Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then give two brief specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, um). Use correct vocabulary (flower, flavor -> flower; look -> looks).

Example: Yes, I love flowers. Jasmine is my favorite because of its strong, pleasant fragrance, and I also like roses because of their attractive colors and classic shape.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and add two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct verb forms and reduce hesitations. For example, say what she does, how often, and why she enjoys it.

Example: Yes, my mother loves flowers and spends a lot of time gardening. For example, she collects different seeds and plants them every weekend, and she enjoys watching the plants grow because it relaxes her.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer, then give two clear reasons using linking words (because, so). Correct phrasing (I live in the city; there is not much space). Avoid repeating phrases.

Example: Not many. I live in the city near a busy main road, so there isn't much garden space at home, and public green areas nearby are limited.

Suggestion: Answer directly then add specific conditions and frequency. Use correct tenses and link ideas (for example, but, however). Avoid unnecessary repetition.

Example: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, but not often. I usually photograph a flower only when I see a unique one or when I'm in a good mood because there are few flowers around where I live.

Suggestion: Provide a clear general statement, then give specific examples and clearer time references. Avoid hesitations and vague phrases like 'maybe' and repeated words. Use linking words (for example, especially, during).

Example: Yes, people in my city often send flowers for special occasions. For example, many send bouquets to spouses or parents for anniversaries or holidays, and flower sales increase around February for Valentine's Day.

× Yes, I do especially Jasmine Jasmine is one of my favorite flower because of its fragrance and I also like uh rose because it's looking so cute and the color of the flower uh, I actually uh, I also like a lot of flavors. Even I like to plant a lot of flavor, but I.

✓ Yes, I do. Especially jasmine. Jasmine is one of my favorite flowers because of its fragrance, and I also like roses because they look so pretty and I like the colors of the flowers. I actually like a lot of flowers and I like to plant many of them.

Errors: missing articles and plural forms (Article errors and Singular/plural issues). Use 'jasmine' lowercase as a common noun unless referring to a proper name; add periods to separate ideas; 'one of my favorite flowers' requires plural 'flowers'; 'rose' should be plural 'roses' and agree with plural verb 'they look'; 'color of the flower' -> 'colors of the flowers' for general statement; 'a lot of flavors/flower' seems confused — intended 'a lot of flowers' and 'plant many of them'. Suggestion: use correct plural nouns with determiners and break run-on sentence into shorter sentences.

× Yes, my mother, she's, uh, like gardening pretty much. And she, when she do gardening, she immense on it. Uh, when she got a chance to get more flower seed, she must ask them and collect a lot of flower seed and planted it, plant it in our.

✓ Yes, my mother, she pretty much likes gardening. And when she gardens, she immerses herself in it. When she gets a chance to obtain more flower seeds, she asks for them, collects many seeds, and plants them in our home.

Errors: subject-verb agreement and verb forms (Third person singular issue). 'She do gardening' should be 'she gardens' or 'she does gardening' because third-person singular requires -s. 'She immense on it' is incorrect verb choice and form; use 'immerses herself in it' (reflexive). 'When she got a chance' should be 'when she gets a chance' to match habitual present. 'Flower seed' should be plural 'flower seeds'; 'she must ask them' is unclear — 'asks for them' fits. 'Planted it, plant it in our' was incomplete; use 'plants them in our home'. Suggestion: use correct third-person -s, present tense for habitual actions, reflexive pronoun, and plural nouns where needed.

× Not much because I now I am living in the city, I don't have more gardens place in our home because my home is nearest to the main road. Because of that there is no enough place to plant uh, flowers and I also I don't get enough.

✓ Not many, because now I am living in the city. I don't have much garden space at my home because my house is very close to the main road. Because of that, there is not enough space to plant flowers, and I also don't get to see many.

Errors: misuse of 'there is' and quantity expressions (There be issue and Article errors). Use 'not many' for countable 'flowers' or 'not much' with uncountable 'space'; 'gardens place' is incorrect — use 'garden space'. 'My home is nearest to the main road' should be 'my house is very close to the main road'. 'There is no enough place' is ungrammatical; use 'there is not enough space'. Suggestion: choose correct 'there is/are' structure, use 'not enough', and prefer 'garden space' for meaning.

× Uh, I'm taking photos in my daily life. Sometimes I take photo when I see a unique flower or umm, it's also depends on mood. And moreover, I don't see more flowers in my daily life. I already mentioned that I'm living in a city. Because of that, there is no more flowers or some plants in.

✓ I take photos in my daily life. Sometimes I take a photo when I see a unique flower; it also depends on my mood. Moreover, I don't see many flowers in my daily life. I already mentioned that I live in a city. Because of that, there are not many flowers or plants around.

Errors: tense and countability (Present tense issue and Singular/plural issue). 'I'm taking photos in my daily life' is awkward — use simple present 'I take photos' for habitual action. 'Sometimes I take photo' needs article 'a photo'. 'It's also depends' should be 'it also depends' (remove contraction or make correct subject-verb). 'I don't see more flowers' should be 'I don't see many flowers' or 'not many'. 'I'm living' can be 'I live' for current residence as a state. 'There is no more flowers' incorrect 'there is' with plural; use 'there are not many flowers'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, correct articles, and plural agreement with 'many'.

× I think in my, in my city, a lot of people maybe send flowers for their spouse or parents when they, uh, celebrate special occasion or something else, umm, uh, during February, the flowers, uh, the main time of flowers is I think the February because that's the time of flowers, so.

✓ I think in my city a lot of people may send flowers to their spouse or parents when they celebrate special occasions. Also, during February many people send flowers because it is a popular time for flowers.

Errors: modal verb choice and prepositions (Modal verb usage and Incorrect use of prepositions). 'Maybe send' is informal; use modal 'may send' for possibility. 'Send flowers for their spouse' should be 'send flowers to their spouse'. 'Celebrate special occasion' needs plural 'occasions'. The second sentence was repetitive and ungrammatical; simplify to 'during February many people send flowers' and 'it is a popular time for flowers'. Suggestion: use appropriate modal verbs like 'may' for possibilities, correct prepositions 'to', and pluralize nouns when speaking generally.