Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is clear and relevant, but has some grammar errors, repetition and slightly awkward phrasing. Improve by using correct articles and prepositions, removing redundancy, and keeping to 2–4 concise sentences. Add one specific example or reason with a linking word.

Example: Yes, I love flowers. They not only smell lovely and look attractive, but they are also a meaningful way to show appreciation to friends and family. For example, I often buy lilies for my mother on her birthday because she loves their scent.

Suggestion: Good structure and specific detail about the friend, but watch subject-verb agreement and tense consistency. Use linking words to show reason and avoid repeating similar words. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, many people I know enjoy flowers. For instance, a former university friend loved purple roses because she believed they were the best way to celebrate her achievements and to show gratitude.

Suggestion: Your answer answers the question but is vague and contains informal phrases (“stuff related to”) and repetition. Be more specific about where flowers are available and use precise vocabulary. Limit to up to 4 sentences and use linking words like however or but for contrast.

Example: I'm not sure there are many flowers on the streets. However, you can easily buy bouquets at florists or markets in the city, while public spaces tend to have trees and shrubs rather than flower beds.

Suggestion: The response communicates the idea but has repetition, grammatical mistakes, and unnatural phrasing. Avoid repeating words, correct prepositions, and break into two sentences for clarity. Provide a concise reason and a short future intention with linking words.

Example: I used to photograph flowers when I walked around my university, but I rarely do now because I commute by metro and rarely pass flowerbeds. However, I hope to start taking pictures again when I find time to visit parks on weekends.

Suggestion: Your answer is relevant and gives multiple reasons, but contains awkward phrases (“scent flowers”, “beloved people”) and a sentence fragment at the end. Use clearer vocabulary, avoid redundancy, and combine ideas into coherent sentences with linking words such as moreover or also.

Example: Yes, sending flowers is common in my country. People give bouquets to express love and appreciation, and moreover flowers are often used to congratulate someone or offer support during difficult times.

× Yes I do. I'm a big fan of flowers, not just because they can smell really delicious and look adorable, but also because it's an special way to show or love and appreciation to those who are around us in our daily life.

✓ Yes I do. I'm a big fan of flowers, not just because they can smell really delicious and look adorable, but also because it's a special way to show our love and appreciation to those who are around us in our daily life.

Errors: 'an special' should be 'a special' because 'special' begins with a consonant sound so the indefinite article 'a' is correct (Article errors, ID 22). 'or love' is likely a typo for 'our love' — incorrect pronoun use (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). Suggestion: Use 'a special' and replace 'or' with 'our' to convey possession; read aloud to check article sound and possessive pronouns.

× I do know a lot of people who loves flowers, especially a former friend from the university.

✓ I do know a lot of people who love flowers, especially a former friend from the university.

Error: 'who loves' should be 'who love' because the relative pronoun 'who' refers to 'a lot of people' (plural), so the verb must be plural (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). Suggestion: Identify the noun the relative clause refers to; if plural, use plural verb.

× She loved roses, especially the purple ones, because for her they were the loveliest way to show her appreciation and celebrate her achievements.

✓ She loved roses, especially the purple ones, because for her they were the loveliest way to show her appreciation and celebrate her achievements.

No grammatical correction needed related to the provided list; sentence is correct. (No change made.)

× To be honest, I'm not sure. I know that you can find places where you can buy roses or any kind of flower or bouquets to give to other people, but on the streets it's not the usual.

✓ To be honest, I'm not sure. I know that you can find places where you can buy roses, any kind of flower, or bouquets to give to other people, but on the streets it is not usual.

Errors: 'or any kind of flower or bouquets' is awkwardly coordinated; use parallel structure 'roses, any kind of flower, or bouquets' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). 'it's not the usual' is incorrect idiom/usage; 'it is not usual' is correct (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). Suggestion: Keep parallel list items and use 'not usual' for general statements.

× It's more common to see trees and stuff related to.

✓ It's more common to see trees and related vegetation.

Error: 'stuff related to' is incomplete and informal; missing object for 'related to' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Suggestion: Use a noun phrase like 'related vegetation' or 'other plants' to complete the idea and avoid vague 'stuff'.

× Honestly, I used to take photos of flowers in my daily life especially when I was going out from my university, but I don't do that anymore since since I've moved on the metro I don't have the space or the opportunity to meet bed flowers on the street, so I would like to retake this activity in the future.

✓ Honestly, I used to take photos of flowers in my daily life, especially when I was leaving my university, but I don't do that anymore since I've moved and now I take the metro; I don't have the space or the opportunity to find beds of flowers on the street, so I would like to take up this activity again in the future.

Multiple errors: 'going out from my university' is unnatural; use 'leaving my university' (Sentence structure, ID 26). Repeated 'since since' is a typo. 'I've moved on the metro' is incorrect collocation; use 'I've moved and now I take the metro' or 'I moved to a place where I use the metro' (Incorrect use of prepositions/verbs, ID 11). 'meet bed flowers' should be 'find beds of flowers' (Sentence structure/pronoun use, IDs 26 and 12). 'retake this activity' is unnatural; use 'take up this activity again' (Incorrect use of verbs, ID 26). Suggestion: Break long sentences into clearer parts, correct collocations, and use standard phrases like 'used to', 'leave', 'take the metro', 'beds of flowers', 'take up again'.

× Yes, it's quite common to give flowers or scent flowers to your beloved people, not just because it's a way to show appreciation and love, but also it's a common way to congratulate and give support.

✓ Yes, it's quite common to give flowers or scented flowers to your loved ones, not just because it's a way to show appreciation and love, but also because it's a common way to congratulate and offer support.

Errors: 'scent flowers' should be 'scented flowers' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13). 'your beloved people' is unnatural; use 'your loved ones' (Incorrect use of pronouns/adjectives, IDs 12 and 13). 'also it's a common way' needs 'because' for clarity and parallelism: 'but also because' (Incorrect conjunction use, ID 16). 'give support' is acceptable but 'offer support' is more natural. Suggestion: Use correct adjective forms, natural collocations, and consistent conjunctions.

× Also encourage individuals around you.

✓ It also encourages the people around you.

Error: Fragment lacking subject and verb form; original is an imperative fragment that doesn't fit context (Sentence without a verb / Sentence structure errors, IDs 23 and 26). Suggestion: Use a full clause matching the previous sentence: 'It also encourages the people around you.'