Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子，注意时态和语法，避免重复和不连贯。

Example: Yes, I love flowers very much. I live in Yunnan province, which is famous for its diverse flowers. For example, shooting flowers bloom in summer, and Banu Hua flowers bloom in winter. People here not only use flowers for decoration but also for cooking.

Suggestion: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子，注意主谓一致，并适当使用连接词。

Example: Yes, I know many people who love flowers, especially my mom. She not only grows flowers but also buys them. In Baoshang, where we live, there is a special event called the Flower Festival.

Suggestion: 回答内容混乱，信息重复且不连贯。建议先理清思路，使用简单明了的句子，避免重复和错误。

Example: Yes, I live in Baoshang, a small city in Yunnan province. It is famous for its beautiful flowers. Many people here love different kinds of flowers.

Suggestion: 回答后半部分不完整且含糊，影响表达效果。建议完整表达想法，避免语法错误和不完整句子。

Example: Yes, I often take photos and videos of beautiful flowers. I like to share them on my social media to show their beauty. For example, last time I visited a park full of flowers and took many pictures.

Suggestion: 回答中有许多语气词和重复，表达不清晰。建议减少口头语，使用完整句子，明确表达观点。

Example: Yes, people in my country often send flowers during festivals. For example, during the Spring Festival or sports events, people give flowers to friends and family as gifts.

× I really love flowers in I live in Yunnan province.

✓ I really love flowers in Yunnan province where I live.

句中“in I live in Yunnan province”结构不正确，应调整为“in Yunnan province where I live”以表达正确的地点关系。

× In Yunnan, we also ate flowers not only to put them in the vase.

✓ In Yunnan, we also eat flowers not only to put them in the vase.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时“eat”，而非过去时“ate”。

× My mom really love flowers.

✓ My mom really loves flowers.

主语是第三人称单数“my mom”，谓语动词应加-s，变为“loves”。

× In Bao Shang, we have a special festivals which called the Flowers festival.

✓ In Bao Shang, we have a special festival which is called the Flowers Festival.

“a special festivals”中“festivals”应为单数“festival”，且定语从句缺少系动词“is”。

× Yes Bongshan is I live in a small city which is located in Vietnam province.

✓ Yes, Baoshang is a small city which is located in Yunnan province where I live.

句子结构混乱，应调整为“Baoshang is a small city which is located in Yunnan province where I live.”，并且“Vietnam province”应为“Yunnan province”。

× So there are a variety of flowers people really love like like Baoshang really like.

✓ So there are a variety of flowers that people in Baoshang really love.

句子重复且结构不清，应简化为“there are a variety of flowers that people in Baoshang really love”。

× When I see beautiful flowers, I like to take photos or some videos for them and then put these photos and videos in my social media to show the beauty of them.

✓ When I see beautiful flowers, I like to take photos or videos of them and then post these photos and videos on my social media to show their beauty.

“take photos or some videos for them”应为“take photos or videos of them”，“put ... in my social media”应为“post ... on my social media”。

× For example, last time I went to the lonely and there were there is.

✓ For example, last time I went to a lonely place, and there were many flowers.

原句结构不完整且含糊，应补充完整表达。

× I know when the sporting festival, uh, come come, people like to send flowers.

✓ I know that during the Spring Festival, people like to send flowers.

“come come”无意义，应改为“during the Spring Festival”，表达时间状语。

× Sometimes they bought the flowers or the plant of flowers, uh, in my home.

✓ Sometimes they buy flowers or flower plants for my home.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时“buy”，而非过去时“bought”。

× I also, oh hash, I get the flower from my parents or my relatives in the spring festival.

✓ I also get flowers from my parents or relatives during the Spring Festival.

“in the spring festival”应为“during the Spring Festival”，且“the flower”应为复数“flowers”。