Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition to make your answer more natural and fluent. Also, keep your answer concise and directly related to the question. For example, mention your favorite flowers and briefly explain why you like them, without repeating words.

Example: Yes, I love flowers, especially lilies and pink roses. In our culture, giving flowers symbolizes kindness and hospitality, which makes them very special to me.

Suggestion: Be careful with pronunciation and word choice, for example, 'flour' should be 'flowers'. Also, try to organize your ideas clearly and avoid confusing sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, my mother loves flowers, especially lilies because they are beautiful. Moreover, her name is Lily, which makes these flowers even more special to her.

Suggestion: Try to use correct grammar and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of 'the people of the house, the people of the houses', say 'the homeowners'. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: There are not many flowers where I live, but some private gardens have various kinds of flowers. The homeowners usually take care of these gardens, which makes me feel happy.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, check verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

Example: Yes, taking photos of flowers is a hobby of mine. Whenever I see different kinds of flowers, I take pictures, and the results always make me happy.

Suggestion: Try to avoid sentence fragments and improve grammar. Combine sentences using linking words for better flow. For example, explain occasions and the meaning of giving flowers clearly.

Example: Yes, in my country, people often give flowers as gifts on occasions like weddings and anniversaries because flowers symbolize kindness and a warm welcome.

× Yes, my mother loves flour very much.

✓ Yes, my mother loves flowers very much.

The word 'flour' is incorrect here; it should be 'flowers' to match the context of the question about flowers. 'Flour' is a powder used in cooking, not related to flowers.

× she is and pregnant in in fact her name stars is Lily, which makes her more fondness with these flowers even more special.

✓ she is pregnant; in fact, her name is Lily, which makes her fondness for these flowers even more special.

The original sentence has incorrect word usage and structure. 'and pregnant in in fact her name stars is Lily' is confusing and grammatically incorrect. Correcting to 'she is pregnant; in fact, her name is Lily' clarifies the meaning. Also, 'more fondness with' should be 'fondness for' to use the correct preposition.

× The people of the house, the people of the houses usually gardening different kinds of flowers, which makes me feel happy.

✓ The people of the houses usually garden different kinds of flowers, which makes me feel happy.

'Gardening' is a verb form here but should be 'garden' as the verb. Also, 'the people of the house, the people of the houses' is redundant; 'the people of the houses' suffices. 'Garden' is the correct verb meaning to tend plants.

× Yes it's it's kind of a hobby for me whenever I saw different kinds of flowers around me I always go for taking pictures and the the outcome of the pictures are always always nice and it's makes me feel happy to be do some.

✓ Yes, it's kind of a hobby for me. Whenever I see different kinds of flowers around me, I always go for taking pictures, and the outcome of the pictures is always nice. It makes me feel happy to do so.

The sentence has tense inconsistency ('saw' should be 'see' to match present tense), incorrect verb forms ('it's makes' should be 'it makes'), and awkward phrasing ('to be do some' is incorrect). Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Because giving flowers symbolises at kindness and warmth welcome.

✓ Because giving flowers symbolizes kindness and a warm welcome.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used after 'symbolises'. The correct phrase is 'symbolizes kindness and a warm welcome' without 'at'. Also, 'warmth welcome' should be 'a warm welcome' for correct adjective-noun usage.

× That is why it is necessary for send.

✓ That is why it is necessary to send them.

The phrase 'necessary for send' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'necessary to send'. Also, adding 'them' clarifies the object of sending (flowers).