Jewelry— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but a bit unclear and slightly repetitive. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise, and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of saying "I think I'm a clean outfit girl" and then "I want to match my clothes but without jewelry," you can combine these ideas more smoothly. Also, watch your grammar and word choice, such as "anything that uncomfortable" should be "anything uncomfortable."

Example: No, I don't often wear jewelry because I prefer a simple style that matches my clothes. Also, since I'm a bit clumsy, I avoid wearing anything uncomfortable.

Suggestion: Your answer needs clearer structure and more precise vocabulary. The phrase "I have purse in my ear like two holes per each" is confusing. Try to explain that you have multiple ear piercings. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: If I have to choose, I like earrings the most because I have two piercings in each ear. Earrings come in many styles, so I enjoy wearing different kinds to match my outfits.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors, such as "jewelries" which should be "jewelry" (uncountable). Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words like "uh." Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

Example: No, I don't usually buy jewelry because I prefer a neat style. Instead, I mix and match the simple pieces I already have.

Suggestion: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your sentences and explain your ideas more fully. Use linking words to connect your points logically. For example, explain why people might wear jewelry for a long time, such as sentimental value or personal style.

Example: I think it depends on the person. Some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time because it matches their style or has sentimental value. For example, they might have one favorite piece that they like to mix and match with different outfits.

× I don't usually buy jewelries quite often because I really love uh, being neat style so I don't want to buy too much or jewellery so I just mix and match.

✓ I don't usually buy jewelry quite often because I really love uh, being neat style so I don't want to buy too much jewelry so I just mix and match.

The word 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'jewelries' is incorrect. Use 'jewelry' for both singular and plural contexts.

× If I have to choose one, I would say I like earrings because I have purse in my ear like two holes per each.

✓ If I have to choose one, I would say I like earrings because I have piercings in my ears, like two holes in each.

The word 'purse' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'piercings'. Also, 'ear' should be plural 'ears' because there are two holes in each ear. The phrase 'per each' is redundant; 'in each' is sufficient.

× I want to match my clothes but without jewelry because I am a bit clumsy so I don't want to wear anything that uncomfortable for myself.

✓ I want to match my clothes but without jewelry because I am a bit clumsy, so I don't want to wear anything uncomfortable for myself.

The phrase 'anything that uncomfortable' is incorrect. The correct form is 'anything uncomfortable' because 'uncomfortable' is an adjective describing 'anything'. The word 'that' is unnecessary here.

× No, I don't usually buy jewelries quite often because I really love uh, being neat style so I don't want to buy too much or jewellery so I just mix and match.

✓ No, I don't usually buy jewelry quite often because I really love uh, being neat style so I don't want to buy too much jewelry so I just mix and match.

Again, 'jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is uncountable and should be used without an 's'. Also, 'too much or jewellery' is awkward; it should be 'too much jewelry'.

× I have purse in my ear like two holes per each.

✓ I have piercings in my ears, like two holes in each.

The preposition 'in' is correct for 'piercings in my ears'. The phrase 'per each' is incorrect; 'in each' is the proper expression.