Geography— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to give a direct response with a clear opinion and supporting detail, using correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid hesitation sounds like 'umm'.

Example: I didn't like geography much when I was a kid, but now I find it more interesting because it helps me understand the world better.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat contradictory and vague. Be clear about your opinion and support it with specific reasons. Avoid filler phrases like 'you know'.

Example: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps improve my knowledge about different places and cultures, which makes me more confident when traveling.

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat off-topic and unclear. Focus on answering the question directly and provide clear supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words.

Example: Yes, I learned geography at school, but I preferred subjects like algebra and geometry because they helped me develop skills useful for my career as a motion designer.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but contains hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to express your preference clearly and use more precise vocabulary.

Example: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. I would prefer to teach math because I find working with numbers more interesting.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Give a clear and direct response with specific reasons, and avoid filler words.

Example: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of other countries to improve my knowledge and become more informed about the world.

× Umm, when I was a kid I used. I didn't used to be a thought of geography as well as now, I would even say.

✓ Umm, when I was a kid I used to. I didn't use to think of geography as well as I do now, I would even say.

The phrase 'didn't used to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'didn't use to' because 'did' is already in past tense and the base form of the verb 'use' should follow. Also, 'be a thought of geography' is incorrect; it should be 'think of geography'. The sentence is corrected to reflect proper past tense usage and verb forms.

× I didn't used to be a thought of geography as well as now, I would even say.

✓ I didn't use to think of geography as well as I do now, I would even say.

The phrase 'be a thought of geography' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'think of geography'. Also, 'as well as now' requires a subject and verb for comparison, so 'I do now' is added for clarity and correctness.

× Well, I wouldn't say that it's helpful, but it basically allows you to improve and enhance your intellect abilities and generally be more confident in yourself, you know?

✓ Well, I wouldn't say that it's helpful, but it basically allows you to improve and enhance your intellectual abilities and generally be more confident in yourself, you know?

The word 'intellect' is a noun, but the adjective form 'intellectual' is needed to describe 'abilities'. Using the correct adjective improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, when I was a kid, like I said before, I wasn't fond of geography. Instead I devoted most of my time to algebra or geometry at the same time.

✓ Well, when I was a kid, like I said before, I wasn't fond of geography. Instead, I devoted most of my time to algebra and geometry at the same time.

The conjunction 'or' is incorrect here because the student devoted time to both subjects simultaneously. 'And' is the correct conjunction to indicate inclusion of both subjects.

× Umm, just diving deeper into specific, specifically these subjects.

✓ Umm, I was just diving deeper into these specific subjects.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb, making it a fragment. Adding 'I was' completes the sentence structure and clarifies the meaning.

× Uh, which by the way, allowed me to become motion designer.

✓ Uh, which, by the way, allowed me to become a motion designer.

The phrase 'become motion designer' is missing the article 'a' before the profession. Adding 'a' corrects the sentence structure and makes it grammatically correct.

× Instead I would probably prefer more being math teacher related to probably like numbers or something, uh, similar to that, which is much interesting for me.

✓ Instead, I would probably prefer being a math teacher, related to numbers or something similar to that, which is much more interesting to me.

The phrase 'prefer more being' is awkward; 'prefer being' is correct. Also, 'math teacher related to probably like numbers' is unclear and corrected to 'math teacher, related to numbers'. 'Much interesting' should be 'much more interesting', and 'for me' should be 'to me' for correct preposition usage.

× Well over the last time I turned uh, mine starts to studying this to just improve my intellect abilities and in generally be more clever into a weird subjects, so I will say yes.

✓ Well, recently I started studying this to just improve my intellectual abilities and generally be more knowledgeable in some unusual subjects, so I will say yes.

The original sentence has multiple preposition errors: 'turned uh, mine starts to studying' is unclear and corrected to 'recently I started studying'; 'in generally' should be 'generally'; 'be more clever into a weird subjects' is incorrect, corrected to 'be more knowledgeable in some unusual subjects'. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.