Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is natural and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and keep your response concise. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of repeating 'I love flowers' twice, you can say why you love them and give an example in a connected way.

Example: Yes, I really love flowers because of their beautiful smell. For instance, I received a flower bouquet on my birthday last year, which made me very happy, and I took some pictures to keep the memory.

Suggestion: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and could be clearer. Use correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, my mother and sister love flowers. They have planted roses and sunflowers in our backyard garden because these are their favourite flowers.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating the word 'flowers' unnecessarily. Also, try to link your sentences logically.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In fact, my mother and sister have planted roses and other flowers in our backyard, and they enjoy taking care of them.

Suggestion: Your answer is understandable but has grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'the OR it shines'. Try to use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas.

Example: Yes, I love taking pictures of flowers, but not every day. For example, I take photos when I see a unique flower or when it looks fresh and beautiful after the rain.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant but has sentence fragments starting with 'Because'. Try to combine sentences to make your answer more fluent and natural. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly.

Example: Yes, in India, people usually send flowers as gifts or greetings because it is a gesture to show love to their loved ones and friends. Flowers are considered a good and thoughtful gift option.

× my mother and my sister loves flowers and they have also planted some in the backyard in a garden and they have planted rose and sunflower because they are the favourites of them.

✓ my mother and my sister love flowers and they have also planted some in the backyard garden and they have planted roses and sunflowers because they are their favourites.

The subject 'my mother and my sister' is plural, so the verb should be 'love' instead of 'loves'. Also, 'rose and sunflower' should be plural as 'roses and sunflowers' because multiple flowers are implied. 'Favourites of them' is incorrect; it should be 'their favourites' to correctly use the possessive pronoun.

× my mother and my sister has also planted roses and flowers in our backyard and they love to take care of it and we have so many plants of flowers.

✓ my mother and my sister have also planted roses and flowers in our backyard and they love to take care of them and we have so many flower plants.

The subject 'my mother and my sister' is plural, so the verb should be 'have' instead of 'has'. 'Take care of it' is incorrect because 'roses and flowers' are plural, so it should be 'take care of them'. 'Plants of flowers' is awkward; 'flower plants' is more natural.

× they are the favourites of them.

✓ they are their favourites.

The phrase 'favourites of them' is incorrect; the possessive pronoun 'their' should be used to indicate ownership, so it should be 'their favourites'.