Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevabınızı daha doğal ve etkili yapmak için, gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalı ve cümlenizi daha akıcı hale getirmelisiniz. Örneğin, 'Yeah, yes' yerine sadece 'Yes' demek daha doğaldır. Ayrıca, koklamaktan bahsederken daha spesifik ve bağlantılı ifadeler kullanabilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance is very pleasant and it makes me feel relaxed.

Suggestion: Cümlenizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı yapmak için bağlaçlar kullanmalı ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltmalısınız. Ayrıca, zamir kullanımında dikkatli olun (örneğin, 'he's' yerine 'she's'). Detayları daha spesifik ve net ifade edin.

Example: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. She usually waters the few flowers she keeps in buckets in her living room.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve ifadeler biraz karışık. Daha doğal ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, 'out of animals' ifadesi anlam açısından net değil, onu açıklamalısınız.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers in my neighborhood because it has plenty of trees, flowers, and various animals.

Suggestion: Cümlenizi daha doğal yapmak için bazı ifadeleri düzeltmeli ve daha akıcı bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Örneğin, 'take photos with flowers' yerine 'take photos of flowers' demelisiniz. Ayrıca, son cümlenizi daha net ifade edin.

Example: I don't usually take photos of flowers, but I enjoy their scent and appearance, which is enough for me to love them.

Suggestion: Cümlenizde tekrarlar var ve bazı ifadeler yanlış kullanılmış. 'Buy or buy' yerine sadece 'buy' demelisiniz ve 'in Mother's Day' yerine 'on Mother's Day' kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha doğal hale getirmek için bağlaçlar ekleyebilirsiniz.

Example: Yes, especially on Mother's Day, people usually buy flowers for their mothers. It's a common tradition in my country.

× Smelling flowers are really good and I like also smelling good things.

✓ Smelling flowers is really good and I also like smelling good things.

The subject 'Smelling flowers' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'I like also' is awkward; 'I also like' is the correct adverb placement.

× Uh, he's uh, giving water the flowers usually.

✓ Uh, she usually gives water to the flowers.

The pronoun 'he's' is incorrect because the subject is 'my grandmother' (female), so 'she' should be used. Also, the verb form and word order were incorrect; 'gives water to the flowers' is correct.

× there are few flowers in buckets.

✓ there are a few flowers in buckets.

The phrase 'few flowers' implies almost none, which may not be intended. 'A few flowers' means some flowers and is more appropriate here.

× my neighborhood is has a lot of trees, flowers and out of animals too.

✓ my neighborhood has a lot of trees, flowers, and animals too.

The phrase 'is has' is incorrect; only 'has' is needed. Also, 'out of animals' is incorrect; simply 'animals' is correct.

× I don't usually take photos with flowers in my daily life but I like the smell and see the flowers.

✓ I don't usually take photos of flowers in my daily life, but I like the smell and seeing the flowers.

The correct preposition is 'photos of flowers' not 'photos with flowers'. Also, parallel structure requires 'seeing' to match 'liking'.

× I think it's enough for love the flowers.

✓ I think it's enough to love the flowers.

The phrase 'for love the flowers' is incorrect; the correct infinitive form is 'to love the flowers'.

× people usually buy or buy flowers to their mothers.

✓ people usually buy flowers for their mothers.

The phrase 'buy or buy' is redundant; one 'buy' is enough. Also, the correct preposition is 'for' not 'to' when giving flowers to someone.