Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to use more varied vocabulary and correct minor grammar errors to sound more natural. For example, use 'brighten' instead of 'brightening' and 'pleasant fragrance' instead of 'present fragrance'.

Example: Yes, I do. I love all kinds of flowers because they brighten up my space and make me feel very happy. For example, I especially enjoy roses and lilies because of their beautiful colors and pleasant fragrance.

Suggestion: Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and plural forms to improve accuracy. For example, 'dad brings' and 'bouquets of sunflowers'.

Example: Yes, I do. My mom absolutely loves flowers, especially sunflowers. She adores them not only because of their bright and cheerful colors, but also because sunflowers symbolize happiness and positivity, which really resonate with her. Whenever my dad brings her a bouquet of sunflowers, she's absolutely delighted.

Suggestion: Use more precise vocabulary; 'scrubs' should be 'shrubs'. Also, try to add linking words to improve coherence.

Example: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because my mum prefers growing other types of plants. Although she likes flowers, she finds them difficult to take care of, so we mostly have green plants instead. For example, she grows a lot of herbs and small shrubs in our garden.

Suggestion: Avoid unclear pronouns and improve sentence clarity. For example, replace 'it and small delicate flower' with 'a small delicate flower'.

Example: Yes, I do take photos of flowers quite often because I find them very beautiful and captivating. For example, one day when I was walking to the canteen, I noticed a small delicate flower and decided to capture a photo of it. Although my friends might not understand why I enjoy this hobby, I like preserving these little moments of nature in my daily life.

Suggestion: Complete your sentences fully and avoid abrupt endings. For example, finish the last sentence with a complete thought.

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others, especially to their loved ones on special occasions like Valentine's Day or birthdays. For example, I once saw an elderly man giving flowers to another senior, which I found very touching and charming because it showed genuine care and affection. I think sending flowers is a beautiful way to express feelings.

× Whenever my dad bring her a bouquet of sunflower, she's absolutely delight.

✓ Whenever my dad brings her a bouquet of sunflowers, she's absolutely delighted.

The subject 'my dad' is singular, so the verb should be 'brings' to agree in number. 'Sunflower' should be plural 'sunflowers' because it refers to multiple flowers in a bouquet. 'She's absolutely delight' is incorrect; the adjective 'delight' should be the past participle adjective 'delighted' to describe her feeling.

× For example, one day when I was walking to the canteen, I noticed it and small delicate flower and decided to capture a photo of it.

✓ For example, one day when I was walking to the canteen, I noticed a small delicate flower and decided to capture a photo of it.

The phrase 'noticed it and small delicate flower' is incorrect because 'it' is unnecessary and causes confusion. The correct phrase is 'noticed a small delicate flower' using the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'flower'.

× I think sending flowers is a beautiful.

✓ I think sending flowers is beautiful.

The sentence ends with 'a beautiful' which is incomplete because 'beautiful' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. Removing the article 'a' makes the sentence correct, as 'beautiful' here functions as a predicate adjective describing 'sending flowers'.