Part 1
Examiner
How do you like geography?
Candidate
Honestly, I don't like geography because when I was a high school student, I found that I didn't know how to solve the problems of about geography and I always got the lowest score in my class, so I was nervous about it. I didn't like it.
Examiner
Do you think geography is useful?
Candidate
Well, I think geography is really useful because it's connected with weather and our economic. I think geography is useful to our lives and people always use it to predict.
Examiner
Have you ever learned geography?
Candidate
Yes I have. When I was a high school student my teacher taught us about geography knowledge, but I think it is it was too difficult for me to study it. I struggled with it, but I didn't learn it well.
Examiner
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Candidate
No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not good at geography. When I was a high school student, I always got the lowest score in my class, which made me feel sad about it.
Examiner
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Candidate
Well, I think I'll get the opportunity to learn more about geography of other countries because I want to study abroad and I want to learn more about their culture, their geography, which makes me feel fulfilled.
How do you like geography?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答时应更自然简洁,避免重复表达“我不喜欢”,并且可以增加一些具体原因来丰富内容。
Example: I didn't enjoy geography in high school because I struggled with solving problems and often scored the lowest in my class, which made me feel nervous about the subject.
Do you think geography is useful?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中应注意语法准确性,如“our economic”应为“our economy”,并且可以使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: I believe geography is very useful because it relates to weather and our economy, so people often use it to make predictions about various aspects of life.
Have you ever learned geography?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答应避免语法错误和重复,如“it is it was”,并且可以用连接词使句子更流畅。
Example: Yes, I studied geography in high school, but I found it quite difficult and struggled to understand the material well.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 回答应更自然简洁,避免重复表达“我不擅长地理”,并且可以增加一些具体原因。
Example: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I wasn't good at the subject in school and often felt discouraged by my low scores.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Score: 75.0Suggestion: 回答中应注意冠词使用,如“the geography of other countries”,并且可以用连接词使表达更连贯。
Example: I hope to learn more about the geography of other countries when I study abroad, as it will help me understand their culture better and feel more fulfilled.
× I found that I didn't know how to solve the problems of about geography
✓ I found that I didn't know how to solve the problems about geography
介词“of”在这里多余,正确表达应为“problems about geography”,表示“关于地理的问题”。
× it's connected with weather and our economic
✓ it's connected with weather and our economy
“economic”是形容词,需用名词“economy”表示“经济”。
× I think geography is useful to our lives
✓ I think geography is useful in our lives
习惯用法是“useful in our lives”,表示“在我们的生活中有用”。
× people always use it to predict
✓ people always use it to make predictions
动词“predict”需要加名词形式“predictions”来完成表达,句子结构更完整。
× my teacher taught us about geography knowledge
✓ my teacher taught us geography knowledge
动词“teach”后直接跟授课内容,无需介词“about”。
× but I think it is it was too difficult for me to study it
✓ but I think it was too difficult for me to study
句中“it is it was”重复且时态混乱,应使用过去时“it was”,且末尾“study it”中“it”多余。
× I want to learn more about their culture, their geography, which makes me feel fulfilled
✓ I want to learn more about their culture and their geography, which makes me feel fulfilled
并列名词之间应使用连词“and”,使句子结构清晰。