Flowers— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clearer, grammatically correct topic sentence and add one specific supporting detail. Avoid filler words (uh) and incorrect pronouns. Use linking phrase to connect reason and example.

Example: Yes, I love flowers because I enjoy their fragrance and the way they brighten a room. For example, I often keep a rose by my bedside because its scent helps me relax.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence naming the person, use correct pronouns and simple sentences, and give one or two specific details about how they care for flowers. Remove irrelevant or unclear phrases.

Example: Yes, my mother loves flowers. She waters the balcony plants every morning and makes garlands for the small temple at home.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then give specific comparisons or examples. Use correct plural forms and clearer linking words (e.g., "however", "for example"). Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Example: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because my village is surrounded by green farms. However, at home we have a small balcony garden with roses and mogra (jasmine).

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural by using present simple and clear time phrases. Remove hesitations and be specific about frequency and purpose.

Example: Not every day, but I sometimes take photos of flowers when I see a particularly beautiful or aesthetic bloom, especially to share on social media.

Suggestion: Provide a clear general statement and then specific occasions. Use correct verbs (send) and concise linking phrases (for example, on, for). Avoid repeating words.

Example: Yes, people often send flowers in my country for special occasions. For example, they are commonly sent for birthdays, anniversaries, as romantic gestures, or given as welcome bouquets at events.

× Yes, I know the person who love her flowers a lot.

✓ Yes, I know a person who loves her flowers a lot.

The sentence has a pronoun and subject-verb agreement issue. 'the person who love' should be 'who loves' because 'person' is singular (subject-verb agreement -> ID 27 and third person singular -> ID 2), and 'the person' is better as 'a person' in this context. Suggestion: use 'a person who loves' and ensure the verb agrees with the singular subject. Note: Primary correction focuses on pronoun/verb agreement per the provided list.

× It's none other than to my mother because she loves flowers.

✓ It is none other than my mother because she loves flowers.

The phrase 'none other than to my mother' incorrectly includes the preposition 'to'. Remove 'to' to make the expression natural. Also 'It's' expanded to 'It is' for formality. Suggestion: omit unnecessary prepositions when identifying someone.

× He take care of the flower plant in our home balcony and see you as well.

✓ She takes care of the flower plants on our balcony and sells them as well.

Pronoun 'He' is incorrect because 'my mother' is female; use 'She'. Verb needs third person singular 'takes'. Preposition 'on' fits 'balcony' better than 'in our home balcony'. 'See you as well' is unclear; likely intended 'sells them as well' or 'sees to them as well'. I corrected to 'sells them' assuming intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure pronouns match antecedents and verbs use appropriate third-person form; choose correct prepositions for locations.

× So you do the do.

✓ So you do that.

This fragment 'So you do the do' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended 'So you do that' or 'So you do it'. Correction fixes word choice and removes repetition. Suggestion: avoid repeating filler words and use clear demonstratives.

× The mala of the gods are in our time in our home temple.

✓ The garlands of the gods are in the small temple in our home.

Original has word choice and structure problems. 'Mala of the gods' is better as 'garlands of the gods' or 'mala' if kept as a loanword. 'are in our time' is unclear; likely intended 'are in our home temple'. I rephrased to 'in the small temple in our home' to be grammatical. Suggestion: choose precise nouns and order phrases logically.

× Yes, there are a lots of flower whenever I, when I leave because in the village area there are surrounded by all the greenery, uh, greenery, So all the farm that have a one or two flower.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers where I live because the village is surrounded by greenery. Many farms have one or two flower plants.

Errors: 'a lots' should be 'a lot' or 'lots' (quantifier issue ID 14). 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'when I leave' should be 'where I live' (wrong word). 'there are surrounded' is passive and awkward; better 'the village is surrounded'. Also fix articles and pluralization. Suggestion: use correct quantifiers ('a lot of' for uncountable/ plural), ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct place words ('where I live').

× But if I talk about my home balcony, we have to, we have planted some flowers like a rose, then the a Mogro, uh, for.

✓ But if I talk about my balcony at home, we have planted some flowers like roses and a mogra (mogra).

Article issues: 'the a Mogro' contains redundant articles; use either 'a mogra' or 'mogra'. 'a rose' should be plural 'roses' when speaking of varieties. Also 'home balcony' better as 'balcony at home'. Suggestion: avoid double articles and match singular/plural nouns to context.

× Well, I'm not taking flower photo of my daily life, but whenever I uh, see the good flower and that is look like aesthetic at that time, I take a photos.

✓ Well, I do not take photos of flowers daily, but whenever I see a nice-looking flower that looks aesthetic, I take photos.

Tense and form issues: 'I'm not taking' is unnatural for habitual action; use simple present 'I do not take'. 'flower photo of my daily life' should be 'photos of flowers daily'. 'see the good flower and that is look like aesthetic' corrected to 'see a nice-looking flower that looks aesthetic'. 'I take a photos' -> 'I take photos' (remove article). Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and correct article use and adjective order.

× Yes. And I think it's a good habit to, uh, sign flower to other people.

✓ Yes. And I think it's a good habit to send flowers to other people.

Verb 'sign' is incorrect; should be 'send'. Also pluralize 'flowers' when speaking generally. Suggestion: choose appropriate verbs that match meaning.

× Sign flower to other on the special occasion like some birthday anniversary or something that is given as a love language or, or sometimes, uh, bouquet that will be given, uh, to welcoming particular host or a guest in, uh, in some events.

✓ People send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays and anniversaries as a token of love. Sometimes a bouquet is given to welcome a host or guest at events.

Multiple preposition and article errors: 'sign flower to other on the special occasion' -> 'send flowers to others on special occasions'. 'some birthday anniversary' -> 'birthdays and anniversaries'. 'given as a love language' -> 'as a token of love'. 'to welcoming particular host' -> 'to welcome a host'. Suggestion: use plural forms for general statements, correct prepositions ('to' for recipients, 'on' for occasions), and use infinitive after 'to' correctly.