Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use more natural phrasing and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of repeating 'I love flowers', you can say 'I really appreciate the unique beauty of different kinds of flowers.' Also, correct grammar such as 'variety kinds' should be 'various kinds'.

Example: Yes, I really appreciate the unique beauty of various kinds of flowers, which is why I love them.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and has grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. For example, say 'Yes, many women I know love flowers because they find them beautiful and refreshing.' Also, avoid incomplete sentences and unclear expressions.

Example: Yes, many women I know love flowers because they find them beautiful and refreshing.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and has grammar mistakes. Try to give a clear and concise answer. For example, 'No, I live in Bangkok, which is a big city with many buildings, so there are not many flowers around.' Avoid unrelated or unclear phrases like 'in the corner York'.

Example: No, I live in Bangkok, which is a big city with many buildings, so there are not many flowers around.

Suggestion: Your answer is good but can be more natural and concise. For example, say 'Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I love them and enjoy recalling the pleasant feelings they bring.' Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'when I recall back when I recall that feeling.'

Example: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I love them and enjoy recalling the pleasant feelings they bring.

Suggestion: Your answer has good ideas but needs clearer expression and grammar correction. For example, 'Yes, I know people who often send flowers to loved ones. Different kinds of flowers have different meanings, so they are used for various occasions.' Avoid incomplete sentences and repeated words.

Example: Yes, I know people who often send flowers to loved ones. Different kinds of flowers have different meanings, so they are used for various occasions.

× I think variety kinds of flowers have their own uniqueness and their own beauty.

✓ I think various kinds of flowers have their own uniqueness and their own beauty.

The phrase 'variety kinds' is incorrect; it should be 'various kinds' to correctly express multiple types. 'Variety' is a singular noun and cannot directly modify 'kinds' which is plural. Using 'various' correctly modifies the plural noun 'kinds'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I do not know a person that like flowers in specific condition but I the people around me who are women actually love flowers.

✓ I do not know a person who likes flowers in a specific condition, but the people around me who are women actually love flowers.

The verb 'like' must agree with the singular subject 'a person', so it should be 'likes'. Also, 'that' is better replaced with 'who' when referring to people. The phrase 'I the people' is incorrect and should be 'the people'. Adding 'a' before 'specific condition' is necessary for grammatical correctness.

× I think women and flowers some kind of woman and flowers.

✓ I think women and flowers are somehow connected.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding the verb 'are' and rephrasing to 'somehow connected' clarifies the intended meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× No, now I live in Bangkok of Thailand so the atmosphere around me is consist of many of buildings or in the corner York maybe like many fields, but there's not that much flowers.

✓ No, now I live in Bangkok, Thailand, so the atmosphere around me consists of many buildings. In the outskirts, there may be many fields, but there aren't that many flowers.

The phrase 'live in Bangkok of Thailand' is incorrect; it should be 'Bangkok, Thailand'. 'Is consist of' is wrong; the correct form is 'consists of'. 'Many of buildings' should be 'many buildings'. 'In the corner York' is unclear and likely meant 'in the outskirts'. 'Not that much flowers' should be 'not that many flowers' because 'flowers' is countable.

× You should.

✓ You shouldn't.

The sentence 'You should.' is incomplete and unclear in context. Likely, the speaker intended to say 'You shouldn't' to express that there are not many flowers, implying a negative suggestion. Modal verbs must be used with appropriate context and objects.

× Of course, if I see flowers in my daily life, I would take a picture of it for sure because I love flowers and I like this feeling when I recall back when I recall that feeling.

✓ Of course, if I see flowers in my daily life, I would take a picture of them for sure because I love flowers and I like the feeling when I recall that moment.

'A picture of it' should be 'a picture of them' because 'flowers' is plural. The phrase 'I like this feeling when I recall back when I recall that feeling' is redundant and awkward; simplifying to 'I like the feeling when I recall that moment' improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I see my friend keep sending the flowers to her girlfriend every single week.

✓ Yes, I see my friend keep sending flowers to her girlfriend every single week.

The phrase 'the flowers' is incorrect here because it refers to flowers in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes it plural and general, which is appropriate in this context.

× I think different kind of flowers have their own meanings so it can be used in in very different.

✓ I think different kinds of flowers have their own meanings, so they can be used in very different ways.

'Different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' to agree with 'flowers'. The phrase 'used in in very different' is incorrect; it should be 'used in very different ways' to complete the thought properly.