Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct grammar and sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and be more specific about your favorite flower and its smell. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I love flowers very much. We have a big garden at home with many flowers in pink, green, and yellow. My favorite flower is called Shamandar because it has a wonderful fragrance that I really enjoy.

Suggestion: Improve clarity by organizing your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete sentences. Be specific about why your son loves flowers.

Example: Yes, my little son loves flowers very much. He is attracted to colorful things like flowers, balls, and books. He enjoys anything that has bright and beautiful colors.

Suggestion: Make your answer more natural by correcting grammar and sentence flow. Avoid repeating previous answers and provide new details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. We have a garden at home full of flowers in various colors such as red, yellow, and pink. Among them, my favorite is the Shamanda flower because of its beautiful color.

Suggestion: Focus on clear and correct sentence structure. Avoid confusing phrases and irrelevant information. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about when and why you take photos of flowers.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of flowers. Every morning, when I go to university, I see many different types of flowers and I like to capture their beauty. Also, when I get home, I sometimes take photos of my favorite flowers in the garden.

Suggestion: Avoid unrelated words like 'Elephant' and improve sentence clarity. Use correct grammar and vocabulary to explain cultural practices clearly. Use linking words to organize your answer logically.

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers. Since we live in the Arabian region where flowers are rare and highly valued, sending flowers is a common way to express feelings such as apology or appreciation during special occasions like weddings or farewells.

× Yes, I do as and we have a garden.

✓ Yes, I do, and we have a garden.

The conjunction 'and' should be preceded by a comma to correctly join two independent clauses. The original sentence lacks proper punctuation, causing confusion.

× there is a lot of flowers, pink, green and yellow

✓ there are a lot of flowers, pink, green and yellow

'Flowers' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to agree in number.

× my favorite flower called shamandar.

✓ my favorite flower is called Shamandar.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject and complement. Also, 'Shamandar' should be capitalized as a proper noun.

× It's a smell, is a wonderful smell as I like it a lot.

✓ It has a wonderful smell, and I like it a lot.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'It's a smell' is incorrect; instead, use 'It has a wonderful smell' to describe the flower's scent.

× Yes I do my little son loves flowers a lot as he is admired to to deal with the color things like flowers, like balls, like books he likes anything with a very.

✓ Yes, I do. My little son loves flowers a lot as he admires dealing with colorful things like flowers, balls, and books. He likes anything with vibrant colors.

The original sentence has multiple issues: missing punctuation, incorrect verb form 'is admired' instead of 'admires', repeated word 'to', and incomplete phrase 'with a very'. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects grammar.

× Yes, as I mentioned, we had, We have a garden in our house.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, we have a garden in our house.

The past tense 'had' is incorrect here because the garden still exists. Present tense 'have' is appropriate.

× It's full of flowers with the various colors red, yellow and pink.

✓ It's full of flowers of various colors: red, yellow, and pink.

The phrase 'with the various colors' is awkward; 'of various colors' is the correct prepositional phrase to describe the flowers.

× And my favorite color is called Shamanda flower.

✓ And my favorite flower is called Shamanda.

The sentence incorrectly says 'favorite color' instead of 'favorite flower'. Also, 'Shamanda flower' should be 'Shamanda' as the flower's name.

× Yes I do as A and at the beginning of my day I go to university.

✓ Yes, I do. At the beginning of my day, I go to university.

The phrase 'as A and' is incorrect and confusing. It should be removed or replaced with proper punctuation to separate ideas.

× It is full of various types of flowers and I take a lot of photos with the flowers

✓ It is full of various types of flowers, and I take a lot of photos of the flowers.

The correct preposition with 'photos' is 'of' not 'with' when indicating the subject of the photo.

× and when I reached my home.

✓ and when I reach my home.

The sentence is describing a habitual action, so present tense 'reach' is appropriate instead of past tense 'reached'.

× Also I take a lot of food with my favorite color.

✓ Also, I take a lot of photos of my favorite flower.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'food' and 'color' instead of 'photos' and 'flower'. The correction aligns with the context of taking photos of flowers.

× Elephant Yes, people in my country often send flowers especially because we live in Arabian region where flowers are abandoned and highly valued.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers, especially because we live in the Arabian region where flowers are abundant and highly valued.

The word 'Elephant' is irrelevant and likely a transcription error. 'Abandoned' is incorrect; the intended word is 'abundant'. Also, 'Arabian region' should be preceded by 'the'.

× where flowers are abandoned and highly valued.

✓ where flowers are abundant and highly valued.

The word 'abandoned' is incorrect in this context; 'abundant' means plentiful, which fits the meaning better.

× Sending flower is a common way to express, apologize or show appreciation during special occasion like wedding or separation.

✓ Sending flowers is a common way to express, apologize, or show appreciation during special occasions like weddings or separations.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. Also, 'special occasion' should be plural 'special occasions', and 'wedding or separation' should be pluralized to match.