Geography— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Сіз жауаптарыңызды табиғи әрі нақты етіп айтуыңыз керек. Мысалы, қайталауларды азайтып, сөйлемдерді қысқартуға тырысыңыз. Сонымен қатар, нақты мысалдар мен байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданыңыз.

Example: I didn't like geography before, but now I find it interesting because it helps me learn about different countries, their locations, and climates.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызды нақты әрі толық етіп беріңіз. Байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданып, ойыңызды логикалық түрде дамытыңыз.

Example: Yes, geography is very useful because it teaches us about different countries and cultures, which helps us become more open-minded.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызды қысқа әрі нақты етіп айтыңыз. Қайталауларды болдырмаңыз және қосымша мәліметтерді байланыстырушы сөздер арқылы қосыңыз.

Example: Yes, I studied geography at school, where it was one of the main subjects, and I enjoyed learning it.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызды нақты және түсінікті етіп айтыңыз. Қайталауларды азайтып, себептерді нақтылап, байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданыңыз.

Example: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I prefer English, which is easier for me to learn and teach.

Suggestion: Жауабыңызды қысқа әрі нақты етіп айтыңыз. Қайталауларды болдырмаңыз және байланыстырушы сөздерді қолданып, ойыңызды толықтырыңыз.

Example: Yes, I plan to learn more about other countries' geography because my current knowledge is limited, and I want to improve it.

× I used to do not like geography as a subject, but now I changed my mind.

✓ I used to not like geography as a subject, but now I have changed my mind.

The phrase 'used to do not like' is incorrect. The correct form is 'used to not like' or 'did not use to like'. Also, 'changed my mind' should be in present perfect 'have changed my mind' to indicate a change that affects the present.

× there is lots of countries and you want to know their placement and their weather and some other things about it.

✓ there are lots of countries and you want to know their locations, their weather, and some other things about them.

'There is' should be 'there are' because 'countries' is plural. 'Placement' is better replaced with 'locations' for clarity. 'About it' should be 'about them' to refer to plural 'countries'.

× due to geography we know about other countries around the world and we can be open minded by studying geography.

✓ because of geography, we know about other countries around the world and we can be open-minded by studying geography.

'Due to' is often misused; 'because of' is more appropriate here. Also, 'open minded' should be hyphenated as 'open-minded'.

× I have changed my mind and I think geography is really interesting because there is lots of countries and you want to know their placement and their weather and some other things about it.

✓ I have changed my mind and I think geography is really interesting because there are lots of countries and you want to know their locations, their weather, and some other things about them.

As before, 'there is' should be 'there are' for plural. Also, 'placement' is better as 'locations' and 'about it' should be 'about them'.

× in my school geography was the main, almost the main subject and we really took lots of attention on geography and I used to like studying it.

✓ In my school, geography was the main, or almost the main, subject and we really paid a lot of attention to geography and I used to like studying it.

'Took lots of attention on' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'paid a lot of attention to'. Also, commas improve clarity.

× we really took lots of attention on geography

✓ we really paid a lot of attention to geography

'Take attention on' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'pay attention to'.

× No, unfortunately I don't want to be a geography teacher because my favorite subject is English, so I want to be an English teacher in the future rather than geography teacher.

✓ No, unfortunately I don't want to be a geography teacher because my favorite subject is English, so I want to be an English teacher in the future rather than a geography teacher.

The article 'a' is missing before 'geography teacher' at the end of the sentence.

× For example, it's it's easier for me to learn English to study.

✓ For example, it's easier for me to study English.

The phrase 'learn English to study' is awkward and redundant. 'Study English' is the correct collocation. Also, the repeated 'it's' is a typo.

× Yes, I'm certainly planning to know everything about other countries because my knowledge of geography is really bad right now, is really poor, so I want to expand it in future and know everything about other countries.

✓ Yes, I'm certainly planning to learn everything about other countries because my knowledge of geography is really poor right now, so I want to expand it in the future and know everything about other countries.

'Planning to know' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'planning to learn'. Also, 'in future' should be 'in the future'. The phrase 'is really bad right now, is really poor' is redundant; 'really poor' suffices.