this way.

The phrase 'do solving' is incorrect; the verb 'solve' should be used directly. 'Distract' should be 'distracts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Focus to solution' should be 'focus on the solutions'. 'Help me to sharp' should be 'helps me sharpen'. The sentence also needs better structure and verb agreement.

× I think number puzzle is the more difficult compared to the word puzzle because sometimes puzzles are too complicated with the sudoku and so any person cannot easily find like me.

✓ I think number puzzles are more difficult compared to word puzzles because sometimes puzzles like sudoku are too complicated and not everyone can easily solve them like me.

The singular 'number puzzle' should be plural 'number puzzles' to match 'word puzzles'. 'The more difficult' should be 'more difficult' without 'the'. 'Any person cannot easily find like me' is unclear and should be 'not everyone can easily solve them like me' for clarity and correctness.

× It's depend on the person.

✓ It depends on the person.

'It's depend' is incorrect because 'depend' needs to be conjugated in the third person singular present tense as 'depends'.

× Many papers like to solve the puzzled.

✓ Many people like to solve puzzles.

'Papers' is incorrect; the intended word is 'people'. 'Puzzled' is an adjective or past participle, but the noun 'puzzles' is needed here.

× I see my father who is still now like to solve many puzzles at the word and sometimes at the number person, and when he even say in the newspaper started to solve it.

✓ I see my father who still likes to solve many word puzzles and sometimes number puzzles, and he even says he started to solve them in the newspaper.

'Is still now like' should be 'still likes' for correct present tense and subject-verb agreement. 'At the word and sometimes at the number person' is unclear and should be 'word puzzles and sometimes number puzzles'. 'When he even say' should be 'he even says'. The sentence needs restructuring for clarity and correct tense.