Jewelry— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Apni uttor ta aro spostho o sohoje bujha jaoya moto korun. Prothome proshner uttor dite hobe, tarpor proyojon moto bistarito kotha bolun. Apnar uttor e kichu bhul grammar ache, ar kichu kotha onek bar bar hoche, ja avoid kora uchit.

Example: No, I don't often wear jewelry. However, during special occasions like Eid, which is a famous festival in our country, I sometimes wear jewelry to celebrate.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e kichu grammar bhul ache, ar kichu kotha onek bar bar hoche. Apni proshner uttor spostho kore din, tarpor kichu karon o udaharan dite paren. Linking words babohar kore kotha ta aro sohoje bujhan.

Example: I like earrings and finger rings because I enjoy wearing them. Sometimes, I also like to receive jewelry as gifts from others.

Suggestion: Apnar uttor e grammar o sentence structure onek bhul ache. Apni proshner uttor spostho o shongjoto bhabe din. Apnar kotha shesh korte paren, ar kichu specific udaharan dite paren.

Example: I don't buy jewelry very often, but during special occasions like festivals, I prefer to buy earrings and other types of jewelry.

Suggestion: Apni proshner uttor e spostho bhabe kotha bolun. Jodi proshner uttor na jan, tahole seta spostho kore bolun, tarpor kichu dharana o karon dite paren. Grammar o vocabulary improve korar dorkar ache.

Example: I am not sure about the exact reasons, but I think some people wear jewelry for a long time because they like it a lot and it makes them look fashionable.

× I would like to say I'm hopeless about it because of I don't prefer always wear jewelry.

✓ I would like to say I'm hopeless about it because I don't always prefer to wear jewelry.

The phrase 'because of' is incorrectly used here; 'because' should be used to introduce a reason clause. Also, 'prefer always wear' is incorrect; it should be 'always prefer to wear' to maintain proper word order and verb form.

× If I talk about in any kind of occasion such as Eid, which is very renowned festival in our country, I would like to say in Muslim people.

✓ If I talk about any kind of occasion such as Eid, which is a very renowned festival in our country, I would like to say Muslim people wear jewelry.

The sentence structure is unclear and incomplete. 'If I talk about in any kind of occasion' is incorrect; 'about' should not be followed by 'in'. Also, 'I would like to say in Muslim people' is incomplete and unclear; it should specify what Muslim people do.

× I always loves to wear this kind of jewelry and sometimes I love to love to get gift others from others which is jewelry.

✓ I always love to wear this kind of jewelry and sometimes I love to get gifts from others which are jewelry.

The verb 'loves' is incorrect with the subject 'I'; it should be 'love'. Also, the phrase 'love to love to get gift others from others' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'love to get gifts from others'. The plural form 'gifts' is needed here.

× Not always, I would like to say from time to time IA prefer to buy jewelry such as any kind of occasion.

✓ Not always; I would like to say from time to time I prefer to buy jewelry for any kind of occasion.

The sentence lacks proper conjunction or punctuation to connect ideas. Also, 'IA' seems to be a typo for 'I'. The preposition 'for' is needed before 'any kind of occasion'.

× If I talk about it, which is very famous festival in our country, then I prefer to buy lots of jewelry such as earrings and.

✓ If I talk about it, which is a very famous festival in our country, then I prefer to buy lots of jewelry such as earrings.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'and' without completing the list. Also, 'very famous festival' needs the article 'a' before it.

× I would like to say they are very fascinated about wear jewelry.

✓ I would like to say they are very fascinated by wearing jewelry.

The phrase 'fascinated about wear jewelry' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'by' and the verb should be in the gerund form 'wearing' after 'fascinated by'.