Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and using correct sentence structures. Avoid redundancy and improve coherence by linking your ideas smoothly.

Example: No, I don't write much by hand because I prefer typing on my laptop. It's faster and more convenient for me to use word processing software to write notes or documents.

Suggestion: Your answer lacks clarity and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to clearly state what you like to write and why, using linking words to connect your ideas. Be specific and avoid vague expressions.

Example: I like to write notes and references on my laptop because it saves time and helps me organize important information for my studies and work. Also, it's easy to find and edit these files later.

Suggestion: Your answer is confusing and lacks clear structure. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid filler words like 'uh'.

Example: Yes, I believe writing habits will change in the future. More people prefer typing on laptops, tablets, or phones instead of handwriting because it's faster and more convenient.

Suggestion: Your answer has several grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Try to express your preference clearly with correct grammar and provide specific reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Example: I prefer typing on my laptop or tablet rather than handwriting because it saves time and allows me to easily correct mistakes. Handwriting often leads to errors that are harder to fix.

× I use the my laptop to type down on the notepad on the word file.

✓ I use my laptop to type on the notepad or Word file.

The phrase 'the my laptop' incorrectly uses two articles together. 'My' is a possessive pronoun and does not require 'the' before it. Also, 'type down on the notepad on the word file' is awkward; it is better to say 'type on the notepad or Word file.'

× So it's the easy way to write something on this.

✓ So it's the easy way to write something.

The phrase 'the easy way' is correct, but 'on this' is unnecessary and unclear. Removing 'on this' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I give reference to something on the laptop because the easy for me to save my time and I can easily type something important later to my study and work and it's the same time I can easily find out through the word file on the notepad.

✓ I refer to something on the laptop because it's easy for me to save time, and I can easily type something important later for my study and work. At the same time, I can easily find it through the Word file or notepad.

The original sentence misuses 'give reference to' instead of 'refer to.' Also, 'the easy' should be 'it's easy.' The sentence is long and confusing; breaking it into two sentences improves clarity. 'Find out through' is incorrect; 'find it through' is better. 'Word file on the notepad' is confusing; 'Word file or notepad' is clearer.

× I uh, honestly I don't really think about these things because writing with the pen is obviously changed in these these peoples give the preference to write on the laptop on tab on mobile phones with the typing I think.

✓ Honestly, I don't really think about these things because writing with a pen has obviously changed. These people prefer to write on laptops, tablets, or mobile phones by typing, I think.

The sentence has multiple issues: 'writing with the pen is obviously changed' should be 'writing with a pen has obviously changed.' 'These peoples' is incorrect; 'people' is plural without 's.' 'Give the preference' should be 'prefer.' 'On tab' should be 'on tablets.' The sentence is long and confusing; splitting it improves clarity.

× So in the future it also will be the change.

✓ So in the future, it will also change.

The phrase 'it also will be the change' is awkward. The correct future tense structure is 'it will also change.' Adding a comma after 'in the future' improves readability.

× I give the tortoise to typing on the laptop on my tab rather than the right by hand because it's helped me to save my time and easily I can type all the correct words and recorrect options easily correct my words if I wrote by the pen.

✓ I prefer typing on the laptop or my tablet rather than writing by hand because it helps me save time, and I can easily type all the correct words and correct my mistakes, unlike when I write with a pen.

'I give the tortoise to typing' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer typing.' 'On my tab' should be 'on my tablet.' 'Rather than the right by hand' should be 'rather than writing by hand.' 'It's helped me' should be 'it helps me.' 'Recorrect options easily correct my words' is unclear; rephrased to 'correct my mistakes.' 'If I wrote by the pen' should be 'when I write with a pen.'

× It's make many mistakes, sometime other.

✓ It makes many mistakes sometimes, among others.

'It's make' is incorrect; it should be 'It makes.' 'Sometime other' is unclear; 'sometimes, among others' is a better expression.