Geography— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid repetition and make your answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence and then briefly explain your reason using linking words for coherence.

Example: Honestly, I don't like geography because it involves memorizing many locations, maps, and diagrams, which I find quite confusing.

Suggestion: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Also, try to be more specific about why geography is useful.

Example: From my perspective, geography is very useful because it helps us understand our country's locations and environment, which is important for everyone.

Suggestion: Improve sentence structure and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about what you learned and why you are interested.

Example: Yes, I learned geography at school when the teacher explained our nation's geographical culture and land areas, which I found quite interesting.

Suggestion: Make your answer more concise and clear. Avoid unnecessary repetition and use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Honestly, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I plan to become a nursing officer, although I believe geography is an important subject for students.

Suggestion: Try to improve grammar and sentence clarity. Use linking words to make your answer coherent and provide specific reasons for your interest.

Example: Yes, I want to learn about the geography of other countries because they have different traditions, cultures, and landforms, which I find fascinating to explore.

× To be true, I don't like geography because in my in my school time also I don't like geography because there are a lot of locations and maps and diagrams of land and countries, but I don't like geography.

✓ To be true, I didn't like geography during my school time because there were a lot of locations, maps, and diagrams of land and countries, but I didn't like geography.

The phrase 'in my school time' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'during' to indicate a period of time. Also, the tense should be past ('didn't like') because the speaker refers to a past period (school time). Repetition of 'I don't like geography' is unnecessary and corrected for clarity.

× According to my perspective, geography plays a significant roles in our nation whereas studying numerous locations, maps and diagrams which I found quite confusing but it is very necessary for every individual to study these locations which are necessary for.

✓ According to my perspective, geography plays a significant role in our nation while studying numerous locations, maps, and diagrams, which I find quite confusing, but it is very necessary for every individual to study these locations.

The word 'roles' should be singular 'role' because 'geography' is singular. Also, 'whereas' is incorrectly used; 'while' is more appropriate here to contrast ideas. The sentence was incomplete and has been corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Yes, I have already told you that I have learned geography in my school when teacher, a teacher told us the geographical cultural of our nation.

✓ Yes, I have already told you that I learned geography in my school when a teacher told us about the geographical culture of our nation.

The phrase 'have learned' is acceptable but 'learned' is more natural here. The article 'a' should precede 'teacher'. 'Geographical cultural' is incorrect; it should be 'geographical culture'. Also, 'told us the geographical cultural' is incorrect; it should be 'told us about the geographical culture'.

× Then I learned that geographical land areas in our nation and I do interest in them.

✓ Then I learned about the geographical land areas in our nation and I am interested in them.

The verb 'learned' should be followed by 'about' to indicate the topic learned. 'I do interest in them' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I am interested in them' to express interest.

× To be very honest, I don't want to be a geographical teacher because I want to be a nursing officer in future as well as geography is a very significant subject for every student to learn their geographical land area and the nation's maps and diagrams, but I don't.

✓ To be very honest, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I want to be a nursing officer in the future. Geography is a very significant subject for every student to learn about their geographical land area and the nation's maps and diagrams, but I don't.

The adjective 'geographical' is incorrectly used to describe 'teacher'; the correct term is 'geography teacher'. The phrase 'in future' should be 'in the future'. The sentence was run-on and has been split for clarity. The phrase 'learn their geographical land area' should be 'learn about their geographical land area'.

× Yes, I want to learn about the geography of other country because they're different traditionals and cultures and various land forms of another nation that everyone wants to explore much more.

✓ Yes, I want to learn about the geography of other countries because they have different traditions and cultures and various landforms of other nations that everyone wants to explore more.

The singular 'country' should be plural 'countries' to match 'other'. 'They're different traditionals' is incorrect; it should be 'they have different traditions'. 'Land forms' should be one word 'landforms'. 'Another nation' should be 'other nations' to maintain plural consistency.

× Whereas I want to explore new land areas of different culture and see them very.

✓ I want to explore new land areas of different cultures and see them closely.

The sentence starts with 'Whereas' incorrectly; it is removed for clarity. 'Different culture' should be plural 'different cultures' to match 'land areas'. The phrase 'see them very' is incomplete and unclear; 'see them closely' or 'see them in detail' is appropriate.