Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and avoid redundancy. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you love flowers with specific reasons.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because they have a soothing effect on my mind. Moreover, giving flowers is a beautiful way to express emotions and love. Their fragrance also attracts many people and uplifts their mood.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, mention the person first, then describe their love for flowers with specific details.

Example: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. For instance, my mother has many flower pots on our terrace, and she spends most of her time taking care of them. I am often surprised to see her buying flowers from different places regularly.

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by using better sentence structure and linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'impacts on the flowers life'. Instead, explain the effect of urbanization more naturally. Also, keep your sentences concise.

Example: No, there are not many flowers where I live because modernization and urbanization have reduced green spaces. However, some people grow flowers in small gardens in front of their houses.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear expressions like 'I get dirty to take photos'. Try to use correct phrases and clearer sentences. Also, avoid redundancy and keep your answer natural and effective.

Example: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers daily. However, when I visit places with many different kinds of flowers, I like to take pictures to keep memories for the future.

Suggestion: Your answer is repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to avoid redundancy and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, clarify your points with specific reasons and examples.

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to express love and emotions. Flowers can uplift someone's mood and help improve their feelings, which is why many people choose to send them on special occasions.

× Yes, I love flowers because there appears to me and has a soothing effect on my mind and I think it is the best way to give flower to show emotion and love and the fragrance of flowers attract anyone minds.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they appear to me and have a soothing effect on my mind. I think it is the best way to give flowers to show emotion and love, and the fragrance of flowers attracts anyone's mind.

The phrase 'there appears to me' is incorrect; 'they appear to me' correctly refers to flowers as the subject. Also, 'has' should be 'have' to agree with the plural subject 'flowers'. 'Give flower' should be 'give flowers' to match plural usage. 'Attract anyone minds' should be 'attracts anyone's mind' to show possession and correct verb agreement.

× Yes Sir, I know lot of people who loves flower.

✓ Yes Sir, I know a lot of people who love flowers.

The phrase 'lot of people' needs an article 'a' to be 'a lot of people'. The verb 'loves' should be 'love' to agree with the plural subject 'people'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× she has a lot of flower pot at my terrace and she spent her mostly time by carrying them

✓ she has a lot of flower pots on my terrace and she spends most of her time taking care of them

The preposition 'at' should be 'on' when referring to a terrace. 'Flower pot' should be plural 'flower pots' to match 'a lot of'. 'Spent her mostly time by carrying them' is incorrect; it should be 'spends most of her time taking care of them' to express habitual action and correct verb usage.

× I even surprised when I see see purchased flower on regular places.

✓ I am even surprised when I see her purchase flowers regularly.

The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'am' for the present tense 'surprised'. 'See see' is a repetition error; only one 'see' is needed. 'Purchased flower on regular places' is awkward; 'purchase flowers regularly' is clearer and grammatically correct.

× No, there are not a lot of flowers where I live because I live in a residential area and it's a modernization and urbanization that impacts on the flowers life.

✓ No, there are not a lot of flowers where I live because I live in a residential area, and modernization and urbanization impact the life of flowers.

The phrase 'it's a modernization and urbanization' is incorrect; 'modernization and urbanization' are general concepts and do not need 'a'. 'Impacts on the flowers life' should be 'impact the life of flowers' for correct verb usage and noun phrase.

× But people have some place in the front of their house where they grow a lot of flowers.

✓ But people have some space in front of their houses where they grow a lot of flowers.

'Some place' should be 'some space' to indicate area. 'In the front of their house' should be 'in front of their houses' for correct preposition and plural form.

× No, I am not a fond of taking photos of flowers in my daily basis, but sometimes whenever I go at the place where a lot of varieties of flower available then I get dirty to take photos and create memory for my future.

✓ No, I am not fond of taking photos of flowers on a daily basis, but sometimes whenever I go to a place where many varieties of flowers are available, I feel eager to take photos and create memories for my future.

'Not a fond' should be 'not fond'. 'In my daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'Go at the place' should be 'go to a place'. 'A lot of varieties of flower available' should be 'many varieties of flowers are available'. 'Get dirty to take photos' is incorrect; 'feel eager to take photos' conveys the intended meaning. 'Create memory' should be plural 'create memories'.

× Yes, mostly people in my country often send flowers to other because they think it is the best way to show love and emotion toward another person.

✓ Yes, most people in my country often send flowers to others because they think it is the best way to show love and emotion toward another person.

'Mostly people' should be 'most people' as 'mostly' is an adverb and 'most' is the correct quantifier here. 'Send flowers to other' should be 'send flowers to others' to use the correct plural pronoun.

× And the flower that thing that uplift the everyone's mood and also change the people bad mood into a good that's why some people.

✓ Flowers uplift everyone's mood and can change a person's bad mood into a good one; that's why some people send them.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'The flower that thing that uplift the everyone's mood' is incorrect; it should be 'Flowers uplift everyone's mood'. 'Change the people bad mood into a good' should be 'change a person's bad mood into a good one'. The sentence needs to be completed logically to convey the intended meaning.