Writing— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Try to give a more detailed and natural response by explaining why you don't write a lot and perhaps mention what you would like to improve. Avoid short answers and add more context to make your answer effective.

Example: No, I don't write a lot because I feel my vocabulary is limited, which makes it hard for me to express my thoughts clearly. However, I am trying to improve by reading more books and practicing writing daily.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words to connect your ideas. Also, try to be more specific about what kind of experiences you write and why you choose to write about your emotions.

Example: I don't usually enjoy writing, but sometimes I like to write about my personal experiences, especially when I feel sad, happy, or nervous. Writing helps me process my emotions and reflect on my day.

Suggestion: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correcting grammar. Explain clearly how writing changes your emotions and why it is helpful.

Example: Yes, the things I write often change, especially my emotions. Writing allows me to express my feelings, which helps lighten my mood and makes me feel better.

Suggestion: Your answer is clear but can be improved by adding a reason why typing is better for you and linking your ideas smoothly.

Example: I prefer typing because my handwriting is not very neat, so typing helps me write faster and makes my work look cleaner.

Suggestion: Avoid repeating the same idea and try to give a more natural and concise answer. Explain briefly why you don't keep diaries and maybe mention an alternative.

Example: Honestly, I don't keep diaries because I find it hard to express my feelings in writing. Instead, I prefer talking to friends or listening to music to relax.

Suggestion: Good answer but improve by using correct grammar and linking words. Be more specific about how photographs help you record your life.

Example: I usually take photographs, especially during special occasions, to record my life. These pictures help me remember important moments and share them with my family and friends.

× No, because I don't have enough vocabulary.

✓ No, because I don't have enough vocabulary.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no changes needed.

× Honestly, I don't like to write, but sometimes I do write my experiences, like when I'm sad, happy or a little nervous in that day.

✓ Honestly, I don't like to write, but sometimes I write about my experiences, like when I'm sad, happy, or a little nervous that day.

The phrase 'do write my experiences' is awkward; 'write about my experiences' is more natural. Also, 'in that day' is incorrect; it should be 'that day' without 'in'. Adding commas improves clarity.

× Yeah, it really changed, especially my emotions because there I can express my feelings and can lightens my emotions.

✓ Yeah, it really changes, especially my emotions because there I can express my feelings and it can lighten my emotions.

The question is about things changing generally, so present tense 'changes' fits better than past 'changed'. 'Can lightens' is incorrect; modal verb 'can' should be followed by base verb 'lighten'. Also, 'there I can express' is acceptable but adding 'it' before 'can lighten' clarifies the subject.

× I prefer typing because my penmanship is not that presentable.

✓ I prefer typing because my penmanship is not very presentable.

The phrase 'not that presentable' is informal; 'not very presentable' is more appropriate in formal context. No preposition error here, but slight improvement in adjective use.

× Honestly, I don't keep Diaries because I'm not a fan of writing because I'm not good in expressing my feelings through writing.

✓ Honestly, I don't keep diaries because I'm not a fan of writing and I'm not good at expressing my feelings through writing.

'Diaries' should be lowercase unless it is a proper noun. Also, 'not good in expressing' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'good at expressing'. The sentence is improved by replacing the second 'because' with 'and' to avoid repetition.

× Taking photographs, specially during special occasions, are my other methods used to record my life and special events.

✓ Taking photographs, especially during special occasions, is my other method used to record my life and special events.

'Specially' should be 'especially' to mean 'particularly'. 'Taking photographs' is singular as a gerund phrase, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also, 'methods' should be singular 'method' to agree with singular verb 'is'.