Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, and give one or two specific details with linking words. Avoid filler sounds like "uh" and "umm."

Example: Yes, I love flowers, especially sunflowers and roses. I plan to plant some in my dorm because they brighten the room and smell pleasant, which helps me relax.

Suggestion: Use a clear topic sentence and correct tense/agreement. Organize information with linking words (for example, "also", "because"). Give specific examples about who and what they grow.

Example: Yes, both my roommate and my parents love flowers. For example, my roommate planted several pots in our dorm, and my parents grow red roses in their garden because caring for them helps them feel relaxed.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence and correct vocabulary ("grass", not "glasses"). Use a linking word to contrast (e.g., "but"). Provide one specific detail about the surroundings.

Example: Not really — I live on campus, and there are few flowers but many trees and areas of grass. However, you can still find flowers near the entrance and in the botanical garden.

Suggestion: Be concise and use correct future/ habitual verb forms. Remove fillers and combine ideas with linking words (e.g., "so"). Provide a specific example of when or why you take photos.

Example: Yes, I often take photos of flowers because I enjoy their colors and I have a camera. For example, I take pictures when I visit parks and then share them with my parents and friends online.

Suggestion: Give a clearer, natural explanation with correct grammar and varied vocabulary. Use linking words to give examples (e.g., "for example") and specify occasions when people send flowers.

Example: Yes, people often send flowers for occasions like birthdays, anniversaries or to express love. For example, many people give roses on Valentine’s Day as a romantic gesture.

× Yes, of course I really love flowers uh, such as umm, sunflowers, rose and so forth.

✓ Yes, of course I really love flowers, such as sunflowers, roses, and so forth.

The nouns 'sunflower' and 'rose' are being listed; they should be plural when speaking generally. Also a comma is needed before 'and' in a list for clarity. Suggestion: use plural form for general categories (sunflowers, roses) and separate items with commas.

× And umm, I also plan plant some flowers in my dorm.

✓ I also plan to plant some flowers in my dorm.

After the verb 'plan' an infinitive with 'to' is required ('plan to plant'). Missing 'to' causes an incorrect verb phrase. Suggestion: use 'plan to' + base verb.

× It is very beautiful and uh, the smell is very good.

✓ They are very beautiful, and the smell is very pleasant.

Referring to flowers (plural), so use 'they' and plural adjective agreement. 'Very good' is vague for smell; 'pleasant' is a more natural adjective. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun and choose precise adjectives.

× Umm my roommate love flowers which I was planted some flowers in my dorm and my parents loved too.

✓ My roommate loves flowers; I planted some in my dorm, and my parents love them too.

Subject-verb agreement: 'roommate' (singular) requires 'loves'. 'I was planted' is incorrect passive; use active past 'I planted'. 'Parents loved too' should be present 'love' for habitual preference. Suggestion: ensure verb forms agree with subjects and use active voice for personal actions.

× They planted flowers especially some red rose.

✓ They planted flowers, especially some red roses.

'Rose' should be plural 'roses' when mentioning several flowers. Also 'some' + plural noun is correct. Suggestion: use plural form when referring to multiple items.

× It is very uh feel relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel very relaxed.

Original mixes 'it is' and 'feel' incorrectly. Use 'makes me feel' to express cause and present-state feeling. Suggestion: use correct verb construction to express experience ('make someone feel').

× Well, that's not necessarily because I, I'm living in school.

✓ Well, that's not necessarily true because I'm living at school.

Missing 'true' to complete comparison. Preposition for residing is 'at school' not 'in school' for attending/residing. Suggestion: include 'true' and use correct preposition 'at'.

× In my school it's umm, uh, very few flowers.

✓ At my school there are very few flowers.

'Very few flowers' requires a plural noun and a 'there are' construction to indicate existence. 'It's very few flowers' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use 'there are' + plural noun for existence statements.

× Umm, they have a lot of trees and some glasses.

✓ They have a lot of trees and some grass.

'Glasses' is incorrect; likely intended 'grass'. Use the noun 'grass' to refer to ground vegetation. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary and singular uncountable form 'grass'.

× Yes, of course, because I really like these flowers, umm, and I have a camera so, umm, in my daily life, I will take uh, some photos and uh, these photos I will to, uh, share with my parents and friends.

✓ Yes, of course, because I really like these flowers and I have a camera, so in my daily life I take some photos and share them with my parents and friends.

Use simple present 'I take' and 'share' for habitual actions instead of 'I will take' and awkward 'I will to share'. Remove unnecessary filler words. 'These photos I will to share' is ungrammatical; use 'I share them'. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and proper verb forms without extra 'to' after 'will'.

× For example, if one person loves another person, they will get or make some flowers to send another.

✓ For example, if one person loves another, they will buy or arrange flowers to send to them.

Sentence is awkward: 'get or make some flowers' is better as 'buy or arrange flowers'. 'Send another' is missing an object; use 'send to them'. Also use singular/plural consistency. Suggestion: use clear verbs and include appropriate objects and prepositions.

× It is a very romantic and love.

✓ It is very romantic and a sign of love.

'Romantic and love' mixes adjective and noun incorrectly. Use parallel structure: 'romantic' (adjective) and 'a sign of love' (noun phrase) or 'romantic and loving' (two adjectives). Suggestion: maintain parallel grammatical forms.