Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ, hãy nói về cảm giác khi nhìn thấy hoa hoặc lý do bạn thích hoa cụ thể nào đó.

Example: Yes, I love flowers very much. For example, roses and sunflowers are my favorites because they bring me a sense of peace and their fragrance is very soothing.

Suggestion: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể về sở thích của mẹ bạn.

Example: Definitely, my mother loves flowers. She often buys different kinds of flowers because gardening is her favorite hobby.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời có lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy mô tả cụ thể về hoa trong khu vực bạn sống.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers in my neighborhood. Neighbors and relatives plant various flowers like roses and sunflowers, which create a peaceful atmosphere.

Suggestion: Bạn nên dùng từ ngữ tự nhiên và tránh cách diễn đạt khó hiểu. Hãy nói rõ lý do bạn thích chụp hoa và cảm xúc của bạn khi làm việc đó.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because it helps me enjoy life and lifts my mood.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và chính xác hơn về văn hóa. Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để diễn đạt ý tưởng về truyền thống tặng hoa.

Example: In Vietnam, it is common to give flowers as a traditional gesture to show respect and good wishes when people meet.

× Well, I am a person of flower enthusiast, so I would say that I am into a wide range of flowers such as roses or sunflowers.

✓ Well, I am a flower enthusiast, so I would say that I am into a wide range of flowers such as roses and sunflowers.

The phrase 'a person of flower enthusiast' is incorrect because 'enthusiast' is a noun that directly describes the person. The correct form is 'a flower enthusiast'. Also, 'such as roses or sunflowers' should use 'and' instead of 'or' to indicate examples in a list.

× It gave me a sense of tranquility and smell.

✓ They give me a sense of tranquility and a pleasant smell.

The pronoun 'It' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural, so 'They' should be used. Also, 'gave' is past tense but the context suggests a general truth, so present tense 'give' is appropriate. 'Smell' needs an adjective to clarify meaning, so 'a pleasant smell' is better.

× Well my mother is the one who in love with flowers.

✓ Well, my mother is the one who is in love with flowers.

The phrase 'who in love with' is missing the verb 'is'. The correct phrase is 'who is in love with'.

× She always she frequently buy flowers on a regular basis due to her hobbies.

✓ She always or frequently buys flowers on a regular basis due to her hobbies.

The sentence has redundancy with 'always she frequently'. Also, 'buy' should be 'buys' to agree with the third person singular subject 'She'. Using either 'always' or 'frequently' is sufficient.

× Well, in my local community, neighbors and relatives are plan a wide range of flowers such as roses and sunflowers, which gave us which gave me a sense of tranquility and peacefulness.

✓ Well, in my local community, neighbors and relatives plant a wide range of flowers such as roses and sunflowers, which give me a sense of tranquility and peacefulness.

The verb 'are plan' is incorrect; it should be 'plant' to match the plural subject. Also, 'which gave us which gave me' is repetitive and inconsistent in pronouns; it should be 'which give me' to maintain present tense and singular pronoun.

× Well, on a regular basis I capture photos of flowers quite frequently since it brings me a good effort of relishing my life and also live up my spirit.

✓ Well, on a regular basis, I capture photos of flowers quite frequently since it helps me enjoy my life and lift up my spirit.

The phrase 'brings me a good effort of relishing my life' is awkward and incorrect. 'Helps me enjoy my life' is clearer. Also, 'live up my spirit' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lift up my spirit'.

× In my country, particularly in Vietnam, people have a tendency of giving others flowers as a tradition, cultural where people represent it a good perform when they meet each other.

✓ In my country, particularly in Vietnam, people have a tradition of giving flowers to others as a cultural practice, which represents a good gesture when they meet each other.

The phrase 'have a tendency of giving others flowers as a tradition, cultural' is confusing and incorrect. 'Have a tradition of giving flowers to others as a cultural practice' is clearer. 'Represent it a good perform' is incorrect; 'represents a good gesture' is appropriate.