Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and complete by avoiding incomplete sentences and adding linking words. For example, instead of ending abruptly, explain how the smell affects you. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'I love' twice.

Example: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. Their petals are very soft, and the refreshing smell always makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and unclear words. For example, do not repeat 'my sister' twice and replace 'injure' with the correct word 'feels happy'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, my sister is very fond of flowers. She loves to give flowers as gifts, and she feels happy when someone gives her flowers.

Suggestion: Try to speak more fluently without hesitation and use correct plural forms. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly.

Example: There are not many flowers around where I live, but there is a flower garden nearby where I usually take walks in the evening.

Suggestion: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use correct grammar such as 'enjoy taking photos' instead of 'enjoy to take photo'. Also, complete your thoughts and use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Example: Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of flowers in my daily life because I love their refreshing fragrance and soft petals.

Suggestion: Use correct sentence structure and vocabulary. For example, say 'people in my country send flowers on different occasions like anniversaries or proposal days'. Avoid filler words and be more specific.

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on different occasions such as anniversaries, proposal days, and other celebrations as a symbol of love.

× The petals of roses are very soft and the smell of roses very refreshing and it gives me.

✓ The petals of roses are very soft and the smell of roses is very refreshing and it pleases me.

The original sentence misses the verb 'is' after 'smell of roses' which is necessary to complete the sentence structure. Also, 'gives me' is incomplete and unclear; 'pleases me' is a better expression here to convey the intended meaning.

× She uh, she loves to gift flowers and she also injure when someone gifted her flowers.

✓ She, uh, loves to give flowers as gifts and she also feels happy when someone gifts her flowers.

The phrase 'she also injure' is incorrect because 'injure' is a verb meaning to cause harm, which does not fit the context. The correct expression is 'she also feels happy' or similar. Also, 'to gift flowers' is less common than 'to give flowers as gifts.' The verb tense 'gifted' should be 'gifts' to match the present tense context.

× There are, uh, not a lot of flower, but specifically there are some flower, uh, a, a flower garden in the area of where, uh, I live.

✓ There are, uh, not a lot of flowers, but specifically there is a flower garden in the area where I live.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when referring to multiple flowers. Also, 'there are some flower' is incorrect; it should be 'there is a flower garden' because 'garden' is singular. The phrase 'in the area of where' is redundant; 'in the area where' is sufficient.

× Yes, I really enjoy to take photo, uh, of flowers in my daily life because I really enjoy to take photos and I really love flower fragrance, refreshing of the flower, the soft flower petals and.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy taking photos of flowers in my daily life because I really love the fragrance of flowers, the refreshing scent, and the soft petals.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form '-ing' not the infinitive 'to take.' Also, 'photo' should be plural 'photos' to match the context. The phrase 'flower fragrance, refreshing of the flower' is awkward; it is better expressed as 'the fragrance of flowers, the refreshing scent.' The sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring for clarity.

× Yes, people have my country send flowers in different occasion like anniversary uh proposed day or like every occasion they send flowers as a symbol of love.

✓ Yes, people in my country send flowers on different occasions like anniversaries, proposal day, or almost every occasion as a symbol of love.

The phrase 'people have my country' is incorrect; it should be 'people in my country.' The preposition 'in' is used for location. 'In different occasion' should be 'on different occasions' because 'on' is used with days and occasions, and 'occasion' should be plural. 'Proposed day' should be 'proposal day.' The sentence structure was improved for clarity.