Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Try to avoid repeating similar ideas and correct minor mistakes such as 'one of the my favorite flowers' to 'one of my favorite flowers'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Example: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses, which are among my favorites. I enjoy receiving flowers as gifts, and I also keep some artificial ones at home for decoration.

Suggestion: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. For example, 'who also appreciate' should be 'who also appreciates', and the sentence about flower preferences is confusing. Try to structure your answer clearly with correct subject-verb agreement and avoid repetition.

Example: Yes, my husband also appreciates flowers. When he arrived in Canada for the first time, I welcomed him with flowers. He prefers white roses, while I like red roses.

Suggestion: Your answer provides relevant information but has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as 'I say a variety of flowers'. Use linking words like 'however' correctly and improve sentence flow. Also, be more concise and precise.

Example: I live in an apartment building surrounded by gardens where people grow vegetables and flowers. During the summer, I see a variety of flowers, but unfortunately, they disappear when winter arrives.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant but could be improved by varying vocabulary and sentence structure. Instead of repeating 'pictures', use synonyms like 'photos'. Also, try to connect ideas smoothly with linking words.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of flowers whenever I see them. I sometimes share these images with my friends on Snapchat and other social media platforms. Keeping these photos on my phone brings me joy whenever I look at them.

Suggestion: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences and errors, such as 'individuals, orphans and flowers'. Make sure your sentences are complete and your ideas are clearly expressed. Also, avoid irrelevant or unfinished statements. Try to give specific examples and reasons.

Example: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers as gifts for birthdays, weddings, or to welcome guests. I think flowers are a thoughtful and meaningful present. For example, when I first arrived in India, my husband welcomed me with a beautiful bouquet of flowers.

× Roses are one of the my favorite flowers.

✓ Roses are one of my favorite flowers.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'my favorite flowers'. 'My' already specifies the noun, so 'the' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× that's my husband who also appreciate flowers.

✓ that's my husband who also appreciates flowers.

The verb 'appreciate' must agree with the singular subject 'my husband', so it should be 'appreciates'.

× When he landed for the first time in Canada, I welcomed him by giving flowers.

✓ When he landed in Canada for the first time, I welcomed him by giving flowers.

The phrase 'landed for the first time in Canada' is awkward; the correct prepositional phrase is 'landed in Canada for the first time'.

× He love white roses as I love I prefer red rose, red roses.

✓ He loves white roses as I prefer red roses.

The verb 'love' must be 'loves' to agree with singular subject 'He'. Also, the phrase 'as I love I prefer' is redundant and incorrect; 'as I prefer' is sufficient. 'Red rose' should be plural 'red roses' to match context.

× I live in an apartment building and outside of the building there are many gardens in which people have done the gardening of vegetables and flowers.

✓ I live in an apartment building and outside the building there are many gardens where people have done gardening of vegetables and flowers.

The phrase 'outside of the building' is better as 'outside the building'. Also, 'in which' is awkward here; 'where' is more natural. 'The gardening' should be 'gardening' without 'the'.

× I say a variety of flowers during summer season, however, as the winter is coming I won't be able to see those flowers.

✓ I see a variety of flowers during the summer season; however, as winter is coming, I won't be able to see those flowers.

The verb 'say' is incorrect; it should be 'see' to describe observing flowers. Also, 'summer season' should be 'the summer season'. Commas and semicolons improve sentence clarity.

× Sometimes I send these pictures to my friends through Snapchat and other social media apps.

✓ Sometimes I send these pictures to my friends via Snapchat and other social media apps.

The preposition 'through' is less appropriate here; 'via' is more commonly used when referring to sending messages or pictures using apps.

× I love to keep pictures of flowers in my cell phone so that I can always see them and get the happiness.

✓ I love to keep pictures of flowers on my cell phone so that I can always see them and feel happy.

The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to storing pictures on a device. Also, 'get the happiness' is unnatural; 'feel happy' is more appropriate.

× Yes, in my country individuals, orphans and flowers as a gift on birthday, weddings or welcoming some guest at home.

✓ Yes, in my country, individuals often give flowers as gifts on birthdays, weddings, or when welcoming guests at home.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb. The corrected sentence adds the verb 'give' and clarifies the meaning. 'Orphans' seems out of place and is removed for clarity.

× When I landed on the India for the first time, I was given a bucket of flowers by my husband because you know I.

✓ When I landed in India for the first time, I was given a bucket of flowers by my husband because, you know, I...

The preposition 'on' is incorrect; it should be 'in India'. The sentence ends abruptly; adding commas improves readability, but the sentence remains incomplete.