Part 1
Examiner
How do you like geography?
Candidate
I don't like geography because I think it is a subject is too difficult for me. I have a bad geography scores. But I think some things about geography is interesting, so now I try to realize it.
Examiner
Do you think geography is useful?
Candidate
Yes, I think it is a very useful subject. Like it useful in our daily life, like we how to how to use maps. Maps is from the geography and it is also useful in the army, in the war.
Examiner
Have you ever learned geography?
Candidate
Yes, I have ever learned geography in the middle school. As a as a art you student, we have learned geography in the high school but this is my most.
Examiner
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Candidate
No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I think as a teacher you should be a good scores and you should be interested in it. But I don't like both both things. So I think I don't want to be a geography teacher.
Examiner
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Candidate
Yes, sometimes I just look videos on the apps from the phone. I think some videos about other country's geography is very interesting. They describe another word I don't know before it is very.
How do you like geography?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 回答时语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且句子结构不完整。建议简化句子,避免重复,使用更准确的表达方式。
Example: I don't like geography because I find it difficult and my scores are low. However, some topics are interesting, so I am trying to understand it better.
Do you think geography is useful?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答中有语法和表达错误,且重复使用“like”。建议使用连贯的句子,避免重复,并用具体例子支持观点。
Example: Yes, geography is very useful in daily life, such as learning how to read maps. It is also important in the military for planning strategies.
Have you ever learned geography?
Score: 50.0Suggestion: 回答不清晰,语法错误多,表达混乱。建议直接回答问题,使用简单明了的句子。
Example: Yes, I studied geography in middle school and high school as part of my courses.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 表达重复且语法错误较多。建议简洁表达原因,避免重复,并使用正确的语法。
Example: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not good at the subject and I am not interested in it.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 回答不完整且语法错误明显。建议完整表达观点,使用连贯句子,并避免语法错误。
Example: Yes, I sometimes watch videos on my phone about the geography of other countries. I find them very interesting because they teach me about places I didn't know before.
× I don't like geography because I think it is a subject is too difficult for me.
✓ I don't like geography because I think it is a subject that is too difficult for me.
句子中缺少连接词,导致结构不完整。需要添加关系代词'that'来连接两个分句,使句子结构完整。
× I have a bad geography scores.
✓ I have bad geography scores.
名词'scores'是复数,前面不应该使用不定冠词'a',应去掉'a'。
× some things about geography is interesting
✓ some things about geography are interesting
主语'some things'是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式'are',而不是单数'is'。
× so now I try to realize it.
✓ so now I try to understand it.
动词'realize'用法不当,表达理解应使用'verb + to + 动词原形'结构,且'realize'通常表示突然意识到,改为'understand'更合适。
× Like it useful in our daily life, like we how to how to use maps.
✓ Like it is useful in our daily life, like how we use maps.
缺少动词'is',且重复'how to',应简化为'how we use'。
× Maps is from the geography and it is also useful in the army, in the war.
✓ Maps are from geography and they are also useful in the army, in the war.
主语'Maps'是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式'are',代词也应改为复数'they'。
× Yes, I have ever learned geography in the middle school.
✓ Yes, I have learned geography in middle school.
'have ever learned'用法不当,'ever'通常用于疑问句或否定句,肯定句中应省略。
× As a as a art you student, we have learned geography in the high school but this is my most.
✓ As an art student, we learned geography in high school but this is my most difficult subject.
'as a as a'重复,应改为'an';'you'应为'you'的误写,改为'art student';'have learned'改为一般过去时'learned';句尾不完整,补充完整。
× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I think as a teacher you should be a good scores and you should be interested in it.
✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I think as a teacher you should have good scores and be interested in it.
'a good scores'中'scores'为复数,不能用不定冠词'a',应改为'have good scores'。
× But I don't like both both things.
✓ But I don't like either of those things.
'both both things'重复且用法错误,应改为'either of those things'表达否定含义。
× Yes, sometimes I just look videos on the apps from the phone.
✓ Yes, sometimes I just watch videos on apps on my phone.
'look videos'用法错误,应为'watch videos';'the apps'改为'apps';'from the phone'改为'on my phone'。
× I think some videos about other country's geography is very interesting.
✓ I think some videos about other countries' geography are very interesting.
'videos'为复数,谓语动词应为'are';'other country's'应为复数所有格'other countries''。
× They describe another word I don't know before it is very.
✓ They describe another world I didn't know before, and it is very interesting.
句子结构混乱,缺少连词和谓语,需补充完整并调整顺序。