Geography— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using simpler sentence structures and correct grammar. Avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are complete and coherent. For example, start with a clear topic sentence and then add specific details using linking words.

Example: I find geography quite interesting because it helps me learn about different places and their locations. For instance, knowing about the features of a place can make visiting it more enjoyable and easier to navigate.

Suggestion: Your answer needs to be more complete and coherent. Avoid incomplete sentences and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

Example: Yes, geography is useful even for people who are not experts. For example, when I travel to a new place, I check the climate and geographical conditions so that I can prepare properly and avoid any problems.

Suggestion: Try to combine your sentences to make your answer more fluent and natural. Avoid asking questions in your answer; instead, make statements. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I studied geography at school. My teacher was one of the best I have ever had because she always drew maps on the blackboard, which helped us learn about different places around the world.

Suggestion: Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Avoid awkward phrases like "wear geography teacher." Express your ideas directly and use linking words to explain your reasons.

Example: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not very interested in studying geography deeply. However, I would like to learn some basic knowledge about it for my own interest.

Suggestion: Try to improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific comparisons to make your answer more informative and natural.

Example: Yes, since coming to Canada, I have learned a lot about its geography. For example, unlike my home country where the climate is mild, Canada experiences extreme seasons due to its geographical conditions, which makes learning about it very interesting.

× I'm a person who is a bit distant to social, but geography is the one thing that used to attract me a bit.

✓ I'm a person who is a bit distant from social things, but geography is the one thing that used to attract me a bit.

The phrase 'distant to social' is incorrect; the correct preposition to use with 'distant' is 'from'. Also, 'social' alone is vague; adding 'things' clarifies the meaning.

× Additionally, I like knowing about the places where they're located and what are they consist of so that it helps me in visiting them.

✓ Additionally, I like knowing about the places where they're located and what they consist of so that it helps me when visiting them.

The sentence has incorrect word order in 'what are they consist of'; it should be 'what they consist of'. Also, 'helps me in visiting them' is better expressed as 'helps me when visiting them' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, it is very useful for a person who is not related to it also.

✓ Yes, it is very useful even for a person who is not related to it.

The phrase 'not related to it also' is awkward; 'even for a person who is not related to it' is clearer and more natural.

× For example, if I want to travel to a, please I need to know the climatic conditions and what are the.

✓ For example, if I want to travel to a place, I need to know the climatic conditions and what they are.

The sentence is incomplete and has misplaced words: 'a, please' should be 'a place', and 'what are the' is incomplete; it should be 'what they are' referring to climatic conditions.

× The geographical conditions over there so that I don't. End up in any difficult situation.

✓ I need to know the geographical conditions over there so that I don't end up in any difficult situation.

The sentence is fragmented with a period after 'don't'; it should be one continuous sentence for clarity.

× And my geography teacher is the one of the best teachers I have met in my life.

✓ And my geography teacher is one of the best teachers I have met in my life.

The phrase 'the one of the best' is incorrect; it should be 'one of the best' without 'the' before 'one'.

× She used to draw the map every time on the blackboard.

✓ She used to draw maps every time on the blackboard.

Using 'the map' implies a specific map, but here it is general; 'maps' plural is more appropriate.

× And had that helped us to identify the places all around the world?

✓ And that helped us to identify places all around the world.

The sentence is incorrectly structured as a question with 'had that helped'; it should be a statement in past tense 'that helped'.

× No, I don't want to wear geography teacher because I have never been that interested in learning geography, but definitely I will.

✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I have never been that interested in learning geography, but definitely I will.

The word 'wear' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'be' when referring to a profession.

× Be interested in learning a bit of it, but not to the extent of teaching to other people.

✓ I will be interested in learning a bit of it, but not to the extent of teaching other people.

The sentence fragment 'Be interested...' lacks a subject; adding 'I will' completes the sentence. Also, 'teaching to other people' should be 'teaching other people'.

× Yes, after coming to Canada, I have learned so many things about the geography.

✓ Yes, after coming to Canada, I have learned so many things about geography.

The word 'geography' here is a general subject and does not require the definite article 'the'.

× In my home country, the temperatures are a bit low and every season is moderate, but here there due to the geographical conditions every season.

✓ In my home country, the temperatures are a bit low and every season is moderate, but here, due to the geographical conditions, every season

The sentence is incomplete and has misplaced words; 'there due to' should be 'here, due to' with commas for clarity. The sentence needs completion.

× Is on it extremes so it's good to learn about it.

✓ is extreme, so it's good to learn about it.

The phrase 'Is on it extremes' is incorrect; it should be 'is extreme'. Also, it should be connected properly to the previous sentence for clarity.